(Pinkie Pie & Apple Bloom, Friendship) Pinkie Pie nearly dies in the middle of a return trip through a snowstorm in the aftermath of a bitter family reunion. Apple Bloom is thrown into a depression after a morale-shattering revelation concerning the nature of Cutie Marks. Both of them end up using their respective stories to share a moment between each other while Pinkie Pie is recovering from hypothermia.
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More Please!
(FIRST STRIKE)
1545519 As you command, my reader. -bows and retreats into the shadows to write more-
More!
Woah.
1548053 Pinkie shock face in a row? Wonder what about my story could've caused that.
I'm liking the start and look forward to how it evolves and develops. Thumbed and stared.
Fun fact: "R.L. Stallion" is a pun for the name R.L. Stein, who is the author of the Goosebumps series.
Wonderful job.
The characters actually have real emotion.
Poor Apple Bloom and
Yay update... and R.L. Stine reference woot!
Rainbow Dash must be a pretty terrible weather pony if she didn't even know what the tracking goggles were.
Btw, what do you mean here? "She was definitely scolding herself right now, agitated at the carbon dioxide-turned-vapor she huffed out." When the air is cold enough for you to see your breath, you aren't seeing clouds of carbon dioxide. The clouds you see are from water condensing out of your warm breath into the cold surrounding air. Colder air holds less water vapour and so the water condenses into visible clouds.
1569123 Well, yeah, but doesn't breathing go in the pattern "oxygen in, carbon dioxide out"? At least, for anything other than plants?
Loving the tracking goggles concept
Onwards!
Very nice and emotion-filled.
That bit with Rarity stopping Pinkie Pie from deprecating herself hit pretty hard
I don't know what you have planned for this story but RariPie is one of my favorite ships. Just so you know
Although I feel an interesting Pinkie Apple-bloom dynamic coming. 
Can't wait to see how it turns out darling
Ciao
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Fuck, having new ideas in my head always clutter my old ones.
To be honest, I'm a bit disappointed with how this came out, now that I'm giving it a once-over. But still, it's better than nothing, right? Hope I didn't keep you guys waiting for too long.
Wooooah, update yay!
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I"m not disappointed... I'm waiting to see what happens next!
Not going to lie. Writing this chapter tore me up.
Fictional or not, I feel as though I've just put someone innocent through torture. Really hope that this chapter isn't too heartbreaking for you guys to read, and sorry for possible delay.
That was pretty sad.
The feel from this story are too amazing
1740293 I try my best.
This is certainly turning out to be a rather tragic tale. If you were intending for this latest chapter to cement fears, you may have just succeeded. I look forward to seeing more.
1782901 Thank you very much!
Awwwwwww..I can't wait for the next chapter!
1928283 Terribly sorry for the delay, my author's block has been acting up again. But not to worry, it's in progress!
Awesome
2058511 Glad you think so!
Beautiful, it's nice to see Pinkie, even in her depression, still knows the wonderfully restorative powers of a smile
Ciao darling
Omg new chapter!
Must read!
Aww love this chapter.
2090365 Your appreciation is appreciated.
2090573
Your appreciation of my appreciation is appreciated.
2090283 MUST marvin it.
Loony toons moment right there for the win.
I marvin your shrenik, but shrenik a marvin shrenik. Marvin up the shrenik shrenik! Shrenik a marvin in your marvin marvin.
2203732 wat.
2204596 here is a literal translation.
I like your story, but need a new chapter. Keep up the good work! translation in your probable reply.
get it now? most things are replaced with marvins or shreniks, mostly nouns.
2204968 Oh, okay then.
Marvin you for your shrenik. Marvin you marvin forward to what is to marvin.
amidoinitrite?
(Slow clap)