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zetasquadron94


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♫ Open up your thighs! ♫

How far till theirs transformation go?

Don't get discouraged by the early downvotes. It's commonly believed that someone has set up a bot and some sockpuppet accounts to autodownvote any story with certain keywords in the description.

For your first smut story it's great. I can't wait to see where it goes.

when the next chapter be out?

I'm surprised that impregnation and possibly hyper pregnancy aren't among the fetishes. You would think that the magic of the island would all but guarantee conception.

Holy fuck, that was an absolutely fantastic chapter! :rainbowkiss:
Now I'm curious to see if Twilight and Tempest will eventually get another clue about the origin of this island's magic (and what new heights of voluptuousness they'll reach in the meantime). Looking forward to whatever happens next!

Is there's going to be some mind change in the next chapter?

Not bad for a first attempt at clop. If you're up for some unsolicited advice you've pretty much gone through all your fetishes in this chapter and it might be hard to not get repetitive. I would think carefully about what to do next.

This is great! will there's be Macro in the future?

Good stuff, but as Spamotron noted, you haven't left yourself much room to grow from here without repetition settling in. Here's hoping you can mix it up; there's good potential here.

When the next chapter be out yet?

When the final chapter be out?

nice work look forward to more:twilightsmile:

Good to see you haven't given up on this.

Wonder if we're gonna find out who's the instigator behind those changes soon (the appearance of that mansion seems to suggests a much different scenario from what happened to Gilda in The Griffon of Paradise).

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