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Frankly I'm not sure if I got Applejack's dialect right. As always constructive critic is welcome and have fun to read it.
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All is ok whit Applejack i think , waiting for more , or you are going ito sleep forever
Read later, but looks interesting already.
nice pyro refrence there =)
I like it.
Can't wait for the next chapter this is rather good!
I can clearly see where this is going....QUICK TO THE BATCAVE!
this is all i can say
Dat maturity lol
I loved the Skyrim reference in the first chapter, sorry, forgot to say it then, so... i'll say it now!
GOOD JOB! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
1304815 ... No.
That cowered thing is REALLY annoying. Plus you keep changing tenses mid sentence.
ya=you
yer=your/you're
y'all= you all
Author DO YOU BELIEVE IN MAGIC?
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Bow chicka wow wow!
Ummm... Yeah, this story is alright but it needs a MAJOR revisement big time. Maybe even a rewrite.
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sweet merciful baby jesus that was a good reference
1702101 there was a skyrim reference in the first chapter? What was it?
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You missed the adaptation of the trailer? Really?
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a hint "there is one they fear. in their tounge he is dovahkin dragon born FUS ROH DAH"
2625285 It was the song from the ancient book. Was really similar to the skyrim main theme.
Everytime Rarity says Hunk, I think of a fat black ghetto lady lookin' for a man.
How was NOT thinking at THIS:
I feel insulted on behalf for all humanity by Pinkie's name guesses.
What I would have done in Tyler's situation:
"Timsy-wimsy? No…Slenderwalker? Nooo…Oh! OH! Giant hairless! Giant hairl-"CRACK!
"NO, BITCH!"
3602021 lol. thank you for posting that. that really made my day xD
When I saw the TF2 reference, I immediately started singing the song for it.
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I had never seen that video before today I replayed it like 5 times and now my ribs are scattered all over my room....
could you come help me pick them up... i-i-if y-you don't m-mind that i-is.....
This looks to be a interesting story. If the Human bashing continues I will stop reading but other than that the story is well written.
Hilarious
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! My sides!!!!! Ahahahahahahahahahaaaa!
#MeetThePinkiePie-ro
Ok, you definitely won me over with that Star Trek line.
That happened...
omg that tf2 reference XD
Condoms?
Oh..... heheh oops?
tf2 refernce
pyyyyyrrrrroooo
Words can't describe how much I want Twilight to stumble across the horse head in the bed scene.
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that is a very fascinating avatar!
That's a little gross. The guy just got back from the field and didn't shower before he went to bed.
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And ran till he needed to change clothes.
That was epic can't wait to see where this will all go.
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One of the things that bugs me the most is that some characters don’t speak like they normally would. Rainbow is not as articulated and flow-y in her dialogue
I think what he means is: Humanity as a whole is horrible and evil; while individually Humans are generally decent creatures for the most part.