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TheMessenger


Amateur fanfic writer and reader. Sometimes I get dreams, dreams of ponies, and wish that someone would write a story based off them. So why not me?

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Spike always thought the hardest part was getting Rarity to say yes. Well it turns out that that was just the beginning. With dates to schedule, invitations to send out, venue reservations to make, dress preparations to complete, and new in-laws to deal with on top of his usual responsibilities, the princess’s number one advisor would’ve had enough on his plate without the fear of the legendary “Bridezilla” rearing it’s ugly head and leaving everything in ruins.

The only way to keep the mighty ender of marriages at bay is to make sure Rarity’s stress levels stays low, and if that means Spike will need to plan the whole thing by himself, then so be it.

This day is going to be perfect. No matter what.


Written for Pia-Chan’s Sparity Contest.

Cover Image source: https://dribbble.com/shots/4309812-Bridezilla

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 7 )

You get bonus points for referencing a second iconic Kaiju in the title.

Wait until Skelinor finds out...:eeyup:

:moustache: Okay now that that's done go to the kitchen and get me a sandwich.
:duck: As long as you're going to take care of business , Like foal sitting, bathing, dress designing, shopping, laundry , house cleaning and so on.
:moustache: Must be one heck of a sandwich
:raritywink: Peanut and ruby - Oh and rub my hooves too.
:moustache: On it
:facehoof: Spike, You're a husband not a slave!
:moustache: You trained me
:twilightoops:
:raritystarry: Oooooooohhhh perfect , Some dragon's getting another sandwich ...

An excellent story with good plot, nice twists, small surprises, and good feels! Good characterizations all around, and good grammar!

I know this for a contest entry, but it's kinda a shame that you weren't able to post this a chapter-at-a-time rather than all in one go. I think you would've gotten alot more views and attention that way. As it was, I just happened across this story because I was looking at Spike stories that were posted at the time.

Still, very good! Have a thumbs up!

Whoops. Just realized this chapter was missing an entire paragraph. Fixed.

I admit i personally feel that you did yourself quite a disservice with your choice in title and cover image. I decided to read through the entries to the (discontinued?) Sparity contest from Pia, and it were those two factors that convinced me to take up your story last, and for a while i debated whether even to pick it up. Which is a shame, because there's a funny story inside, one that i think would deserve more views, but my guess is that the wrapping turns off greater numbers of readers.

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