Gummy is actually a secret agent accompanied by his trusty talking car, Dawn Cruise, and a few other unexpected agents to stop a threat to Ponyville.
Will he be able to save the day? or will the scientist-gone-mad Dr. Blast Burn triumph?
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Very...Agent P of Phineous and Ferb. Love the concept.
My only complaint is that the story is riddled with simple and hard-to-miss grammatical errors that I would recommend taking care before you move on to the next chapter.
30400 i wouldn't call it 100% from agent p, its a mix of alot of different spy stuff, but that is where the concept came from... but instead of a hat its a full bond tux
He's GUM-MY! Gummy the aligator!
This has got to be one of the many reasons that Gummy can be a interesting character on the show. I mean just by himself, he is an enigma that could surprise us all. Even more than Pinkie Pie, or at least on her level.
Still this is an interesting storyline as I cannot wait to see how much of a "ladies man/gator" Gummy really is to the Ponies.
SO please do keep up the good work.
<_> i have gummy keeping his character from the real series, i hope people don't take misconception that this is purely from perry the platypus.
The animal wearing clothes and commander eye patch- From and Phineous and Ferb
Dawn Cruise- Knight rider ( kinda like the opposite, the contrast from dawn Cruise- silver spy car looking and knight rider- black
Gummy's outfit- James Bond
and plot mixing with Austin powers and James bond movies
Mixing with Austin Powers?!
Mixing with Austin Powers?!
Double post, sorry.
This awesome, I'll you 4 stars alone for the premise and another star for the story itself. I'd be funny if the wacky talking Mazda Miata was a little racist or voiced by John Cleese. I only wished this was longer.
30457 Your in luck my friend, if you see a bit below the 1st chapter you will see unfinished :D
I expect Pinkie to return and say:
"Hey, where's Gummy?'
Okay, I did not expect that twist to the storyline coming. I mean WOW, I wonder if being a secret Agent can get you a Cutie Mark ?
Still, that was some update and I wish you the best of luck upon such a kooky storyline.
31021 i wonder what an agent cutie mark would look like.
31027 It would be something that nopony would make you suspect.
Delightfully surreal. Oh, but for an edit! An editor, an editor, my kingdom for an editor!
31037 i have searched throughout the lands for such a man to hold jest title, but alas nobody would dare take the gavel
Do you expect me talk?
No, Mister Gummy I expect you to die.*evil laughter*
This chapter is great, I only wish more plot happened. It's kinda like Chinese food, great but not very filling.
As long as it stays a lighthearted comedy then everything should work out fine. Oh, and props for referencing a shipping between Applebloom and Spike.
31068 lol i laughed at your comment, and don't worry not only is it like Chinese food, but also like syrup slow at first but can go into a gushing fountain.
I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY.
*calm down* Here are my thoughts:
The first few lines, urg stupid phony moon language.*too lazy to Google translate it and I only took Spanish*
Doctor's rant is reminiscent of 006 from Golden Eye.
Gummy interactions with everyone is so god damn hilarious. He is the the Dos Equis Man. "I don't always just sit there and blink, but when I do I prefer..."
The ending while not all that funny was sweet enough to give you diabetes, but not that that's a bad thing.
I really like how you really balance this out between over the top hilarity*keep in mind that my idea of great humor is slapstick and witty banter*, light action and saccharinely sweet moments.
Keep up the quality work and Peace Out.
32283 and you sir, made my day
im a fan of 007
yeah and sorry about the french in the beginning whats a spie story without french/spanish characters?
I'm having so much fun writing this story
OH SWEET CELESTIA, so awesome
YES, Dr. Hoooves makes his appearance, I wonder if Ditzy is his partner in spying ?
Nice update indeed to this story as it felt almost like de ja vu for the moment. Still, please do keep up the good work.
I assume the good doctor is in a Q like role for this fic, seeing as it's been established that is more Bond than Perry the Platypus.
has to deal with death of 
.
This chapter was filler, but the good kind like that found in Twinkies. It gives you an nice little epilogue for both protagonist as well as sets up the next chapter.
I think I ran out of things to say at this point, I mean there's only so much praise one can give before it becomes repetitive. The plot is good, the comedic elements work really well, mystery and light action work well together, yadda, yadda, yadda.
Side note: A really dark dark sequel that shouldn't be made could be made to this by following the plot to On Her Majesty's Secret Service, you know the one where Bond's wife is gunned down in a drive by shooting. Where
Peace Out.
32948 i don't plan on any type of sequel,the story will wrap itself up, and i wouldn't call this chapter 100% filler... maybe about 70% id call it more like the metal beams in the sky scraper.
