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Bandy


Mixed greens and poison ivy salad, rocket fuel vinaigrette | Hundred-proof spirits from the fountain of wisdom | Iced Ko-Fi, scalding glances.

Comments ( 44 )

Spoiler for those who didn't get it: Fluttershy and Dash were just role-playing, dressing up as Ahuizotl and Daring, respectively.

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Celestia damn my inclination to read the comments before I read the story...

Very well written. Fantastic job good sir!

Not gonna read it, because I've got so much other crap to read. Still, I give you a thumbs up!

Hilarious and sexy! I freaking loved it! :rainbowkiss:

Wait... what just happened? :derpyderp2:

Uhhmmmm...... I.... I don't know what to say.... Good story... yeah... *Awkward cough*... Uhhmm.... Yeah.

Heh... chocolate malt... now I'm craving dessert...

Nothing to say but good job.

That was funny.

Very nice, Roleplaying fics are always nice lol.
:coolphoto:

Rainbow Dash has a submissive side, who knew?

It was clever. I liked it.

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Hey, no sweat. My read later list, counting this, has 1,402 stories on it.

Ropes. It had to be ropes!

My emotions are strange. Did this make hot or did it make my dawwww...can you do both. Can story be both aggressively passionate and still be heart meltingly adorable. The answer this story. You rock! Whoo Hoo!:scootangel:

1506028 that there white text is impossible to see, I saw the comment before the read but did not see the white text until after.

I love it!

Minor thing, though:

intimidated by the mare's => Intimidated by the mare's

Funny , cloppy, romantic, and fluffy. I like it. smiles.smile-o-pack.net/3758.gif

:raritywink: Sexy Flutterdash times. :yay: Roleplaying as well? :raritystarry:

I knew what was going from the start, but that didn't make it any less sexy.

Fluttershy's so awkward at being the dominant one and screwing up was hilarious to read.

Oh hell yeah! Been looking for some light BDSM and this one fit the ticket almost perfectly!

A cute BDSM fic...who would have thunk it?

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They laughed at you! They called you mad! WE'LL SEE WHO LAUGHS NOW! :pinkiecrazy:

Haha, Fluttershy is so not Mistress material. :rainbowlaugh:

Very cute! :heart:

Fluttershy is always kind of loving.:heart: thumbs up! :pinkiehappy:

Okay, there is no way I CAN'T steal this line from Flutterbox, by Bronystories. It's totally Daring Screw and the Temple of Poon! A reenactment, I would think, wouldn't you as well?:ajsmug:

This was very hot and very cute at the same time. :raritystarry:

I was wonder what if Rainbow is reading this than I read Chan feather than my brain does a backflip with a THE DEUCE? Brilliant

1506028 Wait, that was a spoiler? I thought we were supposed to read the story knowing that. It was kinda implied by the description + character list. well, either way, I read the story knowing that, and it didnt ruin a thing for me. I feel for Rainbow though, also kinda feel for flutters, RD should have told flutters that it was just an accident, cuz you know flutters is gonna be beating herself up about the whole feather incident.

You should have a real version with a REAL rape scene :D

I'd totaly fav it.

What a story Mark...

1590521 My name ain't Mark.

1590574 That was a quote i used from a movie meme "The Room". Your story was delicious in every way and gets a thumbs-up from me. Thanks for the entertainment!

Well played, well played indeed.

It is nice that you included an explanation in your comment, but I really don't think anyone would be confused by the 'plot twist' ending.

For Great Justice!

My legitimate reaction:

You win again.

That was nice. Too bad she had a feather yanked like that. My word, cosplay sounds fun now. I'll be looking forward to reading more by you in the future.

Based on the character tags, I expected it to be a DarZotl story (we need an Ahuizotl tag) that turned out to be a fanfic written by Rainbow that she was reading to Fluttershy. I can't believe the chapter title slipped my mind.:twilightblush:

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Well, there's an Ahuizotl tag now, if that's any consolation.

More funny than sexy, but still awesome. Flutters is worst dom, and that's cute. :yay:

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