• Published 14th Nov 2012
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Foreigner in a Foreign Land - HAHAHAHAHA_no



Applejack washes up on the shore of pony Japan and must fight her way up the society.

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Comments ( 19 )

Looks like Jackie's got some heavy thinking to do. Heres hoping she doesn't get in over her head.

uhhh so exciting, can't wait for next chapter again! :pinkiecrazy:

Finally got the time to read this update. Great chapter, once again. I have no idea why so many people are disliking this.

It needs to be sexier. Alot.

Also, You could totally do one with Pinkie Pie. Just roll with her non serious nature. She takes the whole diffusing of a war as a game. When that dosn't work, she gets all depressed, some silly flashback to her time in Equestria with the other Mane 6 that shows her how to fix the situation to some degree. Big boss fight, save the prince(ss), Happy Ending.

If you know what I mean.

1679548
Meh. Decided not to do it. There isn't too much interest for this story and it's not a clopfic in the "sex" section so people don't actually want to read it. I finish it up and write some clopfics instead.

1683696 Woah! Back the hell up! This story is INCREDIBLE! And it sounds like your considering quitting it for the 'young, dumb, and full of cum' masses?

I for one am following this story because in the first chapter alone, I saw some excellent storytelling. And now with this second chapter, I can already see a story that has all the likelyhood on being on par with Samurai 7 or Samurai X: Trust and Betrayal.

I ask of you this: even if you feel the need to write other fics, PLEASE do not give up on this story, which has already struck a deep chord inside of me. A tale of this much potential needs to be told.

1687427
DOWN FRISKY!!!! I didn't say I was quitting. I had been planning to do more stories about the mane six being dropped into other countries and having to overcome adversity, but I had changed my mind. I've changed it back, but the other stories won't be as graphic as this one simply for the fact of the lack of attention. I'm have a non-graphic account where I write normal stories, this was supposed to be where I would write bloody stores or clopfics. I am going to finish this one up, and I'm not going to stop writing this, so calm down. I just happen to be an attention whore. :raritywink:

1687740 sorry... I'm just someone who relates to the Warrior's way of life all too well, and a story that captures that escense quickly becomes a personal favorite.

At the beginning of next month, I shall be starting a new fimfic group, for warriors and stories about warriors in their various forms.

Where as Bushido exemplaries the Warrior's Code, and I can see how this story has the heart of the Nipponese Warrior at it's core, would you mind if I added this story among the very first stories added to the group?

1687791
Sounds like a blast. Sign me up!

1687969 I shall have to send you the link to the new group when I make it.

Hey speedy here. I just want to say that I love this story. Although you post a little slow compared to others but its all worth the wait when we get the chapter. Thanks fore the amazing story to read.

I enjoy this story, please keep it up.

Now that you are back I do hope you'll continue this story, it has great potential.

5838666
I like this story, but it has little to no audience and I'm an attention whore.

5840460 And you'll get more the more you write, I'll be recomending it as well.

5840631
No one seems to be getting this. People need to stop saying buzz words and things that sound good on posters in high school. If an author is making three hundred dollars on one story and ten thousand on another which is he going to pick to write? I've tried to be funny about this, but people are getting on my nerves. I posted this story before Burning Up and it's got three hundred. How long am I supposed to wait?

Will I continue it? Maybe, but not if people keep annoying me.

5842049 Alright alright, sorry, I just like it a lot and I do think it got potential, but your the author so its your call.

5843586
Wow. You are literally the first person I've come across on this site that didn't jump down my throat when I disagreed with them. Bravo.

5844568 Your argument was very valid so I saw no point in arguing (though I tend not to argue) still hope you have it on backburner, you know, type a few lines/words from time to time, or you put all your energy (apart from important RL stuff of corse) on the other story first and then this one, just don't abandon it, it always saddens me when authors do.

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