So that is how the mother will get involved. Something tells me Blueblood will wish Shining would beat him up when this come to ahead. I can hardly wait. As for the rest of this story, the...sex...was...HOT!!
1572210 My prediction based on all the crazy plot twists so far: the mother will be into hardcore BSDM and will rape and dominate Blueblood. And then of course there'll be a huge orgy.
1572210>>1572301 I've already written how Dazzle gets involved. it was meant to be part of this chapter, but I felt I was trying to stuff too much into one chapter. As for Blueblood. Tyek, you are not far off.
You just love orgies, don't you? You've got a damn teen hooked on clop. If I get a laptop and an update comes for a story in the middle of class....look out school books, here comes cum! These stories make me think you never have had sex. No offense, but those who don't have sex often write about others having sex. Am I right my faithful student?
main beg.
Dafuq was that? Isn't that supposed to be "main bed"? Oh, and loved the puppy dog eyes Twi gave to Shiny.
Please BBBFF. Fuck my ass.
What the hell was that? I love but I think you are fucking stupid! Why would you do this? Please hurry with next chapter man, I need some more stuff to clop to. And one more thing before I go: orgy with the coming soon. the participants in this shall be: Twilight Sparkle, Shining armor, Soarin', Orion, Dazzle, Cadence, Prince Blueblood. You have been warned. Now please clean up your keyboards and put your dicks back in your pants. Exit the theater through the nearest exit. Thank you and have a nice day.
1575676 No. Just saying why the hell would you do that?! I love it! I need to know why you did it so I can do the same thing. Make my stories much better. That is really what made me love this chapter so much.
1575866 You compliment me by calling me stupid, this must be one of those new defenitions for the word stupid I was previously unaware of.
As for why Shining Fucked Twilight's ass, it was partially a tribute to Bronystories 'Adventures of a Teenaged Foalsitter' in which Twilight want's Shining to fuck her but he refuses. Also I wanted to include some M/F Anal, and had already written that Soarin' was spent, so Shining was the logical choice.
(Props if you can identify the reference hidden in this message. Don't Panic if you can't)
1576007 PM me what the message is, I want to see if I got it. *snickers* I'm going to yell "FUCK MY ASS!" in my Algebra class tomorrow. Just because of this. If I remember. Thing that sucks is that there are only two bronies at my school (me and another) and I only get to see the other one at breakfast. So I never get to do anything pony related. But sometimes I can get one the computer at school and hack through and hop on this site. Almost got caught last time. If the kids at my school find out I will be beaten badly. I'm not joking. This is Cleveland (300 reference) and that's how they roll up here. Wait, how would I get my ass kicked? I'd go cray. Worse than + so never mind! Hope I don't end up in prison for murder at my age...
I yelled it. I yelled it in math class and teacher didn't catch me. I yelled it at lunch too and still didn't get caught. That's my city for ya. Oh, Fimbulvinter, a few ponies saw this (Shiny, Cadence, Twilight) and they enjoyed it. Now here's my only "unsee" moment: I walked in on Shiny. Oh how I wish I could UNSEE! But alas, I cannot unsee. Oh wait, memory lock spell!
I have some good news and some Bad news regarding this story.
The Good news is that I have this story fairly well planned out to the end. expect more futa and role reversal, Domination and 10+ pony orgies.
The Bad news is that it may not update for some time. I need to focus on getting out an update for my non clop story which is languishing ever since I started writing clop. Also I am working on a one shot clop featuring Trixie and Colgate. Have those two ever been paired together? and what would we call it? Colxie, Trixigate?
So that is how the mother will get involved. Something tells me Blueblood will wish Shining would beat him up when this come to ahead. I can hardly wait. As for the rest of this story, the...sex...was...HOT!!
1572210 My prediction based on all the crazy plot twists so far: the mother will be into hardcore BSDM and will rape and dominate Blueblood. And then of course there'll be a huge orgy.
1572210>>1572301 I've already written how Dazzle gets involved. it was meant to be part of this chapter, but I felt I was trying to stuff too much into one chapter. As for Blueblood. Tyek, you are not far off.
You just love orgies, don't you? You've got a damn teen hooked on clop. If I get a laptop and an update comes for a story in the middle of class....look out school books, here comes cum! These stories make me think you never have had sex. No offense, but those who don't have sex often write about others having sex. Am I right my faithful student?
Dafuq was that? Isn't that supposed to be "main bed"? Oh, and loved the puppy dog eyes Twi gave to Shiny.
What the hell was that? I love but I think you are fucking stupid! Why would you do this? Please hurry with next chapter man, I need some more stuff to clop to. And one more thing before I go: orgy with the coming soon. the participants in this shall be: Twilight Sparkle, Shining armor, Soarin', Orion, Dazzle, Cadence, Prince Blueblood. You have been warned. Now please clean up your keyboards and put your dicks back in your pants. Exit the theater through the nearest exit. Thank you and have a nice day.
1575504 Whats wrong with the BBBFF comment? And Don't say 'its out of character'. The Alternate Universe tag renders that argument invalid.
1575676
No. Just saying why the hell would you do that?! I love it! I need to know why you did it so I can do the same thing. Make my stories much better. That is really what made me love this chapter so much.
1575866 You compliment me by calling me stupid, this must be one of those new defenitions for the word stupid I was previously unaware of.
As for why Shining Fucked Twilight's ass, it was partially a tribute to Bronystories 'Adventures of a Teenaged Foalsitter' in which Twilight want's Shining to fuck her but he refuses. Also I wanted to include some M/F Anal, and had already written that Soarin' was spent, so Shining was the logical choice.
(Props if you can identify the reference hidden in this message. Don't Panic if you can't)
1576007
PM me what the message is, I want to see if I got it.
*snickers* I'm going to yell "FUCK MY ASS!" in my Algebra class tomorrow. Just because of this. If I remember. Thing that sucks is that there are only two bronies at my school (me and another) and I only get to see the other one at breakfast. So I never get to do anything pony related. But sometimes I can get one the computer at school and hack through and hop on this site. Almost got caught last time. If the kids at my school find out I will be beaten badly. I'm not joking. This is Cleveland (300 reference) and that's how they roll up here. Wait, how would I get my ass kicked? I'd go cray. Worse than + so never mind! Hope I don't end up in prison for murder at my age...
1576007 ahh.. I thought that was a reference to Adventures of a Teenaged Foalsitter, great work, also I love this story more and more every chapter.
1575676
It's out of character.
I yelled it. I yelled it in math class and teacher didn't catch me. I yelled it at lunch too and still didn't get caught. That's my city for ya.
Oh, Fimbulvinter, a few ponies saw this (Shiny, Cadence, Twilight) and they enjoyed it. Now here's my only "unsee" moment: I walked in on Shiny. Oh how I wish I could UNSEE! But alas, I cannot unsee. Oh wait, memory lock spell!
I have some good news and some Bad news regarding this story.
The Good news is that I have this story fairly well planned out to the end. expect more futa and role reversal, Domination and 10+ pony orgies.
The Bad news is that it may not update for some time. I need to focus on getting out an update for my non clop story which is languishing ever since I started writing clop. Also I am working on a one shot clop featuring Trixie and Colgate. Have those two ever been paired together? and what would we call it? Colxie, Trixigate?
Blueblood is such a little bitch. Hes gonn tell Shinings mommy!
2101028 and guess how that turns out.
Shining armor Is so busted! That jacked up bitch is gonna tell Shinings mommy hehe