Pinkie pie was bustling about making provisions to take with her to the party she was attending today. She jumped into the air at her forgetfulness and turned to her pet Gummy with a sad look.
"I'm sorry but this is an important party Gummy. You won't have anyone to play with today, so please be on your best behavior for Mrs.Cake and I'll make you your favorite punch when I get home tonight!" Pinky pie smiled at her compromise and stroked Gummy's back before she bounced to her bag and placed it in her teeth and then bouncing out the door.
Gummy just stared at the door blinking his eyes every few moments before he got bored and turned around to face the counter at Mrs.Cake. He stared directly at her and his gaze was unmoving as if trying to penetrate her consciousness.
Mrs. Cake was busy making dough for some sweet bread and she was lost in her work. After a few moments she could feel Gummy's eyes staring right at her and she stopped immediately to stare back at Gummy. Mrs.Cake was starting to obtain nervous tension as she looked at the alligator and couldn't continue her work.
"I don't see why Pinkamena keeps such an unsettling pet i mean really she could-" Mrs.Cake's voice trailed off as she moved into the kitchen.
Gummy was alone and everything was quiet in the room, he just stood in his place doing nothing. A few moments later the floor opened up in front of him and a screen came up from the void space, it was a pony on the screen wearing an eye patch with his white coat and his short dark mane.
" Agent Gummy we need your help! There is a scientist gone mad in Ponyville and the scientist wants to harm everyone in your area. You're the only one qualified for this mission, you depart immediately, the fate of Ponyville rests in your hands!" The commander was worried but his face looked confident having trust in his best agent.
Gummy just stared blankly at the screen, the door opened up under him; taking him through a tunnel heading directly downwards. After a few moments of falling he landed in a mazda-mx-5's drivers seat, and going through the tunnel he was dressed in a single-breasted dinner jacket, heavy silk shirt, thin double-ended black satin tie.
The car came to life as Gummy landed within it and started talking."Welcome agent Gummy it's a privilege to work with you again sir." The car said while an arm emerged from the driver door and laid black-tinted sunglasses on Gummy's head. "Shall we begin agent Gummy?"
Gummy started gnawing on the steering wheel.
"Oh! Don't worry agent gummy, just sit back and relax as I take us to our destination. Please enjoy the ride." The car gave a loud roar and sped forward. After a few moments of driving the commander came on radio.
"Hello again agent Gummy and hello Dawn Cruise. Your destination is being altered to pick up a companion for agent Gummy, I know hes the best agent we have but he needs back-up. Sending destination link now. Good luck, Eye Patch, out."
"Destination link obtained, changing course, destination underway." Dawn Cruise turned left and started driving on a narrow dirt road.
Gummy was moving his tail to show his enjoyment of the speeding ride.
Very...Agent P of Phineous and Ferb. Love the concept.
My only complaint is that the story is riddled with simple and hard-to-miss grammatical errors that I would recommend taking care before you move on to the next chapter.
30400 i wouldn't call it 100% from agent p, its a mix of alot of different spy stuff, but that is where the concept came from... but instead of a hat its a full bond tux
He's GUM-MY! Gummy the aligator!
This has got to be one of the many reasons that Gummy can be a interesting character on the show. I mean just by himself, he is an enigma that could surprise us all. Even more than Pinkie Pie, or at least on her level.
Still this is an interesting storyline as I cannot wait to see how much of a "ladies man/gator" Gummy really is to the Ponies.
SO please do keep up the good work.
<_> i have gummy keeping his character from the real series, i hope people don't take misconception that this is purely from perry the platypus.
The animal wearing clothes and commander eye patch- From and Phineous and Ferb
Dawn Cruise- Knight rider ( kinda like the opposite, the contrast from dawn Cruise- silver spy car looking and knight rider- black
Gummy's outfit- James Bond
and plot mixing with Austin powers and James bond movies
Mixing with Austin Powers?!
Mixing with Austin Powers?!
Double post, sorry.
This awesome, I'll you 4 stars alone for the premise and another star for the story itself. I'd be funny if the wacky talking Mazda Miata was a little racist or voiced by John Cleese. I only wished this was longer.
30457 Your in luck my friend, if you see a bit below the 1st chapter you will see unfinished :D
I expect Pinkie to return and say:
"Hey, where's Gummy?'
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A MAZDASPEED MX-5 in a MLP fanfic? Dude Serious brohoof. You have my respect.
*Doooobydooobydooooowaaaaa, Dooooobydooooobydooooooowaaaa* "AGENT GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG"
Secret agent Genre? Espionage? My Favorite!! IN-F**KING-TRIGUING!! I SHALL CONTINUE!