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RapeTrain-Express


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Romance? By RT!?:pinkiegasp:

This is a very good start, unless your goal was to be a tease.

A few grammar mistakes, but not enough to warrant a proof reader, just give it a once over.

I do hope you continue this story line and want to make more, you could make something great.

I'm I reading the same story from the guy who writes stories about raping ponies? It's almost like I'm reading something from someone else completely. I don't mine this in a bad way of course. The story is very great and heart warming as well!

1462327 I'm sorry, but putting Boss-38 in there has made that picture too awesome for the space-time continuum to handle. You must remove the picture immediately, before further damage is done. Or you could just put Tidus in there.

As my hands descended into the water they found her breasts down below and I gently started to massage them. Deep moans started to escape her throat once again. I let my hands gracefully rub around the edges as if teasing her. As her wet body move on mine it made me want her more and more, but that was for later and I had to focus on her treatment for now.

1. ponies dont have hands.

2.they dont have boobs either, just nipples.

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The main character is apparently a human.

1462327
Where's the Power Armored soldier from Fallout?

1466736 It did not say boobs, it said breasts, which is what they are. Although I still see people calling them "crotchboobs," which is weird.

1462327 Trishka at Optimus' foot?
Dead dicks... Everywhre...

That was a good story :ajsmug::heart::twilightsmile:

The warm feeling of her being inside me put my racing mind at ease.

:rainbowhuh:

I LOVE THIS FUCKIN STORY!!! I love Octavia so much and its great to see a non Octoscratch fic for once :twilightblush:

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What's wrong with OctaScratch?! I admire Octavia as well (She's got more class in her left hoof than Rarity has in her entire body, after all...), but I absolutely LOVE OctaScratch!

Lovely story, Octavia can’t be ignored! :twilightsmile:

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