1875075 Won't get a dislike from me... I do not follow into the philosophy that you "can't kill this pony or that pony... In the real world, people die, and if a pony dies, I look at it as being part of realism.
Also, if it is part of the plot to the story, then it does belong. You have a good story here... do not change it just because some may not like what happens. Write what your creative mind has come up with for the story. It is YOUR story that I wish to read. I personally do not care what others "think" your story should be.
Goodnight... this reader/writer/biker/gamer must go to bed... it is 4:30 in the morning, and I am tired lol
Great story. My biggest draw to this story is that, no happy ending can exist(From the current story so far). So many stories depend on a happy ending, but instead this story is filled with pain and suffering, interspersed with moments of happiness. Please, write more, this is a wonderful story that i can believe more than some of the episodes of the show.
1875177 Thanks for the support man, It's nice to know what you people think. And you are right, even though the ponies stand for basicly everthing positive in life, that's not how life works. There's a qoute I think of whenever I write stuff like this: "Suffering is a part of life. Either you learn to deal with it or you'll go under."
I never thought I would see a story that makes all of its main characters hateable. Dust is a selfish, murderous psychopath who obviously doesn't regret his actions, and he has become one of my least favorite characters. Sorry, but I'm done.
WOW! I can see why you expected to receive a shitstorm for this chapter. It was powerful though.
1875057 Yeah, I'm surprised I haven't been drowned in dislikes yet, lol. But I'm guessing that might come in the future..
1875075 Won't get a dislike from me... I do not follow into the philosophy that you "can't kill this pony or that pony... In the real world, people die, and if a pony dies, I look at it as being part of realism.
Also, if it is part of the plot to the story, then it does belong. You have a good story here... do not change it just because some may not like what happens. Write what your creative mind has come up with for the story. It is YOUR story that I wish to read. I personally do not care what others "think" your story should be.
Goodnight... this reader/writer/biker/gamer must go to bed... it is 4:30 in the morning, and I am tired lol
Great story. My biggest draw to this story is that, no happy ending can exist(From the current story so far). So many stories depend on a happy ending, but instead this story is filled with pain and suffering, interspersed with moments of happiness. Please, write more, this is a wonderful story that i can believe more than some of the episodes of the show.
1875177 Thanks for the support man, It's nice to know what you people think. And you are right, even though the ponies stand for basicly everthing positive in life, that's not how life works. There's a qoute I think of whenever I write stuff like this: "Suffering is a part of life. Either you learn to deal with it or you'll go under."
Dude, you killed twilight.
ALRIGHT! THAT'S IT! IM SICK OF YOU KILLING OFF ALL OF THE MAIN CHARACTERS! I'M DONE WITH THIS STORY!!
You're probably gonna kill Celestia too now. Ima stop reading this, and if you wanna know why, fuck you. That's why.
I never thought I would see a story that makes all of its main characters hateable. Dust is a selfish, murderous psychopath who obviously doesn't regret his actions, and he has become one of my least favorite characters. Sorry, but I'm done.