My name is Melody and I’m 15 years old.
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The lost princess of cookies, princess cookie-heart, was abused by her dad and mom. She runs away and visits Ponyville, and meets 6 new friends. Together, they defeat tons of villains! Cookieheart soon becomes the leader of the main 6, and meets Discord, her new true love. Will they marry each other? Or will the evil monsterfly take him from her?
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Please be a parody.
Please be a parody.
Please be a parody.
Please be a parody.
10744681
?
10744682
Uh... is this story a parody?
10744690
No it’s a story about my oc and how she married discord
10744692
I was afraid of that...
10744707
Ok
Literal Mary Sue fic, gross.
10744714
Grr >:v mean!!!!!!111
10744721
10744714’s got a point though. In order to have a good OC, (especially a good alicorn OC,) you have to give your character some important flaws and a believable personality, and Cookieheart has none of that.
That and you have to make their relationship with the canon characters... well, natural. By that, I mean they don’t immediately bow down and praise the OC upon seeing them.
Edit: I’m honestly starting to think that this is a trollfic though.
10744741
They bow down because they thought she was a legend and also they love cookies 🍪
And her flaw is she cries a lot
And also she is more powerful than Celestia
10744763
Smart move.
10744778
Thank you for one like 😋 I really appreciate it
No, no I refuse to believe this isn't a parody.
First, "family leader contest"? And the winner gets to be an alicorn? She's the alicorn of cookies, and you said she's stronger than Celestia... The alicorn of cookies is stronger than the one who can raise the sun and apparently turn ponies into alicorns on a whim. Also,
No, this is definitely a parody. I refuse to believe otherwise. It's actually a pretty nice parody too. I'm not usually a fan of stories like these, the ones where it's "so bad that it's good" because the intentionally bad grammar, pacing, and characters just feel annoying to me, but I actually did enjoy it.
Two likes? Best day ever!
10744812
You’re right.
Hah I deleted your comments now you can stop being mean
I see you found the delete button. Now this brings up an interesting conundrum. Do I remove my like because of your actions, or remove you from the story and judge the story for it's own quality and not the actions of the author. Normally, I wouldn't hesitate to judge both the same way, but this story's pacing and structure give me pause.
I don't think what I wrote was mean. We were simply talking about how the intentions of an author's story aren't relevant to the perspective the reader takes when looking at a story and how their own interpretations may clash with the intended point of the author's work.
>deleting comments
now that's just weak
10744827
10744829
Unfortunately, this isn’t the first time an author has resorted to this type of decision.
Here we go again.
10744827
That makes no sense
10744834
How so?
oh boy i see big red bar
I’m sorry if I’m being rude but this is worse than that one time I made a story
10744836
This wouldn't happen to be your fabled alt account, would it?
10744840
Nope.
10744841
damn. I thought I was close.
10744839
Stop being MEAAAANAN
10744842
Rainbowmagic literally just joined the site. :V
10744845
So they have. Wait, they joined today and got approved in one day?! I waited three days for one of my stories on my alt before I gave up and auto-published on my main!
10744848
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Story approvers must have a good amount of time today.
10744844
I’m not being mean. Im being honest. Just look at this!
Seriously?
I’m not trying to make you feel bad, but just admit this isn’t a great story.
10744848
They probably loved my story
10744854
It's comments like these that make me think this is a parody.
10744854
Doubt it. They don’t judge by on the content of each story, but on the grammar and readability of the story.
The grammar isn’t the worst I’ve seen, I’ll admit, but the readability is certainly questionable, to say the least.
10744851
That was a funny part! Also that’s not bad! Stop trying to make my story bad!
Such a shame. If you were smart enough to pretend This was a parody instead of a very poorly conceived troll story you might have had a genuine success on your hands.
10744862
You do know that comedy and “funny” is more than just fart jokes for the lolz, right?
i.imgflip.com/53obm2.jpg
Also, you have a lot of mistakes in this.
Discord’s eyes aren’t blue, they are yellow.
And also you made him act incredibly sensitive and immature. Farting? Seriously?
10744872
He shot Justice League over like 6 months and Zack Snyder's version isn't actually good it's just an improvement.
Unless you're making fun of him for being a bad person, which is completely Fair actually
10744873
This story is so ridiculous and filled with mistakes. I couldn’t even get through the first chapter.
You can improve and take advice, but right now you are getting mad just because people disliked.
No one is being mean to you, so please just actually take advice and stop being like that.
10744796
If you give it to yourself it doesn't actually count