Colgate's stuck in a time loop, and she's willing to do anything to get out of it.
Wrote this as a proof-of-concept for a similar but rather conceptually different multichapter fic, which I'm sort-of-not-really planning to do. As a result, this one-shot is terrible.
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Wow.... that was actually pretty good.
much better than I thought. You should definitely do a prologue at some point explaining where everything started. This is still great tho, keep it up! 
Groundhog day.
Wow... That's trippy... Has the good Doctor been alerted to this?
...that was wonderful. I'd like for it to be longer, but it's fine as is. Length is literally the only thing to be desired. That, and tension.
4.25/5. Favorite.
I find the lack of relationship sad. But heck, it's like a more desperate Groundhog Day. At least there Bill Murray embraced his pseudo-goodhood to become an expert at everything. You'd think Colgate would do the same. But still, Tracked.
Oh wow. Just wow. I'm in shock.
Dude, this little one-shot right here is gold, you could really make something great out of this!
As the others have said, this definitely needs to be a thing that happens.
Except killing Pinchy. Colgate could have just locked her in a room while she searched or something, no need to sink to child-killing.
I was absolutely certain that Colgate would succeed in breaking the loop -- on this iteration, with her best friend and Dinky both dead by her hooves, probably because the thing running her scavenger hunt is a pre-reform Discord. Like, it was a foregone conclusion in my mind the moment the knife came out. So: nice anti-twist.