Everypony listen up. I need your help

I'm looking for a believable way in which to get Dazzle in on the action.

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Great Idea! I look forward to reading!

Hmmm.... Dazzle (shinings mom right?) gets ahold of the "manase" from the first story. Nice chaper bye the way!~

1549430 you are a good witer so you could think of fun things to do with that. But if you can't, have this idea. She finds the manase. She figures out what it is. And she wants more, but it tastes different, she wants to know how he got it to taste that way. Done. :p

1549455 whatever you decide to do, bring back the manase for comedic effect! It would be so funny! ...but it's not my story so you can do what you want with it.

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Well, you could do something with Blueblood's blackmailing, and have it not quite work out how he intended... ;-)

Just caught up, gah! I love it so much, fabulous writing.

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First of all, this story is excellent. Keep it up!

Dazzle is my favorite MILF in the series. (Mrs. Cake being a close second.)

I'd like to see Dazzle upset with her son and deciding to punish him. (This would include bondage and spanking.)
Dazzle's full punishment would come when she uses magic to give herself a huge futa cock to ream her son's butt.

Hmmm well, let's see.

Dazzle has a hunch that her hubby is seeing somepony behind her back. She goes to the guy everypony knows would know exactly who that is: Blueblood. The prince doesn't want to forward said information, so Dazzle shows him which side of the family Twilight's magic power comes from and rips it from his head. Shocked, hurt and confused, she runs off to confront either Orion or her son to verify what she's learned. She finds them together, and in a fit fueled by rage and neurosis (again, Twilight's mom), she makes them 'prove' their attraction to one another via force; or tries to show Orion she's still 'better' than any stallion ever could be. Shining Armor doesn't want to hurt his mother any more than they already have so he doesn't fight back, while Orion's simply overwhelmed by her powerful magic. Afterwards, they might manage to talk her down.

Meanwhile, Blueblood panics because he's broken his word, and goes to see his sister Cadance in order to get in her good graces before everything falls to pieces. She, however, already knows about her husband's affairs. She's appalled by her brother's blackmailing of Shining Amor; perhaps she's always suspected Blueblood was involved in some shady dealings, and that he resented her, but never realised how deep he'd sunken. She doesn't want to break off her ties with him (they are siblings. Also, the royal family has a tradition of siblings clashing like this, and making up), but before they can get to redeeming him, he needs to be put in a position where he's no threat to others, and to a lesser extent, himself. Like an "open-ended sabbatical", time actually spent in house arrest with his sister and in-laws.

That's some of the things that popped up. Hope it helps!

1551990 Some of those ideas are good. I think I can work some of that in.

1549756 That is going to be part of it

I'm mad for one reason, I clopped earlier today. I wasted a good clop on some M/F. I never got the update. Oh well, maybe I'll reread tomorrow and clop them. Oh, and about Dazzle? I have an idea.
It starts out as An orgy, Twilight, Soarin', Shiny, Orion and Cadence. Dazzle walks in on them and joins. You like? Or bad idea? Any clop is a good idea to me.

I am going to edit my editor's story.

Cadance looked horrified at the sight of her husband standing there, watching her along with a pegasus she thought he recognised.

"he should be "she".

Shining prised himself off of Cadance’s member

Should "prised" be "pried"?

Its function fulfilled, Cadance’s cock shrivelled and disappeared, sucking itself out of Shining’s body.

Isn't that spelled shriveled?
If I'm right, then Fimbulvinter! I edited you story! MWHAHAHAHAHA! I AM THE TEACHER NOW! If I'm wrong then, once again, you have done wonderful.

1557855 Some of it is right, some of it is regional dialect such as color vs. colour. You may have noticed I have always spelled Shining Armour with a u.

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That's how you guys spell it. British English is what I call it. Most of those words are like that. We say favor, you say favour. We say color, you say colour. We say Armor, you say Armour. I hate English all together. LETS WRITE THIS ALL IN SPANISH! Just kidding. But I do hate English, so many different ways to speak it. Oh, if I become successful, I'm taking a plane to Australia. I'll need you address but not now. Later. I'll be visiting maxmoefoe there so I'll take you with me when I go there. lol, M/M.

WHAT THE HELL BOY? YOU JUST SAID THAT ABOUT YOUR OWN FRIEND!

So?

HE'S YOUR FRIEND! YOU DON'T MAKE GAY JOKES LIKE THAT!

Why?

BECAUSE!

Exactly. Your argument is invalid. Now begone. Sorry about that, I fight with myself alot.

And with me.

Luna! Stop embarrassing me in front of my friends!

I love when you get embarrassed. You wings open and your horn glows a little.

Stop!

That's what she said!

Damn you Pinkie. You got me before I could say it. Why are you so fast?

That's what she said!

Stop!

That's what she said!

Please stop.

That's what she said!

I give up. You win Pinkie.

Howdy. What Ah miss?

Oh, hi everypony...

Hi Fluttershy.

What's up Applejack?

Hello dear.

Why is everypony here?

I don't know. Just let them be there. Just fade into the background. Become a wallflower.

Ah, the perks of being a wallflower.

COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT!

*Slowly steps away and mumbles* I can't stand her when she gets like that.

I'm a perk. Correct?

Yes you are Luna, yes you are...

-Reads the title before reading the chapter-, "Cadence finds out--"

Me: "Oooh damn son..."
"M/F"
Me: "Oooooooooh~ Damn son!~"

Also, That's what was missing between Shining and Cadence, a cock

1548874 the walk in is a classic.

Keeping the cock in his mouth, Shining looked up at his wife to see her staring off into space, her mouth open.