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DEAD BODY RAPE INBOUND
something tells me im going to be seein you around alot.....
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1682577 Good job. Have a round of applause.
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LOL!
I'm curious to see how long he can deny his own guilt.
He never spared the guy he killed so much as a thought. Don't think about whether you can forgive Rarity - hope that once she finds out what you did she'll find it in her heart to forgive you.
Ok, I am curious enough that I shall be following this story.
This is truly a fucked up story.
So he's killed two ponies now, serial killer look out!
Ah hell...
This is gettin rather fucked up!
Well, as Dwight Yokum sang about, maybe little sister won't do what big sister did lol
Another good, and yet most darkest story I ever readed.
(sobs) friendship is DEAD!!!!
nicely written but.....oh god WHY!!
This thing is just all over the place with random violence and now a magic possessed ring. There is barely any continuity. It seems more like words vomited onto the page by a madman than anything else.
I feel the need to add a comment now. Firstly, I'm sorry that it's fucked up. I'm sorry, but that's just how I write.
Like Alondro said, maybe I am a madman, but if I where, I wouldn't know. And I'd like to adress some things he said as well.
Yes, there's a lot of violence coming out of nowhere, but there is a point to it. And yes, maybe my continuity is shit, and I'm sorry about that.
The ring that's been here since the second chapter isn't just some random plot.. thing, it's what everything has been building up to.
And after this point in the story, everything really goes downhill. For everyone.
This story is fantastic, I'm surprised that this has not received more attrition then it has already. The way you depict emotion is just unbelievable on how deep of a impact they have, from joy to a void of absolute darkness with nothing but dread and despair that bring on a sick feeling within that almost seems like pain but is not.
The character development is great, a bit mysterious and definitely surprising at times, but good overall. The plot is good so far and very entertaining, though dark but still a pleasant read non the less. Definitely like the situation that is going on between Luna,Celestia and Dust, for you can go many ways with this, hell I wouldn't be surprised if there is some kind of reference to "fight for the new luner republic" type of deal in here.
The only problem I have with the story is a grammar or spelling error that slips in know and then, but other then that your set. Though I still think this should still have more votes or comments,it truly is a same on how most good story's can go completely under the radar, be under appreciated ,or avoided for very minor details and its disturbing on how many people can act so harsh or bias on this fandome, but then again it is still young compared to other fandomes that have been around for ten to twelve years, oh well in do time.
Anyways that is all I have to say and shall be waiting for your next chapter to be released.
I'm not sure what to make of this... mainly because I'm not sure what's actually happening.
Is that Lunar Republic part a dream of his? Why is Celestia suddenly an evil racist tyrant? What about his claims to have "dealt with" Twilight? If it's true and he actually hurt Twilight... that's not something Luna will forgive. She owes everything to Twilight and her friends; her life, her chance at happiness, everything. There wouldn't even be a Luna without Twilight Sparkle.
Even so, I can't tell what's real. The Dust visiting Celestia and the one with Luna are completely different people. All in all, I am confused.
Your welcome for the comment, I do love a good story now and then so it was the least I could do. It also seem I might of accidently guessed what would happen next, judging from the title of your new chapter, so yay one point for me if correct. Though sadly I will have to wait till late tonight or tomorrow night to read it for I am in the U.S Air Force and usually vary busy, so like they say "service before self".
Well I got to go know and sorry if I don't answer back for a while, I usually don't comment unless something catches my eye and very picky when it comes to choosing what I comment on. Anyways before I forget, I had no idea you where a new author and from Sweden you didint even seem like a new author, there are so few people like that on most fandoms. Got to go before I am late.
Well this is interesting, supposedly killed another of the mane six, pretty much proposed to Luna as well as start a possible civil war. All in all I say he's had one hell of a day
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Well, Derpsby, confusion IS the main point of this chapter.
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Aye, I figured^^
DId Jonny Cash sing Heart of Gold? I have never heard him do it. I thought it was Crosby, Stills and Nash who did it.
