Firstly it doesn't help that I was playing a starwars game before reading this... But the last few lines of this chapter had me in tears while earning a few strange looks from some of my friends and family. Great chapter none the less keep it up.
1813258 Are you sure you wanna know? Because my methods are so advanced you'd need multiple doctorates in order to fully comprehend the genius behind them. You really want to know? Okay, but don't say I didn't warn you.
Google image search for twilight sparkle changeling, right there on the first page. I don't know why they call them pages, they don't cover anywhere near a page. I suppose it's supposed to be mobile-friendly.
Mackintosh addicted to Twilight's "honeypot" and now with the possibility of becoming a Changeling King (AND TWILIGHT HIT THE JACKPOT WITH THIS!)... Check Cameo crossover with the "Scootaling" Story... Check Rarity aparently slowoly also addicted to Twilight's "honeypot" but will take her urges with Spike... Check Pinkie, bwing Pinkie and willing to become a SELF-AWARE changeling drone in Twilight's new hive (and totally liking the way of transformation)... NOW CHECK!
All what we need now is Rainbow Dash crashing into Twilight's bedroom window, Twilight and Pinkie restaining her and convince her to have a threesome with them so Twilight could finally "taste the rainbow" and also have Pinkie's "pinkie pie" for herself while them have also a good taste of her sweet honeypot
1813279 There's a scootaling story? say what? I just had the idea to make scootaloo a changeling since she just showed up in ponyville one day with no fanfare and no family...
1813402 Indeed, is actually called "Scootaling" and is exactly Scootaloo being actually an exiled Changeling from Crysalis hive, and adopted by Zecora, however Applebloom and Sweetie Belle actually discovered her secret (And Sweetie Belle actually spreading the news to all the foals of the school), seach it by writting "Scootaling", is here on FIMFictoon and was also in the now gone(BUT NOT FORGOTTEN!) feature box
1813402 I think there might be one somewhere... You know people wanting to make reasons for why we never see any of Scootaloo's relatives without using she is an orphan.
and again I was re-reading this this time it wasn't all this time, it was just the past 3 or 4 chapters (from chapter before TwiMac clop to present) yes I love this fic, I think I will make a side or random TwiMac folder in the group to put this, and some other fics that it isn't really the focus of. right now it is just... Everypony, Teen, Mature, Complete, Friendshipping
I am sorry but I could not stop myself from laughing like a madman at the end. going back to "The Return of Princess Nightmare Moon" to find that quote that made me laugh.
1813897 So after quite a bit of searching I found it.
“Just don’t expect any of my royal jelly the next time you visit the hive!” she said to Celestia with a playful smirk.
“I hardly think it’s a good idea to consume anything that comes from your thorax, dear Chrysalis.” Celestia said with a sly chuckle. “Only my sister ever partook in that.” Twilight gaped at the wild conversation between the royals. Feeding on ponies? Royal jelly? THORAX?!
I laughed madly when I first read this, and you made me laugh almost as much. Pinkie can't wait to taste the honeypot that is the queen's *cough* Twilight's *cough* thorax.
Wait a minute. You completely skipped the whole explanation sequence. Are you telling me that Twilight changes into a changeling in front of her friends just like that, and they're all, "oh cool Twilight, you're a changeling now."?
I call you from the demon's heart, from the darkest plains of hell itself, and I command with the strength of a thousand flights of fallen angels, to ARISE, and CONTINUE this WONDERFUL STORY! Also, PLOT-RELATED CLOP! It's like CLOP, but with more PLOT! And it's related to the STORY, as well!
I'm curious as to why Twilight picked a new name for herself as a Changeling Queen, even though it wasn't a Queen's name, she could still call herself 'Queen Twilight Sparkle', I'm reading too much into it that when she spoke to Pinkie, that she'd be the subject of Neoptera, not the subject of Twilight Sparkle, which may illustrate her attempting already to seperate the two, which may lead to her looking down on her friends as Neoptera. Yup, read WAY too much into it. No mistakes did I see. Continue writing happily. Update soon, this story's great. Honora Imperator
. . . Okay, since I already know Macintosh is going to become a Changeling king, this is my question. What the hell is a changeling king and why does my blood run cold knowing that the answer is something terrifying?
i've read this story twice so far, and i seriously need an update. and i gotta say, there's TONS of ways to keep this story going and going and going! might i suggest longer chapters? it makes it so that there aren't so many chapters while still having all the good stuff. you don't have to, i just don't like seeing a story with so much potential stop to soon.
