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Lulamoon-Crystal


Trixie is not a dinosaur!

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What if Trixie hated her job? What if being a magician wasn’t great at all? Why did Trixie’s cutiemark have to be what it is?

Based on existing episodes but Trixie has the opposite views on herself as a magician.

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Comments ( 8 )

Even though the written English is sometimes mispunctuated a bit and could use a proofreader, I can ignore that and think this is a pretty good take on the 'pony is unhappy with her cutie mark' idea, not to mention looking at the 'story behind the story' in a classic MLP episode.

11316847
Huh, that’s weird because I put it through a corrector. Are you able to point a few out?

I love it! I can't wait for new chapters.

11316867
Well, I did PM you a couple of punctuation/capitalization fixes.

By the way, even though you marked this story as "Incomplete," I think what you've written also stands ok on its own.

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Yeah, sorry about that.

Also, I do have a plan on what happens next but that’s nice to know in case I change my mind

Nice story, looking forward to more chapters!

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I know the story's complete

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