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Yeah, he did a cover on it. But of course, Dust might not now that it's not his song, haha
I shall have to look it up, If there is a place to hear it, it would be youtube. I do enjoy listening too Cash sing lol
Alt. Title: Luna And Rarity Smoke Dust
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Haha, good one
I am interested with what he will do with this new knowledge, and what further roles the Void Seekers will play in this.
DAMMIT DUST DON'T YOU DARE DIE ON HER! IF YOU DO I AM GONNA SIC PINKIE ON YOUR ASS!
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Damn... poor No-hope. He cares deeply for someone who has been rendered incapable of caring back. And he blames himself, for not being there to protect her.
Regelius seems to be a pretty decent chap, if I do say...
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More than that, I'd say. It takes a special type of courage to plead for the life of a murderer. Let's not forget: As far as we know, amongst other atrocities Dust killed Spike and crippled Twilight Sparkle. Regelius has absolutely no rational reason to want to see this man saved.
It might also be a setup for revenge; to give him a taste of his own medicine. We'll just have to wait and see.
WOW! I can see why you expected to receive a shitstorm for this chapter. It was powerful though.
1875057 Yeah, I'm surprised I haven't been drowned in dislikes yet, lol. But I'm guessing that might come in the future..
1875075 Won't get a dislike from me... I do not follow into the philosophy that you "can't kill this pony or that pony... In the real world, people die, and if a pony dies, I look at it as being part of realism.
Also, if it is part of the plot to the story, then it does belong. You have a good story here... do not change it just because some may not like what happens. Write what your creative mind has come up with for the story. It is YOUR story that I wish to read. I personally do not care what others "think" your story should be.
Goodnight... this reader/writer/biker/gamer must go to bed... it is 4:30 in the morning, and I am tired lol
Great story. My biggest draw to this story is that, no happy ending can exist(From the current story so far). So many stories depend on a happy ending, but instead this story is filled with pain and suffering, interspersed with moments of happiness. Please, write more, this is a wonderful story that i can believe more than some of the episodes of the show.
1875177 Thanks for the support man, It's nice to know what you people think. And you are right, even though the ponies stand for basicly everthing positive in life, that's not how life works. There's a qoute I think of whenever I write stuff like this: "Suffering is a part of life. Either you learn to deal with it or you'll go under."
One point in this chapter made me give it a wtf look.
Actually, more like two hundred something thousand years
1885230 Sorry, I must be really tired or just plain dumb at the moment, because I'm not sure what you're getting at, lol. Have you read the rest of the chapters, or just this? We humans have only been around for 2.000 years, at least since we started counting
edit: Disregard this comment, I was a clueless idiot at the time...
This is as fucked up story and I like it vodka for all my comrades
All hail queen Luna and king Dust!
WOW!!! Very bloody! Then again, combat is never a clean affair.
They need to die.
Both of them. They need to die.
Equestria cannot take monsters like them. They need to die. I just hope Equestria will see that, and rise up to finally, finally rid the world of these abominations.
Celestia will now rest next to her most faithful student and next to her will be spike.
What will happen next I wonder? only time will tell now.
Damn... And thus begins the Lunar Empire
Really pinkie pie was there holy hell where are the cupcakes.
Mmhmm Celestia flavored cupcakes sounds good
What the fuck well at least he's with Luna and stardust and Celestia and twilight and rarity and spike and no-hope and well that's all I can remember
Heh. And here I was, all ready to amend my earlier statement about them a little; about them needing to die... I couldn't do it in time before this chapter came out. Mea Culpa. However, this is things coming full circle.
It's a powerful end. It's fitting. Personally, I think you've done well with it.
Damn... that is a sad ending.
So, got plans for another story?
Well.....shit now I'm slightly depressed
. Wonder what Equestria would if both princesses died, Oh god Blueblood as ruler! 
oh my fucking god i loved this story im now depressed but it was worth it
lol hello every one... dark days for dark stories... having a great time reading this lol. Ok here is the thing there is indeed a little of random violence here, and to such there is little build up, work on that and it would be more catchy