• Member Since 1st Apr, 2012
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darf


pony-writer/pornographer looking for work. old stories undeleted. i'm sorry. Patreon here

Comments ( 36 )

Jesus. That's fucked up and beautiful. It's everything I'd expect from you.

...Well, that caught me by surprise.

...i want to stop reading, but i can't, out of fear hat you might do one i like and i'll miss it.

Uhmmmm... ok? That was something? Hot, but kinda not. Ultimately I feel sorry for her... poor thing.

Damn...I feel really bad for the Element of Kindness and I'm not even obe for second person views...but still, coming from you, this was really impressive. She tired so hard to pleasew the male that she gave up her innonoce of being with a real male....poor Flutter's. I'll give it a fav and a like but I did not really enojy the vomit.

AAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW......COME ON!!!!! My favorite villian of all Equestria was able to get off butr she does ot do the male...that's buck up! Oh well, that's Trixie for you...but damn, I would have been pissed if she would have tried that shit on me....Applejack or Rarity next if you please, save Twilight, Luna and Celestria for last if you will...hay, I'll even read a Spike and Big Macintosh one, long as the person is female of course...on to the next one!

I dont know how I would deal with throw up on my dick....

This is very relevant to my interests. Do go on.

It's just..:twilightoops:
I don't even ..:pinkiesick:

Okay, I read this because it's interesting to see another author's take on "Fluttershy gets drunk", but I was like "Urgh, human on pony? Do not want." And then "More urgh, she vomits in the process of giving oral sex."

It's well-written (as well-written as porn can be, anyway), but it's not really my cup of tea.

Dammit Darf... I've never legitimately thought, "I'm going to hell for this" after a clopfic before, but when Fluttershy pukes on your dick, and you begrudgingly decide that you can't just stop fapping halfway through... :facehoof:. Thanks for that :trixieshiftleft:

Also, Human tag please. I really should have stopped right there in the story...

I feel like i was tricked into beating up a child.

what the balls...

:fluttershysad: i can be a good marefriend

You somehow managed to make me feel worse for Fluttershy than I already did. I didn't think that was physically possible.

if you took out the vomiting i could get into it........ its still well written though....

Are you going to put that Lyra cum thing in here?

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the vomit is the best part

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i don't think so. i realized after posting this that no one really gives a fuck about short stories in a compilation, whereas other people who do 2,000 words of crap manage to get featured

even short stories are getting their own posts from now on. consider this a failed experiment

That was so painful for 'me'

Eww but somehow still arousing

My main problem with this is that horses cannot vomit.

Overall, this was a pretty good read.
For starters, it taught me to never accept a BJ from a really intoxicated girl.
Second, the image of... whatever the hell happened... was somewhat pleasing, even if I was covered in vomit in the process.
Third, I learned that Fluttershy can make a good marefriend.

So, thank you for writing this excellent, yet mildly disgusting, fan-fiction story for the community to read.
You receive four stars.
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1350182 There is a precedent in the show, though. Remember the Baked Bads?

I. AM. SO. HARD. RIGHT. NOW.

ps. good work it was great

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You call this mildly disgusting? :rainbowhuh:
Oh gawd. :applejackconfused: You haven't read 120 days of Blueblood then have you? :moustache:

You had me when Fluttershy sucks a dick covered in her own puke.
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Uh. Uhu. Ubuuuuhuhuhuhuhhhh noooooo not after the night I had last night.
I'm sorry darf but I had to skim read this one :(
Next chapter XD

Yes. YES. More Trixie please?
Or at least more of this Trixie XD

Next storyyy shall beee: Moonlight

All I have to say about this is :pinkiesick:

fluttershy why :pinkiesad2: its safe to say we all need an adult

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