I do this just for fun -- but sometimes I take myself a little too seriously. I know life's too short, but -- you know...
This story is a sequel to The Fashionista's Dilemma
Some time has passed since Michael Walker enjoyed his day as Twilight Sparkle. One day, he wakes to find his wife Brenda missing and engages in a serious search for her. Unbeknownst to him, Brenda woke to find herself in Ponyville and is forced to cope with the stark change in her surroundings. She makes new friends and is ultimately returned to her home world -- but her arrival is a little too late.
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Hmmm lets see *goes out and buys several laptops* there now I can read all your stories at once
upovted and will read t5his story later but any story with ponies in it is always the win
in meantikme watch this space for my 1sth fanfic when it comes
COMING SOON TO FIM,FICTION
MY FANFIC!!
Mike I swear just I cant think of anything you are a good writer is all I can think of
1811816 Thank you for your kind words. I try to write the best I can, even though I need some more improvement. I figure if I can keep writing, I will improve my skills.
Mike Mike Mike this is awesome
Why?! Why this. (is not angry) Just asking. Also (advice inbound) try to expand your horizons. I mean try to right something not about your OC or include them to where they are ponies in Equestria. Honestly it looks to me like your making several time lines and universes. (Doctor Whooves would be proud) Why don't you try doing a spinoff of another popular fabric series. (Looks at another one of Mike's stories) Like just a thought maybe FoE? Or some other fic. What I'm basically saying is write something different. DONT take this the wrong way I'm just giving advice.
Alright my work here is done for now.
Sorry meant to say popular fanfic. Darn aotu corrector.
1813184 Will see what I can do about that -- thanks for the advice.
>>Mike The Red No prob. Sorry that i kinda went on a rant with that. I was tired and half asleep.
hmmmmm Celestia is hiding something DUNN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
MIKE KICKEM IN THE NUTS AND RUN but other wise it is good so far
I couldn't believe they had been so damned stupid! Stupid damned cops!
You are preaching you the choir with that
1896952 Celestia doesn't want Twilight to get any ideas...
1900434 Ah I also like how you added a thing from Children Of Chaos I still would like to see this continued
1900451 Actually it was from Free to Good Home, but same difference. I also wanted to have Brenda stay until the Grand Galloping Gala and have her meet up with Amethyst Shadow -- which would have been a very interesting meeting to say the least.
I might throw that in as a possible alternate ending -- maybe.
1900469 Hmm even better idea
1900469 But how Brenda is going to meet Amethyst? Or is it going to take place in the situation where Mike didn't help Twilight with the broken horn?
1908857 Amethyst traveled backwards thru time in the universe where Brenda meets her -- can't give away too much more than that as I am going to write the chapter as an alternate ending.
After this I start imagining a book with a title: "Twilight for a Day. A guide on Alternate Universes."
Also makes me more eager to draw a graph that shows all of your universes in a complex timeline.
1914106 Thanks for the kind words.
TO be honest i was somewhat dissappointed with this ending. The way some of the alt universes were portrayed made me go on a tangent from the real story
So here what i was expecting.
Celestia of the brenda universe knows all about the humans and their corruptedness and all that jazz. So she goes TCB on brenda without her knowing it.
Long desc
Over the course of two weeks they butter brenda up and try to make her forget about her past life, making things seem better in ponyville than earth. So when she finally sets her mind up about going home during the grand galloping gala or whatever celestia prepares to send her home only to fake failure, keeping her here. Of course all the other elements move in to comfort her and drop subtle hints about how mike must have forgotten her if he hadn't come yet.
Celestia also drops subtle hints about her maybe becoming a pony and living in equestria now that she has no way home. Of course she doesn't make the descion right then but she may eventually, not my character. Anyways the reason why she actually needs her to want the transformation is thus. blame it on alt realities but the pony transformation spell requires the target to be fully acceptance of the changes. (want to become a pony fully, this may involve voicing her acceptance it may not)
Of course you could go with her acutally going pony and then mike finding out about it in some way or another. Of course brenda is still miserable without mike so she doesn't actually get accumstomed to pony life, much to the chagrin of the other ponies.
Cue rescue attempt
Maaaan.
Mike keeps poking around various alternate realities, eventually he's going to find The Conversion Bureau.
That won't be good.
1914106
Don't do it! The timey-wimey wibbly wobbly will drive you insane!
1809292 Why the hay did 4 people down vote your comment?
Who sent him that email? And what exactly did it say?
4079757 The what?
6502043
See, it already got this poor fellow! Do we have a Doctor in the house?
Oh hey, here he is;