What the fuck well at least he's with Luna and stardust and Celestia and twilight and rarity and spike and no-hope and well that's all I can remember

Heh. And here I was, all ready to amend my earlier statement about them a little; about them needing to die... I couldn't do it in time before this chapter came out. Mea Culpa. However, this is things coming full circle.

It's a powerful end. It's fitting. Personally, I think you've done well with it.

Damn... that is a sad ending.

So, got plans for another story?

Well.....shit now I'm slightly depressed . Wonder what Equestria would if both princesses died, Oh god Blueblood as ruler!

oh my fucking god i loved this story im now depressed but it was worth it

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2056940 That bad, huh?

2056979 its a good story, don't get me wrong, I just don't like his 'deeds'

2056993 Well, that's the point. He's not a hero or a likeable character, just a man driven too deep into his own madness and lust. I'm actually working on a sequel right now

2135910 Maaaybe.. Just couldn't help myself, I love the idea of a masive structure of glass, and the sound it would make as it cracks

3841051 LOL! That comment made my day!
It's fiction and if you can't handle that, you should not even sit here. it's just a cartoon, colorfull, minihorse that dies, it's not like it is your family xD

i don't think ill be reading this story.
i went stupid and read some of the comments.
so you killed most of the elements huh?
yea, nope. not for me sorry.

4115513 Just two of them

See, this is what I want more of; people actually explaining why they dislike something in a calm and effective manner. That's what I like to see.

But I'll admit, this story sucks. A lot.

6818156 I don't blame you, I dislike him too, hell, I dislike the entire story by now. Although it's the amulet that makes him do all these terrible deeds. It's slowly corrupting him, turning him into a monster.

I hope that his brother is more likable in the story he's in, at least.