While flying through the clouds after an embarrassing incident with the weather pegasi, Rainbow Dash stumbles finds a rather strange cloud - specifically, a beady-eyed and rather cheery cloud. Within said cloud,are turtles with spikes on them, a "button" that turns said turtles to coins, and a fishing rod. With these tools and a mischievous attitude, she decides to have a little fun with Ponyville's residents.
Art by Joey-Darkmeat.
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Rainbow x Lakitu's Cloud
OREGONUL SHEP DU NAWT STEEL ADOSHO:UIA:SHUOI:DH:ZLAIO:JSD
Honestly I'm just relieved to see a crossover fic that isn't some grimdark Halo or Call of Duty nonsense. And it's good, to boot.
Hahaha i found this story amusing. Made my morning.. Cant wait to read more
Rainbow's even shipped with clouds!
By the Mighty Thor, this is great. I really can't wait to see more of this. Doing great, this is a fantastic read.
Rainbow Dash with a lakitu cloud? It's genius!
1555447 No, it's magic!
You know, because she's friends with it and...
Yeah, I'm gonna stop now.
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It's magical genius!
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...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
LoL, can't wait to see what RD has planned for a prank involving semi-lethal turtles that appear out of nowhere in a cloud....
inb4 it's featured
1557410 Pffft. what are you talking about, this crap ain't gonna get featured.
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Nope, your attempts at self loathing to fish for compliments have been detected and denied.
jk, this is a completely original crossover-comedy. If you keep up the good work and it get's the proper attention (I suggest putting it in all the right groups such as comedy, crossover, writing gold, I just want a comment, the editing groups, the Rainbow Dash goups, etc. then people will see it and like it.
also, add tank to the character list, so others can get the cloud Koopa (not sure what the name is, been too long and I can't be bothered to look it up) reference.
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Lol, just noticed the Super Mario Galaxy crossover fic in the featured box...
Also, you're lucky I just changed my avatar and came back to this comment to check it or I wouldn't have seen your reply. You have to remeber to click the little speech bubble thing in the corner or the user won't get a notification.
1558995 Wut? I did do that.
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Check comment 13, it would have my name in blue(linking to the comment you reply to) if you did.
1559051 Oh. Okeh.
that is all
Hmhmhm. I can only hope said pranks will primarily target a pair of purple pegasai. Looks promising, hope to see more.
I want to make this cannon for my story. This is just to funny.
She hath been bound to a cloud by metaphorical ways. We do approve.
1562371 Really? Well, I'm quite eager to see that happen. Permission granted (and do show the results, if you will
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she needs a fishing pole
Good GAWD! THE BEHIND! It's HUGE! Seriously, it's bigger than her own head...
JKLGWJLFDKJGOEWLHDGKLHFIOJWLHGIOFLHWKOLJEFLGENWIFULHGEWIOFUHGIWEFLHCJG AWESOME!
1567859 she already does considering the description.
3196929 hello me. How's the day going?
3276873 today is going great! Well, mostly, anyways. I'm gonna go play on the wii in a bit. Bye!
3276879 ok! See you later!
3196929>>3276873>>3276879>>3276880 well that was weird...
ITT: People replying to themselves
Why not throw a bunch of spiked turtles into an Apple tree and have Apple Jack try to dodge them.
hey man(or chick), are you gonna rite more of this? it's great.
Well this is awesome
Pity this story is deader than a dry bone...or Discord's love life.
OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO RAINBOW'S BECOME A LAKITUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now all we need is somepony to put on a red shirt and cap, and blue overalls going around saying "It's-a me, Mario!" This ain't gonna be pretty.