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Sinful Gold


We'll write or draw anything for you. Even wholesome, consensual cuddle-sex. If we have to.

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That was a pretty cool story, definitely not my cup of tea but leaps characterization was really cool! Leaps sexuality is apparent in her fantasies, and her nerdiness is shown by all the reading. I’m confused as to what exactly she’s expected to learn about, seeing as this is a school thing, idk how she could look forward to manual labor like this, though I think that’s explained by her fantasies about what being a maid would be like.
The griffon is a dick, I don’t like how mean he’s being to leap, and how cocky he seems to be but he is a prince so that’s definitely to be expected I guess.
The story moves at a good pace and I like how it ends on a climax like this, wondering how this will continue.
In conclusion, not something I can get off to but it’s a great depiction of leap and the plot is pretty interesting!

This is really hot >.<

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I’m confused as to what exactly she’s expected to learn about, seeing as this is a school thing

Don't tell Celestia, but the EEA has set up this exchange program specifically to dispose of students like her. :raritywink:

God damn that's a good start.

I still appreciate how much exuberant hopefulness you managed to capture in Leap! Even if this is a dark clopfic, it makes it so much sweeter to have a real protagonist that maybe doesn't quite fit that's thrown into it, one that can actually elicit feelings for to savor during the exciting stuff that'll be going on. Poor pony, having to watch her crush die already.

The absolutely casual crushing of her dreams was perfect.

Ms. Leap. Leap’s heart soared at the sound of the honorific.

Still might be one of the best lines of the fic. <3

I'm so excited to see where this might go!

Oh dear... And now we see what can happen when you make a Leap of faith.

Sometimes you don't land where you meant to.

It'll be interesting to see just how far down the rabbit hole she justifies taking herself. And if she can hold on when he tries to drag her further down.

After all. Those monthly shipments have to go somewhere....

Heh, wow...

This is, uhh, heavier content than I expected to be reading with such interest!

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Yeah, I wasn't kidding about that gore warning. :raritywink: It's a bit of an acquired taste.

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Yeah, to be clear I wasn't trying to imply I shoulda been warned better or whatever. I'm hype for more!

Can't say she isn't well named, though "logical" might be a stretch.

Leap, dearie, why do you think the other maids merely sigh at the extra work you're making for them?

I suspect y'all ain't as special as you think, hon.

Really nicely tied all together! Great story ^^

There were three ways... Maybe four... I saw this could end.

This is probably the most deserved, though I wonder if the survivors are biting off more than they can chew....

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Ooooh, definitely curious to hear what the others could have been!

Anyway, I'm totally sure everything will be just fine. The only idiot here was Leap, and, well, if there's one thing that was clearly demonstrated, it's that Gerrick can chew a lot.

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1: Exactly what happened.
2: Leap did in the real Mirror.
3: Happy Ending as Gerrick finds his enthusiastic little snuff partner an amusing addition to his longer-term harem. Basically what he is d totempt her here.
4: Somehow, for some reason, Mirror decides to save Leap by offing Gerrick when he turns on her. This is the "eh, I suppose it MIGHT happen..." The most unlike!y one.

62: It was all a warped and twisted fantasy Leap was writing for a Creative Writing class that was about to get her expelld and shippedoff to be a REAL maid for a mysterious griffon patron....

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There's actually some hints in the fic that Leap has already killed "original" Mirrors several times. It's not explicitly explained really, but the "original" Mirror is just the one Mirror that has the ability to make copies. Copies can't make more copies, but aside from that ability and whatever memories they get after creation they're all completely identical. If the "original" dies then one of the copies inherits the talent at random and then becomes the new "original," and although "originals" to tend to live longer, Gerrick will usually cull them every now and then just so they don't get uppity. A spare Mirror is also kept in the basement just as insurance in case he's feeling particularly horny.

And as far as the duo biting off more than they can chew with their Equestrian tour, I expect some diplomatic immunity, subtlety, and a dash of porn-protagonist plot armor should do the trick—though many Mirrors will probably die along the way.

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Glad you enjoyed it! It was a blast to write.

This was really great. Hope to see a sequel one day.

God damn that was great. Really well-written, which is always a bonus. Ah, leap. God dammit, you are denser than lead. :p

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I mean, it's right there in her name, really. If she could stick the damned landing they wouldn't have shipped her off to Snuffyville.

Wonder how many maids he goes through lol

What a fool a callous killer is always dangerous don't go giving him your neck

She might have earned herself a semi permanent position with thisydays work

Damn killed the night after I said she might have a career here though I get his reasoning never liked others stealing my kills lol

Well now that's how one establishes dominance and makes an introduction at the same time.

This will only end in tragedy and Oh leap you know not what you you've done.

Ah the awakening of a young psychopath truly a wonderful moment in time.

Well not bad I enjoyed it more than I expected.

Mirror's ending was a fucking beautiful display of dominance.
It, somehow, didn't even strike me as vulgar.
Just a strong gryphon male taking what was his by right.

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She's a good girl that knows her place. Soon Leap will, too!

This was so fantastic. Just long enough to build up the finale, making it all so satisfying in the end. Excellent job.

Gerrick straightened up, Leap’s heart still beating weakly in his mouth and spraying its last reservoirs of blood over its former owner’s corpse. He threw his head back, opening his beak wide, and swallowed it down with a satisfied sigh.

Well, he stole her heart... literally :rainbowlaugh:

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