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um i do not know what to make of this story. i have a love hate relationship with cupcakes since it makes my favorite character pinkie a murderer.
sure i made bad things happen to her in my story too but not like this.
either way i like human!ponies and the human version of their world.
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Yeah, I was going to have a forward saying how Cupcakes was both the best and worst thing to happen to MLP fanfiction (best for being easily recognized outside the fandom, worst for how dark and disturbing it can be for a first time reader).
As for what happens to her in this story... Well, I'm not entirely sure what to say on that front. You'll see Pinkie (or Pinkamena rather) at her best soon, so far you've only seen her at her worst. And thank you, I was trying to keep it close to the cannon of FiM... But that's hard to do with humans.
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It sure takes alot of work and the whole pinkamena and pinkie thing i always have to remind myself they are two different ponies. I swear i get the two mixed up since to me they are the same pony because its her full name but in this fandom is her evil alter ego. like i told someone before on their story i will try to separate the two personalities seeing as its my favorite character its hard i shouldn't let my pinkie fanboyism blind me. so you're welcome i hope to see more from this humanverse.
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Yeah, the pinkie/pinkamena thing is a bit annoying when you're dealing with both personalities. You wont be seeing the happy Pinkie personality much more in this story, but I might write a sequel if I get ok reception with this one.
So you might see more of the humanverse with the sequels too. I wana keep this one mostly in Ponyville... mostly.
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so anyways who is your favorite pony? mine is Applejack and Pinkie.
Oh cool can't wait
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and Luna. But, I have a growing appreciation for Apple Bloom.
Mines a cross up between Fluttershy
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I feel the same way about Scootaloo since i tend to gear more towards earth ponies since i think they are the most interesting out of the three pony races. I don't believe in a worst pony i think every pony is best in their own right.
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I feel the same way... Except I have a bit of a bad relationship with Braeburn, I don't know why but he just seems like a jerk to me.
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I know what you mean Braeburn just rubs me the wrong way.
Well, I finally had the time to read this story and boy...is it good! For something that's a take on Cupcakes, you had made things with a near noir atmosphere and to top it off, seemed to do well with having the characters as humans (not an easy feat). Funny how the first few chapters consist of the introduction as Colt deals with the event of Cupcakes, and how it carries on forward after it, like the possibility that Colt may had feelings for Pinkie at one time (to which no doubt Pinkie do something about it in the later story).
Surprised as how the unicorns in this story is called Scholars and seems to fit in well for the humanized world of Equestria, especially as how the villains of this universe are scholars and as well as criminally insane. The background information that you have on the story is very intriguing such as how you had Colt explain to Pinkie about such things on the train. And the choice of character is nice as how it isn't consist of mostly females and one guy, it's nice to 'even it out' with adding male characters from the show and would go as far as to introduce other Male OCs (like Colt's partner).
Now at present times, Colt tries to move away from Ponyville to start a new life and as possibly have a love interest, like Twilight 'warming' up to Colt (to which I imagine would infuriate Pinkamena as she most likely to believe that only SHE can have him...in a twisted way of course). It is sad that he has to deal Cupcakes once again with a potential wannabee, as he still believes that Pinkie is still in a asylum. It'll be interesting to see how is that Pinkie Escaped and as well as, apparently, the well being of Rainbow Dash to which I have my doubts that she's actually alive. Then again with magic being involved (for the most cases anyways).
It shall be Interesting to see how you get Pinkamena to be at her "fullest potential" in the later chapters to which I will await early for it to come it. As it is had to find a story that involves horror with a bit of detective work on the side. Don't worry about the likes/dislikes my man, people would shrug off with a wonderful complicated story that you have displayed so far and would hope that you continue to see this through as a good writing exercise. Hell I would! Anyhow hope things turns out well to you liking and wish you the best of luck!
Keep up the good work man.
~Best Regards
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Wow, that is a very long and detailed comment that I have to say, I enjoyed reading a lot
. First off, thank you for giving the time to read my story, I really appreciate you guys (this includes all the people who read my stuff). 
There is one thing I do have to clear up though, Pinkie Pie hasn't escaped yet. The person who killed Silver Spoon, let's say is a bit on the schizophrenic side and is seeing hallucinations of Pinkamena and Rainbow Dash. But don't worry, we'll be seeing Pinkie very soon
. I actually didn't think about RD coming back to life (which would've been an amazing plot point now that you mentioned it), because most of Equestria would consider it evil magic, so only the villains like Discord (he'd do it for the lulz) or Sombra (not sure why he'd do it, but it would probably have to do with crystals! lol) would venture that far.
So, thank you again for that very detailed comment, and expect the next chapter within the next couple of weeks.
-Muleicous
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What can I say, I like making long comments. It doesn't take much for everyone to do a simple comment, but I like to take it a step further with my thoughts and speculations, it gives me a good challenge anyways.
Hmm, from what it sounds like, it sounded like the killer and Pinkamena was in the same scene and her imagining Rainbow Dash, but hey that works too! As for Sombra, he could be addict to the magical substances of Crystals like a drug that made him insane, you know like that other Crystal drug *hint hint* (besides he sputters only crystals and gibberish stuff anyways
).
