Twilight and Tempest are stranded on a mysterious deserted island. There is magic here, of two varieties. Things begin to change between them, in more ways than one.
Holy fuck, that was an absolutely fantastic chapter! Now I'm curious to see if Twilight and Tempest will eventually get another clue about the origin of this island's magic (and what new heights of voluptuousness they'll reach in the meantime). Looking forward to whatever happens next!
Not bad for a first attempt at clop. If you're up for some unsolicited advice you've pretty much gone through all your fetishes in this chapter and it might be hard to not get repetitive. I would think carefully about what to do next.
Good stuff, but as Spamotron noted, you haven't left yourself much room to grow from here without repetition settling in. Here's hoping you can mix it up; there's good potential here.
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Holy fuck, that was an absolutely fantastic chapter!
Now I'm curious to see if Twilight and Tempest will eventually get another clue about the origin of this island's magic (and what new heights of voluptuousness they'll reach in the meantime). Looking forward to whatever happens next!
Is there's going to be some mind change in the next chapter?
Not bad for a first attempt at clop. If you're up for some unsolicited advice you've pretty much gone through all your fetishes in this chapter and it might be hard to not get repetitive. I would think carefully about what to do next.
Good stuff, but as Spamotron noted, you haven't left yourself much room to grow from here without repetition settling in. Here's hoping you can mix it up; there's good potential here.
When the next chapter be out yet?
When the final chapter be out?