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Now where are my fava beans and my Chianti?
The thing with the ocean water pillar... i got the idea from this picture.
Maybe the gravitational pull of equestria pulled the water out of the ocean, I haven't thought about the mechanics of this in detail. Then again: Who can explain to me the mechanics of a transdimensional vortex bridge between two dimensions that functions as a one-way street?
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Yeah... I thought so...
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Well, when planar thingamabobs line up with dimensional doohickeys, and then the gravitational thingies line up in perfect harmonial synchronization, then a space time bridge parallel is possible to form and give someone a baaaaad day.
So yeah, totally just made that shit up, hope it at least gave ya a grin. : )
Anyways, nice chapter to the story, although the foreshadowing was kinda saddening, makes me wonder what is gonna happen, since at the moment they are all happy with each other. Really hoping you don't break that up, I really do. Then again, maybe that future that she has foreseen has already been changed, but as of now it is an unknown. I will admit I love romance, and with Celestia and Luna both being happy with Tyler, really hoping that nothing drastic occurs to break that up. Nothing really major to comment, holding off on the two new characters till they end up in Equestria and start mingling some.
Till the next chapter, cheers!
The part where Tyler was thinking about how 'beautiful' Applejack was as a human kinda left a bad tast in my mouth. That human form isn't really her, so to think so highly of that form over her normal one is kinda mest up to me.
Still don't get why the alteration had to involve changing into a human when it really didn't, when just altering the egg would have suficed.
Anyway, this was another excelent chapter. Nothing much more to say.
Good luck with all of your endeavors.
1669002 She was in her normal pony form as he thought that. maybe a bit too inprecise of me... So, no! He wasn't meaning her actual human form with beautiful.
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Hmm. Maybe it was because her human for was mentioned eariler that I though that.
Something I forgot to mention, I wonder how the ponies are going to react to a flying machine that makes a lot of noise? Should be fun to see how you handle that.
Yay! Applejack's expecting! } woo hoo!
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You know that actually makes perfect sense in a way.
Nice, Hannibal XD Another great chapter and am eagerly awaiting the next.
Did the humans will be trap forever in Equestria or did they are just a part of a new story and then leaf to Earth again? I can see them react a little violence when they arrest them and brought them to Tyler, then they will try to bring Tyler into there plane claiming that he is just delusional, do to insolation of human kind, and need help, and when that fail, they will not believe Apple Jack being pregnant and just, knock him off, kidnap him and drag him in ropes into the plane.
P.S: Did Blueblood will be forgiven? I think he has suffer enough, I know that Candace was in rage, but I think the violators were to much, yeah he is a dick, but he still is a living being and there is a line between poetry justice and just being sadist.
And finally, new humans? Rarity will have another chance, IF one of them turn up to be as good heart as Tyler.
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Lots of questions here... I'll try to answer them.
1) Will the humans be trapped on Equestria forever or will they leave for Earth again?
As of yet, this fact is unknown to me. Haven't decided yet.But, even if I will decide for them to return back to Earth, this information remains classified until it happens.
2)Will they kidnap Tyler to bring him back to the plane?
Depends how the airplane arrives in Equis and where. A wreckage can't fly anymore, can it? Also Tyler now has learned enough to defend himself.
3)Will Blueblood be forgiven one day?
That's a good question actually... Would you forgive him so soon after he abandoned your husband on the battlefield to the archenemy of ponykind? Even more, to the archnemesis who almost stole it from you? Maybe after a journey through a world of pain, when his voice has become more girly... Then, maybe then, Cadance might forgive him.
4) I take it the last question asks if there will be more shipping with the new humans...
Maybe...?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra2.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia2.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png There come two men and one woman... Leaves plenty of opportunities, doesn't it?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
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Plenty indeed, as for the question of Blueblood, I agree with vengeance is in order, and forgiveness require time, I only said that he already spend, what? 3 or 4 mounts with those goons? For more that I dislike him, I will like to see him have a change of heart, to understand his action and tried to emend them.
I will like to see a little talk between him and Candace, where she tells if he now understand that for more pain that he experience she experience one even worse with what happen thanks to him and to Chrysalis, and it can be a little heartwarming if he told her that he actually never love or something like that or even better, he always was afraid of show affection (If you are interest into the why let me now, is an idea that I thought)
Also, I can imagine the griffins where only the beginning, or else, he eventually would had find a way to kill them while there were sleep, he is a unicorn after all. Only said that Blueblood can or have a change or heart or can became a new villain that will join force with the changeling and maybe became the first King. Just a suggestion
Oh my, a chapter in less than 10K words!
COMMENCE READ
And now that I read it, I CAN'T WAIT.
Being such a big fan. Raining upwards. A nod to dr who?
Oh, big fan of both dr who and this awesome fic!
Nice description of the "phenomenon" there. People who have claimed near misses there tend to report two things, clouds forming vortexes just like that, or strange weather charged with "St. Elmo's Fire" in a most unnatural green tinge as I chose for my tales, "Space Pones" and "Gulliver's Last Travel".
It's a good sign somepony does his homework.
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Actually it becomes better that way. More conflict and all that.
Throne, talk about a cliffhanger!
They are not going to comeback are they?