Soarin and spitfire have a Colt he's what they both wanted.What will he go through in his life adventure in his blood
NOTE:This is my first story,so be nice on me
Soarin and spitfire have a Colt he's what they both wanted.What will he go through in his life adventure in his blood
NOTE:This is my first story,so be nice on me
there needs to be more VERY QUICKLY
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Indeed,i will try though,since i have school and such. but thanks that you enjoyed it :D
Love the story. Hope for more in the future.
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Glad you like the story!Ill try to put chapter two up as soon as possible since i have school and such
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I am trying my best,but i have schoool.So expect the next chapter probably on wedsday or so.. but thanks that you like it!
THE GREAT FLUTTERSHY COMMANDS MORE!
um...if you don't mind
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Oh hai Fluttershy :D,anyways i will try to Put up a NEW chapter Today.
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certainly a bold start Mr. Striker.... I SHALL READ ON
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Man,i might need your help.Message me
way better than my stories
1499742 wut... ohhhh... you just trolled yourself
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the battle of the likes
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WHO WILL WIN?
All of the spelling and grammatical errors, not to mention the formatting is completely wrong. MY EYES, THEY BURN!!!
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Hey, I've seen much, MUCH worse stories. Trust me, so next chapters, I am going to get proof readers.
Eh.... Alright I guess.. Tons of grammar errors. There needs to be a space between the end of sentence and a new one, or any other punctuation marks. I's need to be capitalized, you potential, you really do. I would suggest a proof reader...