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DeathToPonies


sup! im really kind and love the show and its charaters but you know how it be when those tingly feelings get involved. like my style? talk to me about custom stories and comissions!

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An upvote for having the sheer brass balls to post this.

11456876
Yeah that too, couldn't of better said it myself.

11456884
haha, it was never gone! but im still gonna be posting “normal” stories too.

11456876
Whatcha mean? :rainbowderp:

Thats not sarcasm, i fr dont get what you mean lol

11456881
Thanks for the fav! Check out some of my older works for similar ones, or if you want to get even more depraved, check out The Ball Game.

Why did you put the author's note on the second chapter?

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In the past, I’ve had a pretty bad reception to my snuff fics. Some have even called them “troll fics”, as in, I’m not trying to serve any purpose with the story other than piss people off. As this is my first one in a while, I thought it would be a good idea not only to put multiple disclaimers in the description, but also a seperate meta chapter with an eye-catching title name that would be an immediate point of interest if this content confused a first-time viewer.

I wouldn’t except it on many future ones.

also a seperate meta chapter with an eye-catching title name that would be an immediate point of interest if this content confused a first-time viewer

There's no pleasing these people, trust me. Calling them "puritanical" would be an insult to the Puritans, who realized when they were unwanted and buggered off to another continent.

11456897
I was applauding your motivation for posting this knowing full well the Vote Meter would heavily askew into negative.

Lovely as always! A little short, but very sweet. :raritywink: looking forward to your next snuff piece!

11456917
Oh! Yeah, I mean, for sure. Look through some of my oldest stories, I’m very used to this kind of thing with this content. It’s not going to stop me from writing the content I want to write. I don’t need any sympathy, literally my last story was an E rated story that managed to get featured. I’m a decent enough writer on “normal content” when I want to write regular stories.


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Sure, but I still don’t like to think of others so negatively. Yes, some people will see a story like this and immediately downvote, but if I can educate at least one person - teach one person about why I write the things I do, and explain how I still want to be a serious writer - the site becomes a friendlier place. All I can do as a writer is be mature and explain myself when asked to, and present myself in a way that isn’t misconstrued as a “troll”.

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Thanks so much! It means a lot to see comments like this. Any specific character requests? It is Christmas after all!

Canterlots Fashion District was ablaze with flame as ponies there were mutilated and slashed to crimson ribbons fit for a Hearths Warming Eve display
The dead ponies switch was not known to her killers as one by one their businesses home and families were savaged.
:unsuresweetie: Serves them right, REVENGE IS MINE!
:pinkiecrazy: Cup cakes cup cakes for every pony
:rainbowdetermined2: carpet bombing scheduled for 1700 hrs followed by an atomic rainboom
:ajsmug: We have them all
:flutterrage: Now Discord Now
:twilightsmile: How nice they're alive - friendship...
:raritycry: KILL THEM AGAIN!
:twilightoops: Wut???
:moustache: Seven times isn't enough
:trollestia: And I still do nothing for My Little Ponies
:pinkiehappy: You don't mess with a dragon hoard
:facehoof: Between dragons and Discord we'll be at this for days
:duck: Weeks darling weeks
:moustache: As you wish...

Reads like an old crime mystery novel

This story deserves all the downvotes in the world.

May you burn in hell.

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You first. I insist. :raritywink:

EDIT: I can't speak for the quality of the writing because I didn't read it, and while the fact that my computer flagged a spelling error in my quote of one of the author's comments doesn't speak well to that it isn't what you're talking about. Your hypothetical downvotes are purely for subject matter, which is not the purpose of downvotes.

11457029
Sorry it made you upset :(

That’s what the warnings are for. If this isn’t your thing, I have tons of variety on my page of different sfw genres. If you’d like to give it a shot it’d make me happy!

11457145
Hey, nobody is trying to get you to like anything. If you don’t like this content, you don’t have to try and like it. I’d never force my interest on someone else.

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Im always a fan of anything with Chrysalis and Cadence! :twilightsmile:

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Hmmm…I dont like Chrysalis very much, but I might have something for Cadence. Ill see!