Aww, you tease me with such work and the next chapter won't come out for the next couple of weeks? This is the. worst. possible. thing
:acts dramatic and summons a couch to lay on:
But very well, I shall be waiting
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Now I never said it would take a couple of weeks to get done, did I?
It'll probably be done some time this week actually.
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Pfft, I see that you enjoy pulling my leg then
Either way, can't wait for your next chapter.
me: Jeez Pinkie seriously?
Pinkie: Don't call me 'Pinkie' or i'll make you into cupcakes
me: uh oh
my reaction:
Pinkie!!!
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Then my work is done.
For now...
I gotta say, this is the creepiest fic I've ever read (apart from the apparent inspiration for this, Cupcakes). That said, I like the way it's written, surprisingly. I don't read humanized fics often, but I have to admit that this one is, at the very least, tolerable. Can't seem to wrap my head around the story, though. Some parts seem a little out of place for me, and only after re-reading it do I actually start to make sense of the order. Still, though, it makes for a really good murder story. I can imagine Ms. Pinkamena with her pupils contracted to pin-prick sized dots on her face and a blood-soaked grin plastered across her crazed, twitching features, knife in hand, slowly walking toward her next victim, slowly singing a deranged version of "Smile, Smile, Smile". Creepy as hell, but makes for a good read, ironically.
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So, I'm not the one who sees the demonic 'Smile,Smile, Smile' in their head during those parts, good to know. 
But yeah, thanks for the comment. It's always good to hear criticism on my fics, especially experiments like this one.
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I don't, either, but I thought I might mention it, if only to see if you could come up wit anything of use (should the whim tickle your fancy). Basically, it's a rubbery idea that I decided to bounce off of your frontal lobe. Sorry if I left a mark.
I am actually starting to see now that pinkamena and pinkie are two different ponies entirely i read enough tumblr blogs now to get it
pinkamena is pinkie's evil half ok now thats just creepy i woudlnt want an evil half
2019719 We all have a dark side my friend, especially if you're a pink pony that can defy physics.
I wonder if Pinkie was really going to let Colty "take" her, or she was going to kill him instead.
Oh geez, how did I miss the "Day 3" update? anyhow the two chapters are quite the read, especially with cannibalism that Pinkamena had commit without any sugar or spice to make it tasty
. I am a little surprised that Colt is traumatized with the whole 'Cupcakes Incident' when he imagines the skulls begging him to free them and would go as far as visually replaced Twilight with the walking, massacred body of Rainbow Dash. However, more so that he recalls the times with Pinkie Pie that no doubt, would have loved to spend more time with her before knowing the incident, and as well as used as a good obstacle to hinder any romance that Colt may have like Twilight which is preferable then immediate romance that other stories had done. And if that's not enough, it ends with the happy murderer willing returns to her hometown to the P.D to not only turn herself in, but as well as wish to see "Colty".
At Day 4, It starts out with her talking about the Cupcakes that Colt unknowingly ate as she try to make him sexualize about it
(no comment). I can see the great fear of Pinkie for not only its pointed out about her level of insanity, but adding the fact as well for "Pinkie Pie being Pinkie Pie" as she can do things without much explanation as how she did in the show; mixing these two fact can make Pinkamena more unpredictable and (in my mind) horrifying character then her original counterpart as how she can easily kill anyone with her defying methods with such ease.
I can see a lot of build-up tension between Pinkamena and Colt, as not only to this day that she still wants Colt to this day, but even he want her as well! Interesting show of character that's for sure, but I can't help but wonder why despite them being friends before (as how chapter 1 stated), that she won't allowed Colt to call her by old name of Pinkie Pie. It shall be interesting to how how Colt's love-life goes around as the situation continues as not only Pinkie Pie haunts his mind, but Twilight wishes to aid him as a friend which may bloom into something more over time, hopefully Pinkamena won't catch a whiff of this.
as for the ending, the new killer had a relationship with Zecora before gutting her and used her bodily parts as cooking parts...wow, I have to say, talk about ending you lover's life for in sake of 'finishing the job'. Although I would have to question the nature of their relationship, like how it came to be, I am curious as to what is 'the usual' that the killer needed that Zecora has provided for sometime. I guess we'll find out soon enough.
Anyhow, keep up the good work man! it's been a good read
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Unlikely, she wouldn't make false promises (since it would be like Pinkie Pie breaking her Pinkie Promise, despite the fact that she didn't make one) just so that she can kill Colt a that time, if she could have done so at other times before with her abilities to defy things like the show.
2035964 Well, when you think about it. She would actually go with it. Funny thing is, I was pondering about that my entire time at school and it hit me that I shouldn't really try and think about it since it's "Pinkie Pie being Pinkie Pie."
I like this story, a story that is grimdark and makes a good use out of the Cupcakes settings. I enjoy the drama you have laid out so far, I hope to see more of your work soon.
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You just might, I started a new job so I have a little less time to work on chapters, but I pan on getting a new one out before the end of the month.
Okay...Pinkamina! I love cannibalism and i love cupcakes. Can you give me some cannibalized cupcakes? They seem yummy.