If the Blooperschnarden comes a-knockin', then your door you'd better be blockin'. Written for the [Everything] prompt on Ponychan for the week of 12/28 - 1/4.
This is a horror story that isn't scary, really.
If the Blooperschnarden comes a-knockin', then your door you'd better be blockin'. Written for the [Everything] prompt on Ponychan for the week of 12/28 - 1/4.
This is a horror story that isn't scary, really.
Its not that scary, but its creepy. That is the one word i could use to describe this: CREEPY
If the name wasn't "Blooperscnarden." Maybe it would've been creepier.
Maybe if the name was Booger Sardine, it would've been scarier.
Oh man, I'm shaking in my skin.
...the name is throwing me off, really.
Outside of that, not bad. Cliche, but...not bad.
Kind of reminds me of the story 'TailyPo'
Hmm, I didn't expect this to creep me out at all. I think you've done well for such a short story!
200249 That's what I was thinking!
Either way a solid fic. It's an old trope but you handled it well. I admit I don't think you did anything new with it but you didn't butcher it either. Sorry for giving such a neutral compliment