This was pretty good. And I understand not everyone is in to this kind of thing, Personally I like when they try and fight more, some almost get away but just can't. Would you consider doing something where Pinkie gets strangled?

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Sure, I can whip something up. I have a few older stories you might enjoy too - Pinkies Last Shift, and chapter 2 of The Ball Game - but they’re far more graphic and intense deaths than strangulation.

I also agree - the struggle is sometimes the best part! That’s why in this story, Rarity constantly keeps finding hope where there is none, hoping she can talk her way out of it - the despair when they realize they can’t is pretty awesome.

11458576
I'll check them out. And I'm not apposed to the more brutal deaths. But like all things like this there's preferences. I'm not always big on the gore. More of the shock, the betrayal the hopeless struggle to get free. Then after they've finally let go and are dead...can't let the body go to waste.

well. this was... exactly what it was advertised as. :fluttershysad:
i mostly clicked on this out of morbid curiosity regarding other gore content I've consumed in the past but turns out the whole psychological suffering thing isn't really my jam, as opposed to, say, happy wheels gameplay or something like that. go figure
i don't really agree with your characterization of rarity here. sure, she'd probably be trusting enough to miss the extremely suspicious subtext of fancy's talk but she wouldn't try to sell out sweetie like that :unsuresweetie:
and besides- ponies eating steak?! :flutterrage:

although, i think you'd appreciate that i first read this while listening to "born to be bone" from the gitaroo man soundtrack :raritystarry:




whatd my girl rarity do to deserve this tho :fluttercry:

peppermint calamity... really living up to yout name with this one, DTP :duck:

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wasn't a rude remark nor a compliment. But, an observation. This fic was cruel to Rarity but not to the reader. What I mean is, this line

“I’LL GIVE YOU ANYTHING!!!!!” Rarity pleaded, “I’LL GIVE YOU MY LITTLE SISTER! I’LL GIVE YOU SWEETIE BELLE! RAPE AND KILL MY LITTLE SISTER, PLEASE, OH, PLEASE LET ME GO-“

took away any sympathy I had for her, specially seeing how much Sweetie Belle cared for her at the end. Would Rarity be this selfish? Effective grimdarks have some sort of respect towards the character going through adversity until their deadly end. This fic doesn't do that and thusly, hard to get a concrete reaction out of me. :fluttershyouch:You didn't want a lecture of writing pony killing stories so actually, I'm sorry

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No actually I quite welc0me it and was estatic to see your longer comment. By all means please thoroughly deconstruct my fetish shit! I really like reading these kinds of reactions. My "I'm sorry" was joking and in good fun.

Yes, the idea was to evoke her desperation. However I truly do depict Rarity as this desperate when it comes to death maybe a bit too often.

If you have the time - it's only one chapter, likely getting an entire rework - I'd love your opinion on my old story "The Mane Six Fucking Die". It depicts them, in at least somewhat attempts at Canon personalities, discussing who among them would be best suited for a horrifying end - tell me what you think of the writing?

Thanks much for your comment either way!!!!

Aside from the fact that this is a gore fic for the sake of gore, and it depicts FP as a cruel bastard...it's relatively ok.I have two nitpicks though:
1:you said that you wanted to show Rarity's desperation when she was willing to "sell" Sweetie..but considering that she is an element of harmony, I highly doubt that she would react that way.I mean(at least in my opinion) she'd know what that entails, right?
2:I appreciate that you put that pic at the end, however you said that two weeks passed when her body was found.After two weeks in a house, a body decays pretty badly.

Top three ways to kill a character, go! :twilightsmile:

I've come to realize that I like snuff things, but not sexually. once they start mentioning sex it gets weird. I just want edgy depressing stuff thanks

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Totally normal - me too. Removed from the snuff aspect, I've always since I was a kid enjoyed heart-wrenching stories of characters I love tragically dying - the sad seriousness and depression just felt like good story devices. I remember back in 2013 when I was first getting into the Fandom, one of the first fics that got me was "Circle of Friends" - and the distinct, edgy feeling I got reading a somber, sad, reflective story where the amazing characters I had spent a month or two getting to love delt with mortality

absolutely disgusted write more

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literally there's 2 other recent ones I posted within a week go look

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