1509759 I've added an 'Alternate Universe' tag to the story. Beyond that there is nothing else I can do. The choice of characters was based on a picture, so I did not choose them myself.
To think, if this would have been, per example, Twilight x Dazzle x Spitfire, this wouldn't get even half the hate it does now. Whatever, upvoted and followed.
even in today's supposedly enlightned society, Lesbianism is considered far more 'acceptable' than gay. E.G. a woman can have a lesbian experience and still be considered straight, while a single gay action will forever mark you.
I may do some Mare on Mare after finishing this story for comparison, but as of the moment this message posted, the likes beat out the dislikes. someponies out there like what I'm writing.
Keep the yaoi. Yuri is fine but this is really good. I enjoyed the slow romance more then the hardcore but the hardcore is wonderful too. I am following if I didn't already.,
1513572 The original idea was the Shining would be a little hesitant after waking up and that his beautiful experience with Soarin' would convince him it was right, but it turned out a bit different than in my head.
Are you trying to turn me into a clopper my friend? I read your stories, not being a clopper, and finish them on the verge of clopping. Why do I keep reading? BECAUSE YOU RULE!!!!!!! Oh, and please hurry with the other chapters...whoops. I forgot that I'M the one preventing that. SORRY!
1517829 I don't wanna clop! Well, my body does but my mind doesn't. Should I give in to my animalistic urges? I have Luna to please me yet this makes me want to clop! Am I becoming a colt-cuddler? Maybe this means I'm bi... Does it make you bi to clop to gay porn but have straight sex?
1517843 Not at all. almost every straight person will have a gay fantasy at some point in their life, its perfectly normal. I've clopped to written gay erotica but the idea of having actual gay sex does not interest me, it will never progress beyond a fantasy.
i honestly dont give a flying fuck about the character construction, this was the most erotic and delicious clopfic ive ever read... oh god, also you ow me a new keyboard
This is beyond suspension of disbelief and too OOC for Shining.
Oooh Myyyy
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i'm sorry but...
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yyyyeaaaaaaaah
1509759 I've added an 'Alternate Universe' tag to the story. Beyond that there is nothing else I can do. The choice of characters was based on a picture, so I did not choose them myself.
Homosexual futa incest.
Niiiiiiiice.
1510972 Ah Scorpio, Now there was a man who enjoyed his work.
What particually did you not like about it?
1511084 It gets worse. the Futa is a few chapters off yet
To think, if this would have been, per example, Twilight x Dazzle x Spitfire, this wouldn't get even half the hate it does now.
Whatever, upvoted and followed.
1510976 Alright.......this now makes sense to me
I DON'T KNOW HOW TO FEEL ABOUT THIS! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png
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1511273 Perfect example of gender bias.
even in today's supposedly enlightned society, Lesbianism is considered far more 'acceptable' than gay.
E.G. a woman can have a lesbian experience and still be considered straight, while a single gay action will forever mark you.
I may do some Mare on Mare after finishing this story for comparison, but as of the moment this message posted, the likes beat out the dislikes. someponies out there like what I'm writing.
I didn't hate the first one, but this fic...
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...just back away slowly, without hitting dislike, and walk away.
Just kidding. Or am I?
Keep the yaoi. Yuri is fine but this is really good. I enjoyed the slow romance more then the hardcore but the hardcore is wonderful too. I am following if I didn't already.,
1513572 The original idea was the Shining would be a little hesitant after waking up and that his beautiful experience with Soarin' would convince him it was right, but it turned out a bit different than in my head.
Thanks also for the follow.
*bows* Welcome.
Yes! Yes! Yes! Far better than the first! Still a few grammar mistakes, but hey I'm no expert.
Also... Soapy water and anal sex? Don't try that, my wife said her butthole hurt for days.
Are you trying to turn me into a clopper my friend? I read your stories, not being a clopper, and finish them on the verge of clopping. Why do I keep reading? BECAUSE YOU RULE!!!!!!! Oh, and please hurry with the other chapters...whoops. I forgot that I'M the one preventing that. SORRY!
1517671 Fear not my Intrepid readers. Chapter 2 is well underway. and feel free to clop. I spent much time writing these with one hand afterall.
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I don't wanna clop! Well, my body does but my mind doesn't. Should I give in to my animalistic urges? I have Luna to please me yet this makes me want to clop! Am I becoming a colt-cuddler? Maybe this means I'm bi... Does it make you bi to clop to gay porn but have straight sex?
1517843 Not at all. almost every straight person will have a gay fantasy at some point in their life, its perfectly normal. I've clopped to written gay erotica but the idea of having actual gay sex does not interest me, it will never progress beyond a fantasy.
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Okay, now I'll clop freely. Thank you for letting me out of this cage my faithful editor. and XD, type ur stories one-handed.
Shining armor cheats on his wife with his father and some random colt...I don't see how that can possibly be normal
i honestly dont give a flying fuck about the character construction, this was the most erotic and delicious clopfic ive ever read... oh god, also you ow me a new keyboard
Two things. One... That is asking the hottest things I have ever read. Two, how do Pegasi and mud pones pick up soap ok the first place?
4388922 MAGIC!
No really all ponies have small amounts o magic that does magnetism sort of stuff and blahblahblah