Here have some awesomeness

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Romance? By RT!?

This is a very good start, unless your goal was to be a tease.

A few grammar mistakes, but not enough to warrant a proof reader, just give it a once over.

I do hope you continue this story line and want to make more, you could make something great.

As my hands descended into the water they found her breasts down below and I gently started to massage them. Deep moans started to escape her throat once again. I let my hands gracefully rub around the edges as if teasing her. As her wet body move on mine it made me want her more and more, but that was for later and I had to focus on her treatment for now.

1. ponies dont have hands.

2.they dont have boobs either, just nipples.

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The main character is apparently a human.

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Where's the Power Armored soldier from Fallout?

1466736 It did not say boobs, it said breasts, which is what they are. Although I still see people calling them "crotchboobs," which is weird.

1462327 Trishka at Optimus' foot?
Dead dicks... Everywhre...