I am calling it now, at first they will think Twilight brutally killed Crysalis and kept her remains as a trophy, leaving Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy very disturbed in regards of their bookish adorkable friend, and Pinkie will not help the case by intentionally scaring them by "going Cupcakes" on them
So she only wants the Elements and Big Mac. Did she already explain all of what's happening to Spike? It's been a while since I read any part of this story. Because if Spike is still in the dark then she had better have a good reason for not having Owlowicious invite him.
Yay another chapter! I have been looking forward to this for a while. I'm so proud of you for spelling Owlowiscious' name right. Nopony I know ever gets it right. Seeing changeling Pinkie was interesting, and I think you did really well on getting her down. As always, I await the next chapter eagerly. Keep up the amazing work!
2454820 I'll tell you a secret. I googled the pet names from the series, and then just copy pasted it, because fuck trying to remember how to spell it.
Twilight: ... In conclusion, I'm the same as I've always been, only now I carry the fate of a nearly extinct species of emotional parasites on my withers, and I carry the mind of Equestria's number one enemy in my head.
Applejack: Ah still think it's mighty strange that the Changeling Queen is good friends with the Element of Honesty. But why'd you tell me to bring Mac with me, anyhow?
Big Mac: Yeah, why'm Ah here?
Twilight: Oh right! Big Mac, back when I helped out in the orchard, I got you to rut me in the barn, then I erased your memory so you wouldn't get in trouble.
Big Mac: Whut?
Twilight: And you got me pregnant with a clutch of Royal Changeling Guards. You're a father of eight, now!
Big Mac: ... Whut?
Twilight: And you're addicted to my Changeling Queen Love-Juice. You'll die if you don't have sex with me regularly. At least until I wean you off of me, that is.
Big Mac: ... ... ... ... Whut?
Applejack: You fucked ma' brother, Twi?
Pinkie: Why do you sound mad at Twilight? It's not like she's the only one. I fucked Big Mac!
Rainbow: Yeah! I fucked Big Mac, too!
Rarity: I've slept with Big Mac on occasion.
Fluttershy: Oh, I did, too! Please don't be mad...
Applejack: Aw, dammit, Mac! Why you gotta be so sexy?!
Twilight: Hey, don't feel bad, AJ! If it makes you feel any better, I have a sexy big brother you can bang.
I am calling it now, at first they will think Twilight brutally killed Crysalis and kept her remains as a trophy, leaving Rarity, Applejack, Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy very disturbed in regards of their bookish adorkable friend, and Pinkie will not help the case by intentionally scaring them by "going Cupcakes" on them
A bucket of Chrysalis? Sounds tasty.
1669936 So...there's not actually any furniture?
Talk about false advertising...
Can I have that bucket of Chrysalis goo when Twi's done? I need it for...... things.
I think this would have been more interesting without the mandatory sex, but I won't downvote because it seems to be written well.
So she only wants the Elements and Big Mac. Did she already explain all of what's happening to Spike? It's been a while since I read any part of this story. Because if Spike is still in the dark then she had better have a good reason for not having Owlowicious invite him.
2450438
She's assuming Rarity will bring him when she comes over. Which she probably will.
actually, this wasn't bad. so, just to be sure, there's not gonna be anymore sex?
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Not blatantly on screen, but definitely talked about and had off screen.
2451153
'sigh' as i feared. well, at least the story is still really good.
This is good.
Also, I would like some Chrysalis too. *pulls out a doggiebag*
2451153 perhaps I can get someone to help write those scenes?
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That'd be up to you. Ghost-written clop is probably better than badly written clop.
"Wow, my voice is legion, for it is many! Neatoriffic!"
An enjoyable transitory chapter. Looking forward to seeing how Twilight handles four concerned friends with very different temperaments.
Well that was... interesting. I like it (though I confess I skipped the clop).
2451419 welp I got one writer interested in helping you out. ;)
2453611
Well, tell 'em to write somethin' and message me and I'll see if it's up to par :P
Yay another chapter! I have been looking forward to this for a while. I'm so proud of you for spelling Owlowiscious' name right. Nopony I know ever gets it right. Seeing changeling Pinkie was interesting, and I think you did really well on getting her down. As always, I await the next chapter eagerly. Keep up the amazing work!
2453695
He's thinking about it, but some other projects are in his way. xD
2454820
I'll tell you a secret.
I googled the pet names from the series, and then just copy pasted it, because fuck trying to remember how to spell it.
You know, you could always post the clop in a separate story
2455776 Because fuck that.
Twilight: ... In conclusion, I'm the same as I've always been, only now I carry the fate of a nearly extinct species of emotional parasites on my withers, and I carry the mind of Equestria's number one enemy in my head.
Applejack: Ah still think it's mighty strange that the Changeling Queen is good friends with the Element of Honesty. But why'd you tell me to bring Mac with me, anyhow?
Big Mac: Yeah, why'm Ah here?
Twilight: Oh right! Big Mac, back when I helped out in the orchard, I got you to rut me in the barn, then I erased your memory so you wouldn't get in trouble.
Big Mac: Whut?
Twilight: And you got me pregnant with a clutch of Royal Changeling Guards. You're a father of eight, now!
Big Mac: ... Whut?
Twilight: And you're addicted to my Changeling Queen Love-Juice. You'll die if you don't have sex with me regularly. At least until I wean you off of me, that is.
Big Mac: ... ... ... ... Whut?
Applejack: You fucked ma' brother, Twi?
Pinkie: Why do you sound mad at Twilight? It's not like she's the only one. I fucked Big Mac!
Rainbow: Yeah! I fucked Big Mac, too!
Rarity: I've slept with Big Mac on occasion.
Fluttershy: Oh, I did, too! Please don't be mad...
Applejack: Aw, dammit, Mac! Why you gotta be so sexy?!
Twilight: Hey, don't feel bad, AJ! If it makes you feel any better, I have a sexy big brother you can bang.
Applejack:... ... ... Whut?
2465373
Holy shit, I can't stop laughing!!!
So many lawls, I need more to read xD
2465373 you sir gave me enough to think about for the next chapter now xD
2465373 just...what.....that makes sense except for the last thing twilight said...
can't wait to see more
I'm sorry, did she say REMAINS? So, you keep the rotting carcus of a dead changeling in a bucket in your room? Nasty.
2537799
Well, not rotting, per say. From what I read, Chryssy's body was liquified.
2537799
Isn't that what everyone does?
Mildly surprised it hasn't just dried up actually...