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Well, I've sent the whole thing to my proofreader 5 days ago. (S)He must be a busy person, so to speed things up a bit, here you go. It will be updated to proofread status ASAP.
What comes in the next chapter? More fighting of course, we finally have the culprit right there before us. I know, I know... Me and my cliffhangers...
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For everyone who wants to begin writing a sidestory, here's a little hint you might want to consider if your sidestory takes place in the future of our current state of the story: In Book Two will be the first official contact on Earth, an event that will go down in history as "The Manhattan Incident".
The Manhattan Incident will be like the "First Contact" in the Star Trek universe where Zefram Cochrane made contact with the Vulcans... only that it doesn't go THAT smoothly. You will tell by the time you see the story cover picture of Book Two. That picture is finished by the way. I won't tell anything more as of yet, but just in case you want to bring in some "recruits" for human rangers and want some historic event to point at. Maybe a bit dictating, but I only want to give you a direction so that you can avoid rewrites.
Great pirates of the caribbean joke, and I like how this new chapter join the group, did Grinko will stay with them from now on? Or when the adventure is over he will return home?
Also I see that Flyn is starting to get flirty, did he will start to seek some bat ponys for herd mates? And you know with the level of rage Ratchet keep showing, I start to think she has a crush or something, really when she is mad and start argue with him I'm almost yelling, will you just SHUP UP and kiss him already?!
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Grinko will stay for a bit. i think the debt is being repaid somewhere in Book Two... In the meantime... Well stuff's going to happen to the big feller. I have an idea what to do with him. With some human omnivores in Equestria, he could hunt for a living... I emphasize could, nothing's settled yet.
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Ah see, I also see the hint you make with Ratchel, I wonder if she is a cat person
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Rachel becoming a crazy old cat lady? Funny thought, but I don't think so...
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Not exaclty what I was referring, but yeah its funny
This chapter is just full of win. Flynn unknowingly flirting with a bat pony, a Pirates of the Caribbean reference, and blowing a flying fortress out of the sky. That deserves an achievement unlocked icon. Bringing Down the Sky.
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Atleast let Equestria get to choose who will cross the boundary between worlds.
I expect that Equestria managed to control these 'wormholes' and will only bring in humans that they deem worthy and not evil in any way.
2540024 what was the pirates of the carribean reference?
The setting of the bombs reminds me if a scene in the new deadpool game.
How much do we need?
About six metric ounces.
Ummm...F*ck math! Use all of it!
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Don't forget the Tremors 2 ref.
Crap...