The princess of the night has never been fully accepted back into the community, whether it was because her subjects felt she didn't deserve to be, or because she felt she didn't. She is still fighting with her inner demons, as well as attempting to redeem herself of her past sins. These days, it seems the only one who treats her with full respect is Celestia.
Or at least, that's what she believed, until one shy, winged, animal caretaker meets her.
A/N:
Humanized fic. (Luna is best, pony or not, Fluttershy a close second.)
Seeing as this is a human fic, I had to invent some lore.
Winged Ones or Angels= Pegasi in human form. (people with wings)
Talented or Mage/Magi= Unicorn in human form. (no horn, just magic)
Terra= Equestria (different name cause of implied pony stuff)
Camelot= Canterlot (same reason as above)
Please comment. Please Like and Fave it. Uhmm... Oh, and any ideas are welcome, cause I want this to last a while.
What a coincidence!
Not entirely sure why someone downvoted this, it is really well written. The only real cc I can give is the near constant use of calling Fluttershy an angel is a bit...odd. but it is really good.
well written my good sir but why would i expect anything less then form the one who wrote new perspective
Why did you not tell me you already finished chapter 1!
Anyways, auto-track, but can you expect anything else?
1231607 i wouldve told you but i finished it this morning and was at school when it was approved AND posted
1230528 if i may... what coincidence is that?
1231772 Her username is Serenity, and the title is Serenity
1231778 that was the point of the trollestia face
seems interesting, will read... after I empty my update folder of new chapters
1232835 mm... i know that feel
i got so distracted writing this and three other stories that ive given up on reading the stuff in my faves list for a while
maybe at all...
Added to "read later" because of the description.
Some suggestions: A cooler-sounding plural of "mage" is "magi." A cooler-sounding word for "angel" is "seraph" or "oraph" (both of which are pluralized with an "-im:" seraphim or oraphim). And the best name I can think of for earth ponies would be earth dwellers, though a simple "human" could work as well.
Good luck with this. I hope it meets my expectations.
1233292 magi... i knew that but never thought of it... and im actually quite satisfied with just angels (this way i get to call Fluttershy an Angel
)
Well if you gave pegasi and unicorns a different name, then what would an alicorn like woona be?
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You have a point there. I guess the term goddess would be sufficient but then again that is in my perspective.
Great concept by the way.
1234161>>1234773i thought I established that it WAS in fact goddess...
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Well then I didn't pay real good attention to it. My bad.
1237162 no problem bro
Intriguing story. Will watch. I like how you actually gave the pony races humanoid equivalents. Too many just say "um these humans can fly, these do magic, these are normal." But you made pegasi angels and unicorns mages. I assume earth ponies are just regular humans. Personally, I would have gone all the way and made the unicorns "elves" so they could still have a defining physical attribute (pointy ears instead of horns) so the alicorn goddesses can still be a physical mix of all three pony/human types.
My favorite humanized stories are the ones that really try to turn Equestria into a fully realized fantasy world rather than just "Equestria with Humans" so I'm liking this one a lot. Can't wait for the next chapter.
1242654 i hope to do more like this (maybe even same cannon) so thank you for your opinion. It makes me feel gooey inside to hear you say that
Beautiful chapter. This story has a lot of potential, so don't muck it up! Nah, but seriously, so far so good. I look forward to seeing where tit goes from here. I like your writing style, it gives a nice flow to the words, even if a few phrases sounded a tad awkward (though really only a few). Speaking as a reader from one author to another, keep with the mood this chapter gave. It was perfect.
Yay for non sad Luna
1279675 oh, i'm not done yet
Twilight is not oblivious to romance that's new
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Boo for possible sad Luna in the future.
Also
gief MOAR
1279691 yep... i tried something new
You're keeping the characters who they are, but experimenting with the possibilities. Adding a little more depth to them.
I like this.
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Pretty much
I just realized. Wouldn't a TwilLuna/TwiLestia/FlutterLuna etc. be Pedophilia?
Just a thought.
1299757 uhm... i dont think so, cause Luna is a goddess, so age isnt relevant to her
1300136 Well, I do believe Mane 6 are atleast 18 or over.
This is interesting. When is the next part coming out?
1370192 NOT. A. CLUE.
1370192 Hopefully soon.
Glad to see this update, it's a good story and I am curious to see how everything turns out considering the circumstances Luna and Fluttershy are in.
Nice
Awesome:D
Cool! But...where is she flying to? Back to Ponyville?
1600457 We'll find out won't we?
i swear fluttershy must be some kind of god or something like gaia or someone
she has complete control over just about every animal
When I see "Nightwing," I think of this guy.
http://www.hyperborea.org/flash/bigimages/nightwing.jpg
That's how I'm imagining Luna's guard, if that's okay with you.
1658194 I was wondering how long it'd be before someone noticed that. Yeah that wasn't on purpose; I introduced that character then realized the name thing the next day.
I could not help but think of this when I saw the name.
Gah! Why must you be cancelled? >.< I thought it was taking too long for a new chapter....didn't even get to see where this was going really. x.x