But things are happening in a very rapid succession as of late. I had expected a lot more, well, experimenting with the new powers and such, as well as some exploration of the memories. Maybe it'll come later, it's going to be absolutely hilarious when Chrysalis' memories from impersonating Cadance pops up somehow. It would be extra hilarious if those memories return at the same time she meets with her brother. Alternating between blushing, wanting to barf, and a very very confused Shining Armor and Cadance.
Oh, and, well, she has absorbed all the memories and experiences of Chrysalis. I'll have some extra awkward with that please
To be perfectly honest, I don't like the idea of Big Mac becoming Twilight's sex slave or changeling king. Sure, have Twilight and Mac become fuckbuddies, but don't kill him when Twilight goes on vacation. Big Mac might be the most desirable stallion in Equestria, but it still feels like Twilight would be getting tied down if she has to constantly fuck him. I'd like for Twilight to wean him off of her love juice slowly, and then have friendly, consensual sex, no strings attached.
Because seriously, he has to buck apple trees all day long, then buck a changeling queen all night long? Ain't nopony got time fo' that!
Pinkie Pie popped out of a bush and glared at Rainbow, "Hey! No making references outside the show!" she shouted before vanishing again.
Hypocrite. Or maybe she just wants it to be her exclusive schtick.
In any case, this is interesting thus far. I think you should stick with the offscreen sex scenes in the future, for your sake if nothing else. I look forward to seeing how Twilight balances her sense of right and wrong with the urge to bring her species back from the verge of extinction.
I hope with my friends around though, I won't become what she was in the end.
But what happens when your friends die and leave you alone; alive with mindless drones beneath you, compliant to your every whim?
he'll become a changeling king.
I take it that males in your Changling society are not only needed for sperm then killed like in hive insects. I take it that by producing self aware changlings, he just has to impregnate Twilight; though if he is subservient to Twilight, then I suppose those changlings will be as well.
Won't Pinkie also lose the ability to have children? Or are queens not as special as once thought?
well after reading the 12 chapters i found a few spelling and grammatical errors but i liked it none the less. Faved, liked and looking for more. giving five hearts for love my friend.
2456148 Ditto. It was such a well timed non-sequitur that it had me laughing. I actually stopped reading just so that I can drop down here and type this. It usually annoys me when people play with Pinkie breaking the fourth wall like this, but a well timed joke can indeed make up the difference. Also, I'm certain that it's impossible for pinky to know any of these facts, especially the one about passive feeding, but we are already suspending disbelief, so what's a little bit more. Not sure how I like this whole "Big Mac Conversion" issue, Hopefully this doesnt turn into "Twilight turns the entire town into changeliings and they all have sex".
Well that's an .... interesting way of creating Changelings.
Didn't think Pinkie was that kind of mare,but then again she is a party animal. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png
Cue clop chapter.
Also,
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Damn it these awesome stories updating so late is the reason i don't sleep
and i love it
have a free laugh
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Nifty picture! Where'd you find it?
Firstly it doesn't help that I was playing a starwars game before reading this... But the last few lines of this chapter had me in tears while earning a few strange looks from some of my friends and family. Great chapter none the less keep it up.
1813258 Are you sure you wanna know? Because my methods are so advanced you'd need multiple doctorates in order to fully comprehend the genius behind them. You really want to know? Okay, but don't say I didn't warn you.
Google image search for twilight sparkle changeling, right there on the first page. I don't know why they call them pages, they don't cover anywhere near a page. I suppose it's supposed to be mobile-friendly.
