A man with only enough memory to recognize his new body is not his own is thrust into a new world with more power than he ever believes he wanted. He will need to get use to his new body, new customs, and new abilities as Fecto Elfilis.
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Portals
soo....request that the whole "locked Starswirl in statis" is canon for this story so they can get to yell his ears off?
This chapter was pure gold! I especially liked how Tia and Luna acted more relaxed with speaking in this chapter because they were ticked off because of Starswirl.
Oh! I gotta asked! Are you going to have Starswirl come back with the other Pillars and the Pony of Shadows so the two sisters can get their revenge/justice on him? Maybe have Twilight go through an eye opening experience at learning her idol is a complete genocidal jerk?
Before anyone points out burial and so forth in the story, some of what they say sounds like they don't know how or where he died. Or where his body actually is. That's why I asked my questions.
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I do want to do something like that, it's bookmarked on my list of "mlp episodes that Elfilis makes infinitely more complicated by existing."
Womb Juice.... that is all
Request for The MC to accidently break a pinkie promise, have pinkie chase after him and he escapes into a portal, and then she somehow finds him anyway because pinkie logic
Honestly, part of me is thinking when Discord finds out whats been going on since Elfilis showed up, he might just decide to sit back and get a better seat.
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Discord could create more chaos just by allowing his statue to crumble like a candy shell around a melting chocolate, and then just sitting back and watching the paranoia grow explosively?
Depending on your viewpoint, a portal teleportation looks very similar to nuclear obliteration, and depending on the method used, can be practically identical technically?
Don't let your faithful student hear you say that. She is not ready for another world-view shatter.
Thanks for chapter!
Have a good day!
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OH BOY, 💥 TELEFRAG 💥!!!
...that bit at the end was just hilarious! Love Luna ribbing Tia over coming up with that idea.
...though considering Aurum needs milk filled with love and they were already talking about having Cadence be his nanny, why not just use magic so she can act as a wet nurse?
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Yes please
Cause THIS starswirl i want to bucking stomp his privates so hard they go into his but then stuff lemon juice in there and take a spoon to his horn and start chipping away.....or maybie do that last bit first then wait for him to wake up for the first bit...hmmm...also..plz delete the comment I just put if I took it to far
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That...is actually true..but we don't know baby's biology enough so we don't know if there was somthing like royal jelly in what crisi was feeding him or if it was just the liquid emotions...or what milk would do to him...specially since this world's changing are actually a bit different from the few thousand other examples I know of.
Nigh irrelevant at this stage but the "penis!" jokes in the first few chapters were easily the lowest of this story's comedic repertoire.
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I'm actually happy to hear that.
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Well the author had to have Twilight go for the low hanging fruit.
...im not apologizing.