Matt finds himself in stuck in Equestria while hearing computerized voices in his head. He soon learns that the voices are actually a chat box from a livestream that is somehow streaming everything he sees and hears. How did this happen, and can the Bronies watching the stream help him co-exist while fighting off the trolls and mass-media?
..... Were you drunk when you wrote this?
...........okay then... This has my attention based on the sheer hilarity of what can ensue. As such, I shall favorite. Also, have a moustache for a premise, and spend it wisely.
Oh I can tell this is going to fun
INTERESANTE!
This is quite the concept.
JOHN MADDEN.
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haha I may have had a few glasses of scotch when the idea for this sprang in my head.
I never really planned to write this, but I was really bored when I was without power for a week when Sandy hit.
This is actually my first attempt to write anything ever.
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I shall use it to acquire more scotch!
1627412 Well, good on ya, man! I expect to see more.
1627423 *Blinks* ............if that is what gave you this first idea, then by all means, do so. But, keep writing. Also, *shameless plug* if you ever need an editor/pre-reader, I'll do it.
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It was a mixture of some of my favorite fan-fics that got the idea in my head. "why am I pinkie pie" "project sunflower" and "the unexpected love live of dusk shine" to be specific. The scotch may have given me the idea to try writing during my power outage
!! I would love to have you as an editor.
1627479 Lol, and as I said, I'd be glad to. Just PM me the unfinished chapters, I'll look 'em over, and get back to you. Plus, being an editor for you helps me as well, so we both benefit.
Can I be one of the electronic voices?
Except my voice waps pitches up and down
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I'm still figuring out how I'm going to go about this. However if you write some random lines that you think would fit in the story I may put them in. No promises at the moment though
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DO YOU HEAR THE VOICES TOO?
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Cupcakes -- nice chocolate cupcakes. Nice tasty cupcakes.
Pinkie is truly an excellent baker.
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just don't bake them with her
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You are fine so long as you stay on the main floor and do not follow her down into the basement.
Yeah, you definitely want to get a proofreader here. There's potential, but lots of little errors can get really irritating.
Also, advice on the whole livestream commenting thing. I don't know what you plan to do here, but you might want to try and limit the chat things with lots of caps lock and assorted babbling. Like I said, I don't know what you plan to do with that, and for all I know you were already going to refine the chat things, but whatever.
So, with all that said, interesting concept, I shall Fav.
You got my attention dude, this is like drugs...
written drugs...
You can't even imagine how much I laughed.... I am dead...
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Oh god I just started writing and I already killed a fan!!
Can I have your xbox?
1694206 No... I have a PS3... and no... you don't get it
But you could read my story 'What I Am' as a compensation
BTW: I am writing this from Hell... yeah, that's were I went, thanks to you
1694206 Don't worry, you can always re-animate him/her through the fine and precise art of necromancy.
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I shall read it on my nook tablet when I get a chance. Don't get the nook tablet!!
You have internet down there? So is the awfulness of hell exaggerated like the jail in Dark Knight Rises?
wtf did i just read?
I hope you rip to shreds all the cliches in the fandom.
I want to know what happens next
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I swear I'm not dead! I'm about halfway done with the next chapter.
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I never said you were
All I can say is that I enjoy this so far
“So… what do you all call yourselves?”
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“but I’d to make some with yoooooooUUUUAAAHHHHHHH!!”
Something missing? A certain word... "love" perhaps?
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haha that's why he took some deep breaths.
Fixed! thanks for pointing that out.
Good luck with the other story but I hope you keep writing this one too. It has a potential to be rib breakingly funny.
It's kind of odd, you could probably get away with using ellipsis instead of the frantic copy pasta, but I'm interested so far. ;)
Home depot eh? Well then, you can write it, we can help! ;p too corny?
Keep going! :)
What's going to happen next?
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I don't mind if people 'steal' this idea so long as they tell me. I may pick it up again one day.
In the meantime I just posted a new story that's been rolling around in the back burner of my mind for a while now. Just check out my stories section.
Dead I guess?