Mackintosh addicted to Twilight's "honeypot" and now with the possibility of becoming a Changeling King (AND TWILIGHT HIT THE JACKPOT WITH THIS!)... Check
Cameo crossover with the "Scootaling" Story... Check
Rarity aparently slowoly also addicted to Twilight's "honeypot" but will take her urges with Spike... Check
Pinkie, bwing Pinkie and willing to become a SELF-AWARE changeling drone in Twilight's new hive (and totally liking the way of transformation)... NOW CHECK!
All what we need now is Rainbow Dash crashing into Twilight's bedroom window, Twilight and Pinkie restaining her and convince her to have a threesome with them so Twilight could finally "taste the rainbow" and also have Pinkie's "pinkie pie" for herself while them have also a good taste of her sweet honeypot
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There's a scootaling story? say what? I just had the idea to make scootaloo a changeling since she just showed up in ponyville one day with no fanfare and no family...
1813402 Indeed, is actually called "Scootaling" and is exactly Scootaloo being actually an exiled Changeling from Crysalis hive, and adopted by Zecora, however Applebloom and Sweetie Belle actually discovered her secret (And Sweetie Belle actually spreading the news to all the foals of the school), seach it by writting "Scootaling", is here on FIMFictoon and was also in the now gone(BUT NOT FORGOTTEN!) feature box
Here's the link for the story: Scootaling
BTW: WHEN WILL YOU'RE GOING TO FIX AND COMPLETE THE TWIRITY CLOP CHAPTER!
1813402 I think there might be one somewhere... You know people wanting to make reasons for why we never see any of Scootaloo's relatives without using she is an orphan.
and again I was re-reading this this time it wasn't all this time, it was just the past 3 or 4 chapters (from chapter before TwiMac clop to present)
yes I love this fic, I think I will make a side or random TwiMac folder in the group to put this, and some other fics that it isn't really the focus of. right now it is just... Everypony, Teen, Mature, Complete, Friendshipping
Oh my...
I am sorry but I could not stop myself from laughing like a madman at the end. going back to "The Return of Princess Nightmare Moon" to find that quote that made me laugh.
1813897 So after quite a bit of searching I found it.
I laughed madly when I first read this, and you made me laugh almost as much.
Pinkie can't wait to taste the honeypot that is the queen's *cough* Twilight's *cough* thorax.
Now Pinkie and Big Mac will become changelings?
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Get's better all the time.
1868302, I was going to make an argument, but I got lost with fic thinking.
THIS IS SO FUCKING GOOD! I LOVE IT! I can't wait for more.
Your'e tying Twilight down, forces Big Mac to be king... what the hell is supposed to do for any other stallions?
127 changelings. 13 kings. 1 Queen. 1 Dragon. Celestia's solution. Kill them with her holy fire.
I can't wait for the next chapter. it is so good so far.
antsieness! I love the Twilight changeling ones. (well, changelign ones in general. the twilight ones are just in the top tere of those)
Wait a minute. You completely skipped the whole explanation sequence. Are you telling me that Twilight changes into a changeling in front of her friends just like that, and they're all, "oh cool Twilight, you're a changeling now."?
"Now just get on the bed while I wait for Chrysalis to stop laughing at me."
So, this is a fun story. Lightest becoming a changeling story I've ever seen. I'm looking forward to more of this.
I call you from the demon's heart, from the darkest plains of hell itself, and I command with the strength of a thousand flights of fallen angels, to ARISE, and CONTINUE this WONDERFUL STORY! Also, PLOT-RELATED CLOP! It's like CLOP, but with more PLOT! And it's related to the STORY, as well!
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Well, I'll be working on the clop when I get home from work tonight. I'll have to post a warning at the beginning cause it gets really weird.
2003100 It damn well better.
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just pinkie knows right now
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Oh, thank Celestia. I was freaking out, thinking we missed a huge part of the story. You can have a cookie now.
It is, it is a glorious thing to be a changeling king!
Eeyup.
>Usually it takes longer to take effect
wat
I'm curious as to why Twilight picked a new name for herself as a Changeling Queen, even though it wasn't a Queen's name, she could still call herself 'Queen Twilight Sparkle', I'm reading too much into it that when she spoke to Pinkie, that she'd be the subject of Neoptera, not the subject of Twilight Sparkle, which may illustrate her attempting already to seperate the two, which may lead to her looking down on her friends as Neoptera.
