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ItsAllGooood


Lets see if this goes anywhere...

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Dexter is a pony with a terrible secret.
Beneath his normal exterior, there resides a Darkness he must continue to feed...

Dexter/MLP crossover.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 37 )

Dexter in Ponyville. Why hasn't anybody done this before? I love it so far :rainbowkiss:

*whistles* Wow. I can tell this is gonna be good, in some strange dark murderous way. I don't watch Dexter, but I know enough about it to be able to say....Good job. You've just gotten a tracker.

One of my favorite shows, ponified? And done well? Me gusta and tracked.

152378 There are actually two others. Darkly Dreaming Dash with Rainbow Dash as Dexter Link

And then there's My little Serial Killer with Daymos as Dexter Link

I currently track these two but they don't update nearly often enough :fluttershysad:. I hope this story updates a little more frequently, I love Dexter/Pony crossovers :pinkiehappy:.

Also good Prologue, I really liked it :heart:

Ah i love myself a good insanity story, tracked.

Looks good, looks good. I always enjoyed the Dexter character. There are so many parallels between him and I, sans the murderous need of course. I'll certainly be tracking your story.

i noticed that you had dexter say" i could never love him as a daughter. Is he supposed to be a girl, or is this a typo?:derpyderp1:

152966
Oops, lol.
That certainly missed the proof read.
Thx :)

This actually feels like I'm reading an episode.

Keep up the good work.

Wait, why is this not Mature rated again? That's kind of a red flag considering the source material........:ajsmug:

Son of a . . . I was on the fence about writing a Dexter fic myself, only with Twilight as Dexter and the rest of the cast working on the police force. So I swing by here and search for Dexter to see if it's been done. And it turns out someone already started one TODAY. There goes my plan. Well, I'm gonna to ahead and read this one anyway.

I like what I see.

Dexter pony really?:moustache:

Ah, the adventures of Dexter pony. Y'know, I was a bit worried that this wouldn't involve the main cast in some way (That'd it be set in Manehattan), but a smile made it's way on my face when I read:
"Welcome to Ponyville."

And Dexter is going to have a bit of a surprise party for him. Can't wait to see how that goes. Keep up the awesome work!

It's been, what, 8 months?

Whatevs, still a good chapter.:pinkiecrazy:

so wait the waitress was the murder and cherllie wasernt i bet this is guna go somewhere cupcake wise am i right?

Thank you, I needed that. You write well, albeit a bit too rushed. Still, I can't wait to see where this is heading. :pinkiesad2:

Dexter is best pony.
That is all.

721861
Thanks :)

When you say rushed,do you mean some parts are hastily written and don't read that well, or that I don't give certain elements or plot progressions enough attention.
And which bits in particular?

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The latter one. The fact that one of the first ponies Dexter bumps into happens to be a killer and that he finds it out in such a short time is a bit unrealistic. I understand that you wanted to put some action early on. You could have given her more noticeable characteristics that would have made Dexter's interest more justified.

Of course, this will be more dificult unless Dexter finds his way into the police or something. It seems in every story, the protagonist has something, either a convinient job or skill, that allows him/her to find killers (or even kill others) without being caught. If you wish, you can also NOT do this in order to give a completely different vibe to the story, even if it makes you relinquish longer mysteries or hunts.

I will be patiently waiting for the next update.:twilightsmile:

you said that he studies HUMAN anatomy. shouldnt he study pony anatomy?
:rainbowhuh:

Oh, and by the way, if you need a prereader (and no offense, I think you do) I would be willing to preread for you, and tell you about any grammer and spelling errors you have.

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That sounds cool :pinkiehappy:
And thx for the point out.
That was a real derp on my part. :derpyderp2:

741413If your interested in some help, feel free to e-mail me. ajmorris2012irc@gmail.com. Ever since graduation, I have been SOOOOOOOOOOOOO bored. I have nothing but free time, and I would love to help. And dont worry about derping a little bit, your only (puts on sunglasses) HUMAN!
YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH.:yay:

Oh boy! I hope Cheerilee's the love intrest in this. I love Cheerilee!

This.. is the most beautiful piece of literature I will probably ever see. Dexter in Equestria!?? Squeee!!:yay: I'm so happy!! I've read the books seen the tv show and now its on here!! :rainbowkiss: This is gonna be awesome, just don't do any Cupcakes crossover and ill be soooo happy.

So is this good... and WILL YOU EVER UPDATE IT?! WHERE DID YOU GO?

The body! Where the hell is it??! :flutterrage: Oh my God I wanna know so bad. And his tools who took them!? God I love this freaking story :rainbowkiss: It has Dexter in it. Nuff said. :pinkiehappy:

Awesome story, I love Dexter and Season 7 has been good thus far.

The body is gone, Dexter's a bloody mess and there's some sort of rapist on the loose, too!
Wow, this feels just like a real episode. Except we have to wait 3 months for the next one!

...Jokes aside, this was actually incredibly good. The characters, the way the mane six was introduced... I didn't feel like anything was too much or too little, it was just right. Worth the wait.
Did notice something, though, that you might want to fix ASAP:

He had a dark blue like the night sky

That was, fortunately, the only thing that made me pause and scratch my head. "'Dark blue' what?". There were other less minor errors here and there, but nothing major. All it needs is some polish and a pre-reader, and you've got yourself a shining, clear diamond of a story.
Keep it up, ItsAllGoood. Keep it up.

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Fixed.
And thanks for the kind words.
With any luck, the next one'll be out quicker :pinkiehappy:

look at what i fund while looking for crossovers! i know this is late and all but will you ever contiue this story? it seems good and all... if you are still alive ANSWER ME!

another great story dead.

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Do you ever intend to update this?

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