I do this just for fun -- but sometimes I take myself a little too seriously. I know life's too short, but -- you know...
This story is a sequel to Twilight for a Day
Michael Walker has been transformed into the Regent of the Sun for Earth, and finally chooses a new name for himself in his Alicorn form. He finds out just what it means to be a prince as he faces difficult challenges as well as learning that he's not the only powerful being on the planet.
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I'd read this, but your avatar is eyeing me suspiciously.
I am liking it so far keep up the
good workfucking amazing work dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Sweetie_happy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Sweetie_happy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Sweetie_happy.png1636825 LOL I need to make a few changes, I acted a bit hastily there.
You know when God comes and yells at you shits goin down
Micheal dun goofed up!
Good Chapter Mike. Love the idea of xaveria being a changling queen. Keep on truckin!
DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
Keep up the good work
I am loving it
Discord you damn troll dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png = e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/trollface.png
Okay so Celestia was pissed than kinda sad THAN she forgave him seems legit
1665455 I know that
while i agree that they seem to be a liiitle bit repetitive i dont seem to notice it while reading... i cant say the same for others but im still loving the story
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png OOHHH NOOOOS!!!!!
Wait wat!!!! WTF JUST HAPPENED?!?!?!
I like it and yes it is a little repetitive but its good
I think it is a rift in the fabrication of time
I loved it please MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR I MUST HAVE MOAR NAO!
Also
First
Dang it I'm not first this time. oh well NEXT TIME!!!!Also like the plot twist.
MOAR dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
ALSO! might i suggest you figure out an overall story line soon?
while the idea of a person getting turned into an alicorn is interesting (with how you decided to present it), and having to fight off all of the previous bad guys 2 or 3 times, then bringing other universes into it all, is interesting... WHO THE BUCK STARTED IT ALL!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Derpy_Hooves.png
1673897 Wouldn't you just like to know?
...
I apologize if this ending disappoints you.
1681159 I am disapoint...
in that you think that this could disapoint ANYONE! THERES JUST TO MUCH AWESOME!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
The religous ending was a plot twist, yes...
1696228 ...There could be another tear in the fabric, letting in another Discord...
It's OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND!
Sorry, had too. ;p
2049297 What? 9000? But that's impossible!
I am disappoint. Nevertheless, good read.
2329178 I actually have a sequel in mind for this story as well. Thanks for reading.
2533150 I am considering a sequel to this story -- that's my next project after I finish my others.
I'll give you a tease on it -- it will take place many centuries in the future, when Tasavir is about the only sapient entity on the planet, and decides he wants some company -- so he messes around with the genetics of native equine species, transforming them into talking ponies!
GOD IS RACIST!!!!
again, op much?
But you haven't scared me off yet so that's a good thing i guess :/
About time something bad happened, you have my attention again
It seems it's like a roller coaster continually going up and down, these chapters can easily be extended to 2-3 chapters at 2-3k each and some even double that. The storyline is there but the it just seems like it is going to quick
DUN DUN DUN!!!!
GOOD IDEA, LORD!
You're screwed, Mike.
EDIT:
FFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU--
WHOA WHOA WHOA WHOA!
Y U NO MAKE THREEQUEL
2770701 I'm working on that ...
2773150 Ok, good.. phew.
Mike the Red
This doesn't sound like a repeat of earlier. Reasoning?
1) Luna's dark side took effect but the other Nightmare Moon happened to be on Earth.
2) I still don't see how you think this is repeating itself.
>>Mike the Red
When should we expect the first chapter or 2 from the threequel? (roughly)
2902975 It's kinda slow going right now -- might be a couple of weeks before I have written enough and feel confident in it to publish it. Thanks for your interest!
I have an interest in almost anything that is posted by people I follow. You said you never got feedback on something? what is it and I could give ya some feedback.
2909690 I have a story I'm currently working on, titled the Trouble with Time Travel. The story is a bit long, but I was wanting feedback on how to improve it. Thanks again for your consideration.
2909782
Anything to help a writer out. I will start reading and by tomorrow sometime (no idea) I should have read most of it.