Yup, read WAY too much into it.
No mistakes did I see.
Continue writing happily.
Update soon, this story's great.
Honora Imperator
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Okay, since I already know Macintosh is going to become a Changeling king, this is my question. What the hell is a changeling king and why does my blood run cold knowing that the answer is something terrifying?
i've read this story twice so far, and i seriously need an update. and i gotta say, there's TONS of ways to keep this story going and going and going! might i suggest longer chapters? it makes it so that there aren't so many chapters while still having all the good stuff. you don't have to, i just don't like seeing a story with so much potential stop to soon.
Damn, this is good and I wish I though of it as an idea!
I must say that I find this story interesting.
But things are happening in a very rapid succession as of late. I had expected a lot more, well, experimenting with the new powers and such, as well as some exploration of the memories. Maybe it'll come later, it's going to be absolutely hilarious when Chrysalis' memories from impersonating Cadance pops up somehow. It would be extra hilarious if those memories return at the same time she meets with her brother. Alternating between blushing, wanting to barf, and a very very confused Shining Armor and Cadance.
Oh, and, well, she has absorbed all the memories and experiences of Chrysalis. I'll have some extra awkward with that please
Just read this, and despite the extremely short chapters I'm loving it.
And now I see that it hasn't updated for more than two months. Why do I constantly read stories that take such long breaks between chapters?
To be perfectly honest, I don't like the idea of Big Mac becoming Twilight's sex slave or changeling king. Sure, have Twilight and Mac become fuckbuddies, but don't kill him when Twilight goes on vacation. Big Mac might be the most desirable stallion in Equestria, but it still feels like Twilight would be getting tied down if she has to constantly fuck him. I'd like for Twilight to wean him off of her love juice slowly, and then have friendly, consensual sex, no strings attached.
Because seriously, he has to buck apple trees all day long, then buck a changeling queen all night long? Ain't nopony got time fo' that!
Hypocrite. Or maybe she just wants it to be her exclusive schtick.
In any case, this is interesting thus far. I think you should stick with the offscreen sex scenes in the future, for your sake if nothing else. I look forward to seeing how Twilight balances her sense of right and wrong with the urge to bring her species back from the verge of extinction.
This Story needs a Update!
But what happens when your friends die and leave you alone; alive with mindless drones beneath you, compliant to your every whim?
I take it that males in your Changling society are not only needed for sperm then killed like in hive insects. I take it that by producing self aware changlings, he just has to impregnate Twilight; though if he is subservient to Twilight, then I suppose those changlings will be as well.
Won't Pinkie also lose the ability to have children? Or are queens not as special as once thought?
this is an interesting story to say the least but it does have my attention XD
so i hope to see more!
well after reading the 12 chapters i found a few spelling and grammatical errors but i liked it none the less. Faved, liked and looking for more.
giving five hearts for love my friend.
> "Only Sith deal in absolutes."
...Star Wars reference. I'm actually laughing at this.
Heheheh...
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Ditto. It was such a well timed non-sequitur that it had me laughing. I actually stopped reading just so that I can drop down here and type this. It usually annoys me when people play with Pinkie breaking the fourth wall like this, but a well timed joke can indeed make up the difference. Also, I'm certain that it's impossible for pinky to know any of these facts, especially the one about passive feeding, but we are already suspending disbelief, so what's a little bit more. Not sure how I like this whole "Big Mac Conversion" issue, Hopefully this doesnt turn into "Twilight turns the entire town into changeliings and they all have sex".
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Bahaha: "Only Sith deal in absolutes."
I am like, so awesomely astounded right now, my sides.
Obi-wan-pony taught Pinkamena well.
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I know this is a late response.
I prefer Revan over Obi-Wan.
4365094 I agree with your statment
Should be, "as soon as she neared the edge of the forest."
Oh dear, so she needs to concern herself over who ingests her excretions? Hope that "feature" can be turned off...
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Kyle Katarn or Mara Jade with Force Destruction, enough said.