• Published 30th Mar 2021
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Cookiemilk’s Pokémon adventure - MelodyStories



A short spin-off to Cookieheart’s story! Queen Cookieheart died, and her daughter goes on a Pokémon adventure to stop the evil Twishy Wishcake from putting a spell on Discord and kidnapping her mean siblings.

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Cookiemilk saves the day!

I ran over to my family as fast as I could but I was too late. The evil pony got them. The siblings disappeared, and Discord had swirly eyes.
“I love Twishy only.” He said.
“TWISHY WISHCAKE WINS AGAIN!” she said evily.
I quickly jumped on her and shook her until she was dizzy. She got mad and opened a strange portal and put me in it. I screamed as I fell through the hole and landed in a grass field. What is this place? I thought to myself. I started trotting around and exploring. Then all of a sudden I heard a rustle in the trees! I jumped and quickly lit up my horn.

“IM NOT AFRAID TO ATTACK!” I screamed. Then I heard a cute noise.

“Pika pika!”

I was confused. No creature made that noise in Equestria! I stared in shock. Is it safe to go near the creature? I didn’t know for sure. What if it hates cookies? What if it attacks? Or worse, what if it hates STRAWBERRY MILK!? I got really worried but I had an idea! I put a bowl of cookies and strawberry milk near the bushes. Then the creature came out and ate it fast. It was the cutest creature ever! It then said,
“Pika pi?”
I was confused. What did that mean? Then the animal started making electricity. I screamed and ran away. I then bumped into another creature. A human! I never saw a real one, but all cookie ponies are born knowing what humans are. It then said,
“Hi little horse! I’m Ash! This is Pikachu! I never seen a Pokémon like you!”

I got confused. What is a Pokémon?
“I’m actually the queen of the world.”

Ash started bowing up and down and Pikachu did too. They then gave me all their money and all their food. Ash then sent out a Vaporeon that used watergun in my mouth. It was delicious. Then they made a very soft chair, and used a leaf for shade. They then put grapes in my mouth so I ate them. Ash made his Mewtwo make me a crown. They then put it on my head. Lastly, they put on music for me. I loved the relaxing attention, but I have to save my siblings.

“Uh I actually need your help.”

Ash and Pikachu then bowed and said,
“Yes your majesty. Anything for you.

“I need to find my lost siblings.”

Ash and Pikachu then took out a magikarp and made it use scan. It then saw that my siblings were in Galar! I let Ash climb on my back, and we went flying. We flew until we saw Galar. I saw a cage that has my family in there! I gasped. This must be it! We then flew down to my sisters and brothers.
“Are you ok?” I said, gasping.

The siblings nodded. I tried to use magic to free them, but it didn’t work. Ash’s Pokémon couldn’t either. There has to be someway to save them! Then all of a sudden, I heard a loud voice.
“COOKIE MILK, ASH AND PIKACHU! YOU DARE TO TRY TO STOP ME!?”

“ASH! PIKACHU! MY MAGIC DOESN’T WORK HERE! PLEASE HELP!”

Ash then gave me a Pokeball, and threw one.

“GO MEW!” He yelled.

I threw mine and a weird red and blue duck came out.

“USE HYPERBEAM!” I shouted.

The bird did exactly that, and it hurt Twishy so much, she started crying.
“OWWWWWW” she screamed.

That was easy! I was good at Pokémon too! I stepped on her hair and said,

“Let my brothers and sisters go, NOW.”

Twishy looked at me and back at the pokeballs Ash had. She stole it and said,
“GO ARTICUNO!”
Then a giant bird appeared.
“USE SCALD!”
It sprayed very hot water on us and everyone fainted except me. I knew what I had to do. “ASH! GET ZAPDOS, MEWTWO, SUICINE, AND ZAMAZTENTA AND MAKE THEM GIVE ME THEIR POWER SO I CAM DEFEAT TWISHY!” I yelled.

Ash did what he was told, and I grew taller and had water flowing hair and electric eyes. I blasted my horn and Articuno fainted really fast. Twishy did too. After that, we put her in the cage where she started crying. I brought Ash and Pikachu to the pony world with my magic. I also took the spell off my dad discord.
“WHERE AM I!?” Yelled Ash.

“Your new home!” I said. Ash looked around, and smiled. “I like it here!” He said happily.
I beamed. I defeated my first villain, and got my first friend. My siblings apologized and were nice to me forever.

Comments ( 136 )

I couldn't even finished the first chapter, I lost interest on the way it was written. Can anyone get me up to speed on what happened?

The transparency background on Pikachu for the cover art is legit.

10745863
Current theory is that it's a parody, a rather good one at that.

>wake up
>see new Rainbowmagic fic
dies of happiness

Cookiemilk looks so cool!

10746148
Honestly this is unironically good art

Well it’s better than your last story, I’ll give you that

10746381
How is Discord letting them get away with it? He could turn them into winged oranges with a snap of his claws.

10746384
They’re still under the mind control, how else?

10746384
Because Twishy forced him to love her

10746390
About time you finally admit it. That is further proof that this is a very, very unhealthy relationship.

10746391
It was Twishy not Cookieheart also cookie heart is dead

10746393
Twishy? Isn’t that a ship name?

10746397
No it’s pronounced TWISH EE

10746400
Then why does it look like a recolored Fluttershy in the story art?
And the coat is the same color is twilight’s

Seems like a fusion to me

10746384
NO he promised not to do magic

10746413
Fusion is just a cheap tactic to make weak pones stronger

10746415
It works better with gems, not ponies.

10746416
He made his kids


Bad

In this story

10746397

Ash Ketchum and cookiemilk like each other not cookie milk and Fluttershy

10746425
Ok so you make your characters torture discord, you make them Mary Sues, and you make the main character Marry ASH KETCHUM OF ALL CHARACTERS.


WHAT???

10746434
Just wait until the chapter where they turn Ash into an alicorn, ooo-eee!

10746434
10746447
I’m waiting to see if they attempt to torture Discord even more by trapping him in a Pokeball.

10746434
It’s not skuidward it’s discord and they didn’t torture them

10746457
Who the hell said anything about squidward?

10746456
They would never do that to their dad

10746464

10746434 said Discord. Can you even read?

10746467
Yet they would vandalize his statue and turn him into a chicken over minor offenses.

10746473
Milk stinks in the carpet

10746470
No they edited it

Idward is ugly

10746480
First of all, I didn’t edit it.
Second of all, no he isn’t
Third of all, learn to spell

10746481
When you spill milk, you let it go down, that means discord is letting down his daughter

10746485
Octopuses are aliens

10746485
Remember when they said they were 15 years old? :rainbowlaugh: Yeah right. Either they’re a massive troll or a five year old girl

10746490
Oml what does that have to do with anything

10746487
That doesn’t make a lick of sense

10746490
No they’re not. They’re cephalopods.

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