Lyra is troubled over news that she cannot use her horn for a concert in Canterlot. This leads to her getting a little more help than she bargained for from Spike. And yes, this story is out of left field...
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crazy effin' artist; who dabbles in procrastination from time to time
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Will Read Bru!!!!
looks... interesting.......
Ok, orchestra didn't say nothing about Dragons, and Spike is now a pony. Win-Win right? RIGHT?
Wooo! Can't go wrong with a story relating too Spike, and Music. Keep up the good work, the time skipping is leaving me quite curious on what all went down during this festival.
this is gonna be interesting
and the fun part is i made a story about spike turning into a pony cause of potion ealier today
Interesting! What's up with the formatting though? Just curious. It looks like double tabbed indentations? Forgive me if I'm being ignorant. Thumbs up!
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accidental tabbing, it happens
I love body swap stories
Hmm... I don't know whether to be concerned or interested But reguardless, this was a fine story. Although I did notice some slight errors in the story, but nothing major.
I have the panels made for the last scene of the story, so expect the conclusion to come out tomorrow. It is going to be my longest so far, at around 5-6000 words in the chapter
Do mine eyes deceive me? A Lyra Romance story that doesn't have BonBon as her love interest?
This I gotta see.
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And I really hope thou aren't dissapointed
It wasn't until Luna shooed Luna off.
I'm pretty sure it's Luna Shooed Celestia off.
Other than that it's fine dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
The pacing in this story is very awkward. Somethings seem little to no importance while others needed to be expanded upon more and the emotions of the characters seem to change quite dramatically for little reason since it seem out of character for them or just wasn't enough build up for such an action. Overall the story feels lackluster to me; from an interesting idea to falling a bit flat and rushed on what could happen in that type of situation.
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I have a comic in the works for all of my stories and here is a look at page one, sort of...25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m4z182VGMv1rnksy2o1_500.jpg
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Awesome! I wish I could draw that well! Sadly, I was cursed with perks in Writing and the ability to get better at it, but no perks in art and the ability to sometimes draw decently well.
Flashbacks within flashbacks within flashbacks. Felt kinda like a pony version of Inception.
i liked this better then that movie, though.
A few typos/grammatical errors but nothing too serious. This was an interesting pairing, an interesting concept, and a pretty sweet story.
I want moar!