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FashionablyLate


I'm asocial. Feel free to message me but please don't be upset if I don't respond. Go easy on me guys.

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Apologies to the moderator, I don't know what all the edits I just made look like while this is waiting for approval but I am blind and missed half of my spelling errors even after 2 passes through. Ill try in the future to have functioning eyes so i'm don't spam small changes in the future

Reborn in a new world with only the memories of playing Kirby and the Forgotten Land, in the body of a (bafflingly) anatomically correct Ultimate Lifeform, a man now going by the name Elfilis is lost in every way. He will have to master his new powers, his new body, and his very soul as he tries to make a new life in Equestria.

Shadow the Hedgehog wants to know your location. :pinkiecrazy:

Twilight got a full face of penis that was pretty funny

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Yeah, Nintendo totally had that one coming.

Fear the allmighty NIGHTMARE PENIS!!!!!

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Where did he even come up with that!? And why?

P.S. Are they still ponies?

Luna was laughing though, probably out of shock, but Celestia would take it. She needed a win today.

You could end the story here and I would not be upset. Just having this whole thing be a means to get Celestia to say penis would be worth it :rainbowlaugh:

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Yes, they are still four legged bundles of cute

The Chastity Spell.

Make me wonder why her mother thought it is necessary to teach Twilight this spell in the first place.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! :rainbowlaugh:

Nightmare P****!!!!! Really funny. My sides hurt from laughing so hard. 😁

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It's not going to be super prevalent, but the unfortunate parts of life will be mentioned and be included. It only serves to make the better parts stand out more, make them meaningful. Not even the original show kept things happy-go-lucky all the time.

Ok hope to see more soon let's see where you will take this

"No, no it was not Twilight." Celestia didn't know how to handle a creature that could so casually open stable portals that travelled through space-time that it used them to use the restroom in peace. "He could have just walked down the hall, but nooo..."

when you need to go you need to go

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Thank you kind sir. Glad you are looking forward to it

If you need an editor for your story, I can help you. Send me a message if you accept.

I think Im going to tentatively place this story in the comedy class level of Baldrick. :pinkiegasp:

I have never played a Kirby game in my life, but I'm interested to see where this goes.

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It's a wild ride, and I intend to explore the craziest parts

I'll have to read this sometime. I just finished Kirby and the Forgotten Land earlier this week. At last check I was 75% done on the time I have it from my public library

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From Blackadder? I'll have to give ot a watch if so.

Oh good greif, Pinkie was up to quality here, but the comments are now distracting me with the idea of Baldrick and Mr Bean running the corner shop from Open All Hours,

Dealing with the Nightmare, Tantabus and all the Evils is one thing, then he has to deal with PinKirby and freinds trying to help? :pinkiecrazy:

Featured baby! I know people get annoyed by authors pointing it out but I'm flying by the seat of my pants here and I only started this two days ago, so I'm going to do my own little happy dance and fail to fall asleep tonight.

Edit: or at the very least Im in the "Whats Hot" section. I dont know this website.

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story so far, bravo I'm looking forward to the next update

Hope Frontline appears more often as I found her interacts with Elfilis hilarious. BTW, would we get physical descriptions of the characters?

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Later, when she isn't covered head to toe in armor.

Mmmm... que se chinge la historia, si fuera yo me hubiera cabreado tanto que hubiera traído el sol de nuevo al cielo jaja

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Hey, una madre sobre protectora sabe que cosas enseñarles a sus hijos, estoy casi seguro que mi papá le enseñara a mi hermana donde golpear duro a un hombre malo

Por alguna razón, siento que lo más gracioso del fic van a ser las bromas aleatorias sobre el pene al descubierto del protagonista (espero seriamente que no me sea eliminado este comentario)

I really hope that this story will not end on chapter 10 with nothing (if anything, sorry for google translate)

"He could go to any party he wants?! He's Mr. Worldwide!"

That's a nice nickname. As expected from Pinkie. Although the only wide part of him are his ears.

Wait, so whatever is manifested in Elifilis' dream can be brought into the real realm with a proper method? I know Twilight and Pinkie would go crazy with this news.

"You are now free of the parasite known as Nightmare Penis- DAMN IT ALL!"

*Here lies Teraunce, dead of laughter Aug 28th 2022 0446*

Well congrats. You've managed to break me. Have a 9/10.

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My goal is complete. I'm glad people seem to be enjoying it.

not a bad story, for your first
you've got my interest thus far

I love how the Fimfiction is going so far, keep up the good work.

I mean, yeah, sure, HiE has always been the favoured genre here on FimFic, so it's not really a surprise when...

*Checks the author's account* Wait, you made it to the feature box on your first try? Alright, mares and gentlecolts, I think we've got a very good author in their rise to reign.

I'll be back later when it's tomorrow and I have taken the time to read your work. I really look forward to reading it.

If you'd like to borrow an OC, let me know via PM.

If I want to in the future, how do I add my stories to group folders? I can't seem to figure it out. Or feel free to do it yourselves I'm not your real dad.

he made a kirby? can he make a luna too? prefreably a smaller one for kirby to be frinds with

Can't say I love the idea of uninvited sexual jokes, but I do love repetitive call-backs. Well done on making my sides as hurt as the girls'.

Oh My Glob he portaled Kirby.

Btw I don't think your overdoing the nudity, I think it's funny and not a topic most authors would think to cover.

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Can you specify what you mean by uninvited?

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Sure. The word held no negative implication in this context. What I was trying to say is that, although laugh-inducing, the sexual jokes were not foreshadowed except for that there was a warning tag in the description. You, the author, did not invite the jokes into the story. Instead, you threw them in, and the jokes, at the very least, bumped into me harder than what I think jokes should. Thus, the first half of the comment in question. Basically, it's not the sexual jokes that I didn't like, but how the storytelling seemed not to have necessitated them.

Aside from that, I'm enjoying this story very much so far. An upvote to your hard work.

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I see what you mean, but I think I'm saving subtlety and build up for relationships, and I'm not sure I can think of a slow way to introduce them anyway that doesn't make them lose their impact. I hope you continue to enjoy the story regardless though. Thank you for humoring me.

is this kirby gonna disappear after a while or are they gonna be permanent also are they the real kirby or are they like a clone of it?

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