My name is Melody and I’m 15 years old.
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This story is a sequel to Cookiemilk & the Alternative Universe
Cookiemilk’s daughter, Milky, is going to be the new leader. Her kids will too. Sadly, the evil Nightmare Tirek destroys the cookie kingdom. Milky And her kids decide to turn the old kingdom into loops world. Will the cookie family rebuild the town? Or will they give up and end the kingdom?
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And so it continues.
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Here we go again!
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This series will be 10 stories long and I will next make a story about pinkie pie becoming an alicorn
👁👄👁
we have been blessed with another horseword compilation
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Prepare thyself for an utterly chaotic comments section!
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Pinkie becoming an alicorn is a more readable concept than this.
They sure belch and break wind a lot.
Why does this family torture discord so much?
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Agreed
Also the kingdom is now the milk kingdom
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The love it
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Perfect... Does that mean anyone who drinks apple cider is thrown in Tartarus or something?
YES, MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED WITH MORE RAINBOWMAGIC FICS
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The love it?
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Yess
Spoiler:
When loop fruit and her kid toucan rule, apple cider will be allowed
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Tysm!
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You should consider writing something for this :o
Every story submitted is another $20 donated to LGBTQ+ charities and honestly we'd be privileged to have such an esteemed and talented author participate 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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YAY
I don’t like how you worded that.
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Grr
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Yeah they love it :D
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Right.
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What happens to the lactose intolerant in this kingdom?
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They had a spell on them and they are not anymoar
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So they can cure lactose intolerance but not food allergies?
Yeah, how does that work again?
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Only Cookieheart can cure allergies she’s dead though
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Why is her kid named toucan of all names
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So why not have Cookieheart cure allergies when she was alive?
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Because she allowed milk and cookies
How old are you dear?
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That makes no sense...
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15
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15
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Ah, I see. Don't let the downvotes get you down, but this story may need to be run through an editor though it is an interesting premise.
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The farts are for people that get sad from reading
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Buddy, literally everyone gets sad just by reading crap like this.
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Yess because the cookie world was destroyed
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And not for that reason.
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Well “nightmare tirek” did us a favor by destroying the kingdom
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What’s sad about it?
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Everything else. The awful grammar, the poor characterization, the Mary Sue OC, the stinking concept.
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Exactly! Thank you!
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What’s wrong with the concept??
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Well, actually, I mean, a Mary Sue cookie alicorn could’ve been a good parody story. And maybe, just maybe it had potential for an actually good fanfic, but this is not how you do it.
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This is a story about the cookie family. They are not marry sues because their flaws are crying
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But is it enough flaws for an actually decent character? You need to add more flaws that actually hinder their “perfection” and give them more difficult hardships that they’re not able to fix in like five minutes.
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And the families flaw is they can’t make discord act good
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Really? That’s the best you can do? Hardly anyone can do that as easily as Fluttershy.
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No I mean they can’t find a punishment that will make discord not make bad mistakes