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The Unknown Brony
My username says it all :p I AM A BRONY AND I AM PROUD!!!
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No
1724136
I agree with that statement.
But let me add something else...
Eddie
1724136>>1724148
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1724160 YES!
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I looked at the chapter title and couldn't resist.
1724136 YES OR GTFO
YES A SEQUEL! Don't listen to any haters or take note of the dislikes. Focus on those who like to see new chapters and those who actually like these. MOAR! :D
1724160
That, is why you are best pony.
Eddie
1725024
thank you
this has a lot more promic than most
1724148
dont agree with you but love that pic
1725010 I guess I'll GTFO then
...........whats the point of commenting you don't want to read this.......
1726558
I second this!
1727111
it funny be cas he is an ashole that cant exept that nopony likes hi
1726439
g0 g37 4 1if3 y0u l0053r
1726558
love that pic
1729072 I can still read that, asshole.
1726558 And I commented because I did read it, well at least the first 800 words, and made the safe assumption that the story was written like Sunday night garbage.
That is why I commented. I didn't say anything else, because for some reason, giving criticism seems to piss immature people off. Either way, I got a snappy reply from the author, which destroyed all courtesy I had in my heart for him.
Sorry if I'm coming off as an asshole, but I have been dealing with shit like this all day, and it is getting really annoying, especially after toruto told me to get a life in idiot text.
1729124. You had no courtesy for me to begin with.
and thanks for that garbage comment
1729106
h4
1729124
and its leet you mother fucker
1729124
and i lover that pic
hope some big stalen ruts your mom
I in no way said anything specifically calling you out Sorren, merely stating the fact how half assed redundant comments in general sours the enjoyment at the end of chapters for others so to speak.......
1729124 And did you ever stop to think about the story!? Most of my comments aren't even about feedback from the story! There just random sh*t!
1729955 I apologize to the only courteous on here.
Now things get nasty.
1729851 You are nothing but an immature little sack of idiocy. I doubt you're any older than thirteen. So take you Zoi--created image of a gary-stu OC and learn to have some respect for people who don't even try and start things with you in the first place.
And learn to spell.
Now to tone down the nastiness a little.
1729977
I'm not going to candy-coat anything here.
You want to try to avoid using bold of speech in stories because it is an incredible eyesore. Also, your overuse of an ellipsis is painful. Besides, an ellipsis is three dots, ... no more, no less. Anything more or less and it's wrong. KSHHHHHHHHOOOOH!!!!!! avoid that at all times. Avoid capslock, avoid having more letters than you need and avoid trying to spell sounds out with words.
"Get ready to-" this requires an em dash, which is --
"HEY WAKE UP SLEEPY HEAD!" More capslock. A simple ! will do fine.
You always want to spell out numbers because they are big and ugly in the middle of a story. Generally as I read down, I am seeing more of an assortment of these reoccurring issues and errors and all the capslock makes me wont to go club a baby seal. You confuse past and present tense quite often and you need a better balance between dialogue and flavor text.
Overall, the whole thing is choppier than the New York bay when Sandy hit.
Anything else you need to know?
1730062 I understand and acknowledge all of your reasons....but my stories are supposed to read like a comic with capslock, sound effects, and other stupid crap...Without it, my stor
ies wouldn't be the same
1730430 Okay then. I think I've caused enough hell here... I'll just slink away.
Sorry.
1730458 It's kool brah, sorry for the weird peeps in my comments giving you sh*t too....
NO HARD FEELINGS BRO
1730062
it funny becus im 17
but i like your atitude your cool in my book
quik question do you get like this alot
1730062
and i will get new pic
1730463
the story is lovly daling
9.2 out of 10
1731758 I do get this a lot. And sorry for the nasty reply. I'm a real hothead when people insult me.
1732392
still its leet and it a ligit typing stile
and my spelling is bad becus i do this from my xbox
but i like you pissed of
k33p i7 up
1732460 I've never heard that one before! XD
...........celly you would..........THNX!
Luna...
ok.
1736004
....It all leads up to stuff.....
don't be all unimpressed
Twill be funny! MOAR!
bu7ifu1 k33p i7 up
8.9 out of 10
A wild Princess Luna appears!
Orion used 'eat-out'.
IT'S SUPER EFFECTIVE!!!
Princess Luna has joined the herd!
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Shifts? Orion you got a job! AND IT BLOWS!
YEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!
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wow
I came here for a ha
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Take on me take me on
And for spongebob
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I don't know what to say about this chapter, but i want moar
Oh, and first
...
yeah good chapter i always have a soft spot for pregnancy stories and this is a mixed one... i don't even know what i'm talking about anymore...
ummmm. sure why not?
also, derpy'sfacewhenyoucameinsideher: 
holy crap that was really short
Meh, better to have one chapter than no chapter I guess! ^w^
Sega Genesis he.
reminds me of a song.