The story is a dead space crossover about a soldier working for Earth Defense Force.
How will the natives respond to him and how will the battle hardened soldier respond to them.
The soldier's past is filled with regret which will it affect his future here in the magical land of Equestria.
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of typos... Not really spelling, but punctuation. In future
writings you should use more punctuation to make the
story flow better. Either way, AWESOME
Your story is in dire need of improvement... I'm not saying it's bad... but it's not good either...
I will fix things up of course but I have other matters that need to be taken care of first I hope everyone understands
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Story could be better like his reaction, i'm pretty sure he would have freaked out from seeing them, other than that it's pretty interesting, cant wait for next one
>>zach9127
The next chapter will be going more into his past . It will also explain why he seems more apathetic to things happening to him. Ex: When he was fighting the necromorphs, and he didn't express much fear. This will be explained in the next chapter.
On another note I need three names for people in his old squad; a Medic, sniper, and captain. Any help will be appreciated.
MOAR MOAR MOAR
DONT WRITE A WALL IT SUCKS also good job grammer pjnctuationa and paragraphs need lota of improvement
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH luna is going to have nightmares
1334374 OMG nice pic bro!
She gonna shit bricks!
She shall have nightmares of mightmarss while shes in his nightmares and also he might notice her and grab her and snap her out of the dream
I really like the story, but you seem to lack some quotations, but all in all I LOVE the story, i absolutely love dead space crossovers, do you think you could tell me when your next possible chapter will be out?
this story is so good
not even that wall of text can stop me
just played DS2 and....goddamn were there alot of police corpses
i have no idea
if you take the royal guard
pro: he could be in his element here+good payment
con: he might have to take off his awesome suit and abandon his gun
twilight
pro: live with twilight
con: no payment whatsoever, you'd be a blood sucking leech feeding off of twilight(atleast you'd feel like one), and share human technological advancements which require resources that they dont have and technologies that require parts that reference other parts who in turn requires technology that references other parts that they dont have. for ex: planet crackers(god knows why she'd want those) you tell her how it works which would then lead you to explain the engines, which you would need to explain what rockets are(being an essential part of the engines&all) which would then reference to fuel that they dont have, they use coal to power their trains. artificial gravity, gravity tethers, docking bay, life support systems and all that jazz
court
pro: good pay, you get to live in canterlot
con: working hours=unknown, boring, if his dementia wont make him insane, sheer boredom will(lulz)
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these are all good pros and cons,
i would choose twilight because i would explain things slow.
exsample: i first teach her about weapons used at around the 17th centurey such as rifles and pistols. (assuming ponys know what black powder is)
1623750 just the existance of fireworks confirms they have black powder which could be used as GUNpowder, though i dont see why they'd need guns in the first place. criminal rates could skyrocket along with added firepower, but firepower is why you got celestia and the elements yes?
and with added firepower comes the feeling of being invincible which leads to control freaks and demand of more power, which leads to corruption. now corruption could end in many ways, impulsive behavior and Rage, both of which ends up in violence. OR organized Crime. either way, violence and organized crime cant exist if Peace and Harmony is to be present.
If I were him I'd choose twilight, for if there were to be another attack, better technology wouldn't be bad, and if there was an attack he could just ask to join the skirmish while working with twilight, as far as princess Luna's request might be a bad idea considering that basically all humans become corrupt with power and he can just give some tips here and there. Plus he can just meet celestial whenever. I can't wait till next chapter
OH GOD TO MANY POSITIONS!!! *runs into the night* i suck at decisions!!! get away from me!!! *hiss* HELP!!! *runs even faster*
Yay! An update, I really like your story so far. It just needs some editing and all that good stuff.
CAn't make up my mind "BOOM" and there goes my head!
Yeah, good chapter man. Do you have an editor or proofreader? I'm not interested I would probably suck at doing that, just wondering is all.
>>Mintmetal
I don't have editor yet, I've been working on the story solo so far.
You should then let him word at apple jack farm to earn a living
Huh that scene remined me of Fallout New Vegas how the NCR had killed innocent great khans. But great story so far.
Finally a new chapter
If you want bro, I can give your chapters a pre-read before you post them so you can have someone to catch all the mistakes you make.
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BTW, Like the name. A spetnaz pinkie would be terrifying.
1848125 lol no every human story does that
I like where this is going, iam glad you didnt go with shining for the royal guard thing, to many HiE's have them going that direction and being total bad ass's . Iam torn alittle in terms of introducing the Necro's or not. Personally no cause well there aint no maker for one, turning into a puddle of goo tends to ruin the evil plot of Necro's. In a way id like to see this go in a direction of self healing for the Main characters mind (granted that can be boring as hell) but ive seen a couple pull it off. All that aside you've got a good piece going here, ill be watching
hmmmm with the lvl of tech in equestria he could only teach them to make crossbows nothing really beyond the Renaissance at best
1972352 fancy meeting you here
so you put me in the story just to kill me what a good friend you are.
story going good so far but you need to lay off the video games and get another chapter out
how about hr skips party goes to everfree kills manticore , cook then eat the big ass cat
2443587 or those creatures from the ship follow him.
Can you make him go back to eplore where he whoke up???
mmkay...
Do a chapter where he gets his pulse rifle back and another soldier finds himself or herself in equestria so he's not the only one of his kind there
WORK AS A GUARD its more interesting than talk about things useless at most
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At lest it could have most content with others offer