OH THE WIN
OH THE WIN IT IS EVERYWHERE!
A MAZDASPEED MX-5 in a MLP fanfic? Dude Serious brohoof. You have my respect.
31027 Probably a green berret with an apple on it.
wow. not only am i enjoying the writing of this story, but others are enjoying it as well
im just getting started people
Your badassness increases everytime I read anew chapter. Keep at it. lol
Btw Big fan of 007. Pierce Brodsnan is best Bond.
Man, I love Gummy
He can be doing (almost) absolutely nothing,
and still look completely badass while doing it
So much fun to read.
Guys please check my blog on my page.
I may not know you very well, but I'm sorry for your loss. I've always been a bit envious of people who actually like their families. I really can't say more about your aunt dude, I assume she was a good person because you took the time to write about her.
But if it helps here's song that is my opinion the greatest send off song ever written. It was written by folk singer Dave carter and it's got a great melodic tune and its sad, but triumphant at the same time. It's about a man who is at death's door and he's going down fighting, basically telling death that he will not lay down and go quietly but rather live his life even as death comes assured. When I Go by Dave Carter..
R.I.P Demma
Again Bro, sorry for your loss.
Gummy as a secret agent--who knew!!
nice little story. made me laugh a little. also the last sentence "Prêt nos hommes" is it suppose to say " prepare our mens"? because if so it should be "Préparé nos hommes" and not prêt. dont always trust Google traduction
I am sorry for your lost. Even if you didn't get to know her that well, I turly did hope she played a good part in your life.
R.I.P Demma.
sorry if this chapter isn't in quite good quality, i couldn't wrap my finger around the words well enough as good as it was in my head. Hope you still enjoy it
I'm sorry about your loss. You have my condolances.
So much I wanna say about this chapter...in a good way
Switching from one on one spy battles to more of a squad based shooter. I love the part with the marines it reminded me of the DC level in COD:MW2. My only issue is that it needed a bit more suspense during that scene between them and the villain. Dr. Blast Burn truly came into his own and stopped being two dimensional and he came off as more like Dr. Casanova Frankenstein from Mystery Men and so from now on he shall be voiced by Geoffrey Rush accordingly. My expectations were blown away by the character of Dr. Whooves, I thought he going to be comic relief. Oh, and I still think the writing is good.
Batman 1960's Narrator cliffhanger voice: "Will they escape? What was Spike really doing? Will Blast Burn conquer the world?" "Stay turned to bat channel on this bat network." *Batman 1960's theme music starts playing*
34800 so it was alright? i felt that it lacked quality, i might look into re-writing it..
And here i am hoping for a Derpy Cameo. I mean she could play the Dr.'s girl Friday/Lady in Grey or something similar to a Sidekick. At least, tell me that Derpy Hooves will play a role in htis story ?
Other than that, it is a great update. Once again, I am sorry for your lost and I wish you the best of luck upon future installments of this story.
35035 :L that would be impossible for derpy to come into this story, she is in the future, Dr.hooves didn't bring her with him
The writing is undeniably sloppy yet my heart grows fonder with each passing chapter. This should not be possible... what have you done to me?
I feel the same as Nonagon,well done!
35329>>35413
I wouldn't say my writing is sloppy... I may not have perfect grammar but sloppy seems a bit too strong but yeah... still thanks for your half compliments....
My two cents:
The shield that Cruise uses.Batman 89' Joker, "Where does he get those wonderful toys?" The quick answer: Morgan Freeman.
With all the references it feels like your raiding my DVD collection and Netflix Queue.
They roll out in the car and the Knight Rider theme starts playing, which in my opinion is one the best themes to remix with it great use of synth.
The part with Spike and Applebloom: Time to whip out the insulin shots because congratulations the audience now has diabetes. I thought it very sweet and broke up the action and comedy very well. I like these periods of intermission. My only complaint is a FREAKING TRAIN SONG,SERIOUSLY GAHHHHHHH!!!! Makes Nickleback look like Slayer!!! "okay jim, okay jim, calm down." *takes breath* "FUUUUUUUUUU---*screen shakes violently, goes to white and The We Are Experiencing Technical Difficulties sign prompt appears.*
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Sorry, I just really hate Train. Musical taste aside this chapter and the one that precedes it are very good and well written as always.
Like always the story is great, yadda, yadda, yadda, lots of praise; you get the picture.
Peace Out.
35472 :L im not much of a fan of train either (i do like all music though, rap can sometimes cross my toleration boundaries)
it just seemed appropriate. Only song i like from train is drops of juptier