This chapter wound up a lot darker than I initially planned for, Blueblood raping Shining purely to prove a point. This is as dark as I plan to take this story.
Rest assured at Blueblood will get his comeuppance before the story ends.
Thanks alot Fimbulvinter, now I have to go clop in the bathroom before I get shit all over my keyboard. I though I wasn't going to clop ever again but you just have to be so descriptive and so talented. Oh shit, no Fluttershy! Dammit! Fluttershy caught me clopping! Now I have to go and try to do something to make her stop crying. Can't touch her, can't talk to her. Maybe hump her? She might like that. Should I? I'm married to Luna but you think she'd let me get away with this? It is Fluttershy after all...
1532970>>1533713 Yes it is true that ponies are not good at keeping secrets, but also Shining was farsighted enough to see that Blueblood would follow the trail back to Soarin' or Orion.
By Volunteering the info, he was able to dictate how it was revealed and retain some control over it.
1537661 I don't know about you, but if i was shining, i would have engineered a way to ensure that if blueblood spilled, that shining would take him down with him. and i already know a way from what you mentioned in the story. "the burning in his ass" means that there are microtears in the flesh. sure, blueblood could try and wiggle out, but that burning ass says that it was non-consensual rape and blackmail. and even in a little girls cartoon, im pretty sure there are extremely severe punishments for blackmailing a government official and and a prince consort of an allied nation. you know, little things like having his lands and holdings seized, being stripped of his title as prince, and all shining has to do is get a rape kit. i think in this situation, blueblood has more to lose. oh, and if that one blackmail against shining comes up, who knows how many others will suddenly have the bravery to speak up and bring blueblood down even more.
This chapter wound up a lot darker than I initially planned for, Blueblood raping Shining purely to prove a point.
This is as dark as I plan to take this story.
Rest assured at Blueblood will get his comeuppance before the story ends.
Thanks alot Fimbulvinter, now I have to go clop in the bathroom before I get shit all over my keyboard. I though I wasn't going to clop ever again but you just have to be so descriptive and so talented. Oh shit, no Fluttershy! Dammit! Fluttershy caught me clopping! Now I have to go and try to do something to make her stop crying. Can't touch her, can't talk to her. Maybe hump her? She might like that. Should I? I'm married to Luna but you think she'd let me get away with this? It is Fluttershy after all...
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And I like dark. I think I've told you this but I'll say it again, I'm mentally unstable.
He didn't even try to deflect or deny anything? He just outright admitted it. Seems legit.
But whatever, clop is clop.
I have a hard time feeling sorry for Shining Armor, seeing as he seems almost eager to throw his marriage away.
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Agreed. No wonder Blueblood is "talented" at finding things out: Ponies suck at keeping things secret.
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Yes it is true that ponies are not good at keeping secrets, but also Shining was farsighted enough to see that Blueblood would follow the trail back to Soarin' or Orion.
By Volunteering the info, he was able to dictate how it was revealed and retain some control over it.
I'm not much of a clopper, but this? This is art! You have talent.
1537112 Glad to hear you are enjoying it. Plenty more to come.
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yay!~ I can't wait!~
Man, this chapter sent so many chills down my spine and electricity into my heart. I loved all the adrenaline.
Let's just all agree on one thing:
Man, Blueblood's a dick.
Mother of god... That WAS kinda dark. Oh well, time to visit 'Ol Blueballs! "Grabs shield and Dragon Tooth."
1537661 I don't know about you, but if i was shining, i would have engineered a way to ensure that if blueblood spilled, that shining would take him down with him. and i already know a way from what you mentioned in the story. "the burning in his ass" means that there are microtears in the flesh. sure, blueblood could try and wiggle out, but that burning ass says that it was non-consensual rape and blackmail. and even in a little girls cartoon, im pretty sure there are extremely severe punishments for blackmailing a government official and and a prince consort of an allied nation. you know, little things like having his lands and holdings seized, being stripped of his title as prince, and all shining has to do is get a rape kit. i think in this situation, blueblood has more to lose. oh, and if that one blackmail against shining comes up, who knows how many others will suddenly have the bravery to speak up and bring blueblood down even more.