Fluttershy gets the hiccups on Nightmare Night and her friends try to scare them out of her. And maybe they just enjoy scaring Fluttershy too much. Their plans to scare her might work on the timid mare, but will it cure the hiccups?
This is my first piece of fan fiction EVER. So please vote and give feedback, any and all feedback is welcome. Also: Happy Halloween!
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Had to.
This is actually pretty good.
This is quite cute and fun
Indeed. If anything, Monty Python has shown it goes 'ping!'
A cute story. Scared Fluttershy is adorable Fluttershy. But I repeat myself.
I sometimes wake up by a hiccup too.