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LunaScribbles


I’m just some dude who loves ponies the same way a lot of people do... Wait, you like them 'how much' now?

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Brian Schmidt, a Scootaloo fan, was busy looking for a fan fiction about her favorite flightless pony. He wanted something cool, something that has a similar story to Becoming Sweetie Belle, An Apple Far From the Tree and Two Bad Apples. He just adored the mental image of seeing someone just have a fun time as Scootaloo. He swore under his breath that he wanted a Scootaloo fan fiction right now and he means it...

Well... he got his wish alright.

Because now, he's living the fan fiction he had dreamed of through the courses of his actions he makes as his best pony, Scootaloo.


Hey all, it's me, LunaScribbles! I thought it'd be a good idea (or a horrible one) to revisit this fanfic. Why? Just because. I don't like to leave most of the stories my old self had made to the dust. I even left his old footnote here. Anyways, I hope you enjoy this rewritten version of my story!

Hey guys, The8BitPlayer here and I made a fic which was based on these three but my favorite is An Apple Far From the Tree for it was cute at first and it has family morale. ONE POINT FOR APPLEJACK! Anyway, here is my attempt...

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"Aagh!" He shouted in annoyance. "How come Babs gets a story! Come on, she doesn't appear in a lot of episodes!" He exclaimed in annoyance. "Scootaloo must have one! I have been searching for HOURS!! And I got NOTHING from all that crappy excavation!!!" He then slammed his laptop's screen down. His rage cooled down a bit but he was still annoyed by the fact that Scootaloo doesn't have a fic related to the three stories he's read. "Worst night ever." He grumbled

This guy sounds like the ultimate evolution of the euphoric neckbearded ponyfag.

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Gr8t st0ry m8 i r8 8/fedora

5037376 It's fanart of this great character. He's so euphoric!

5037380 Hey, thanks for the image being burned into my retina, onto my brain....

Anyway, the character is supposed to be a bit skinny but anyway, a guy who doesn't see a fic about what he wants gets a bit depressed but anyway, I'm going to continue this but all I need is a proofreader. All my friends are non-bronies so that'll be a problem.

Anyway, if someone'll make a temp cover for this it'll be nice but I can make one.

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No problem, bro. Always gotta help others, right?

but why am I dreams and how can I be inside tact?

*BFFF* *HA HA HA HA!* :rainbowlaugh: Oh! Oh that's too good! I didn't know this existed, yet I made one with the exact same primacy! But... It's about RAINBOW :rainbowlaugh: Ooooh. Ooooh that's too good! Any way... best of luck to you on this endevor!

5396046 Indeed my friend. It's currently my Christmas break so this'll be continued and I'll be more productive. Thanks for the comment! And I'll gladly read the fic that you're making!

Open the T.V. :rainbowlaugh:

This fic is sort of hasty and disorganized, but it still seems kind of... nice... I dunno.

Wow... the mom is taking this unrealistically well. Her 18-year old son is now a something-year-old pony from MLP. Wait is she a brony(/ pegasister) two?

Ok, I'm sorry. I just can't get over how well the mom is handling this. I'm looking over the cliche's that could have caused this, and the only thing I can think of is this ending up as a fourth wall meta joke. He wanted a Scootaloo story and now it's coming true. That's all I got

Nope. Bull. There is no way a self-respecting guy would admit that he changed his gender. I should know... (Man I wish I found that glitch in the TARDIS sooner...)

Wo wo wo- wo!

for 3 moons

3 moons. You just siad:

2 moons

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Continuity! FIX IT!


"Thank you."

Also (excuse me language) BULL SH**! No mother would be okay with this! Ummm hey mom, newsflash: YOUR CHILD HAS BEEN UBDUCTED! SHOW SOME F*** CONSERN!!!!

(But, I do really like this, keep working on it)

5691615 Oh, wowweee wow wow, thank you there, sonny. I was sick for 3 days and I'm busy working on another fan fic, check it out, it's called new frequency.

Anyway, I was going to add more background about Brian's mom that she's a bit care free but will always love her son. Anyways, thanks for the positive feedback, I think I'd use a proofreader like you. Maybe on March 28, where my school will give us a vacation.

5517225 really? You're doing this? Sigh. First off many self respecting guys would admit and secondly you are thinking with one very narrow viewpoint that is relevant only to you. Sorry for being an asshole but someone had to do it, til next time. Think in broader strokes.

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yeah, I agree. Admitting you changed your gender after finding that glitch in the TARDIS is no laughing matter. :duck:

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I typed those words in a time before trans became a big deal.

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