(SOFT-REBOOT SEQUEL COMING *UNDETERMINED DATE*)
Welcome trainers and ponies to the world of Pokémon…
Equestrian Dimension; It was just an average everyday kind of noontime that Twilight and her friends are having a peaceful picnic, just hanging out…
Pokémon Dimension; In the Hoenn Region, a veteran teenage Pokémon Trainer named Sean and his three friends, Rosa, Brendan, and May, prepare themselves to participate in the biggest event in their world, the Pokémon International Championships…
However…
When an inter dimensional rift caused by a clash between an unseen foe and the Legendary Pokémon of Time and Space (Dialga and Palkia) appears, they, along with several other trainers and Pokémon, appear in Equestria, connecting the two worlds together for an unknown amount of time. This seemingly permanent connection brings forth powerful legends and unparalleled disasters into the peaceful country.
What adventures will be born from this adventure, and who or what is this invisible force of evil? Only Sean, Twilight, and their friends and allies can solve this mystery and end this period of unrest…
The only hope for the two worlds…
Rests on their shoulders…
I came up with the story after playing Omega Ruby... Plus, I have an idea for the story that you readers can be a part of...
Just to let you know that on Equestria's side, it takes place during season 4 in an alternate timeline that grows further away from the show's canon the further the story progresses. On the Pokemon's side, takes place strictly in my imagining of the game's universe, only a minor, repeat, MINOR, inclusion of the anime's universe.
nintendoenthusiast.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/10/mewtwo.png or rather he is here we're just guessing if it is him or not.. but it is
5796283 Pretty good guess, I cannot confirm at the moment, sadly...
Any ideas of which characters, Pokémon, etc. will appear in the next chapter?
You have a name for Rarity's newly acquired Sableye, or the possible Partner Pokémon for Twilight, Rainbow, and Applejack?
I really do need suggestions on whether or not, when I get to 'lengthy' chapters that exceed 10,000 words, should I split it in half or in sections depending on the chapter, or should I just fit them all in one 'thingy' and go as far as it can go, until it gets too ridiculously long to be in a single chapter, 'thing'...?
I ask, because, without a doubt, Chapter 8 will be another 'lengthy' chapter...
can we have mirror b show up alongside vinyl scratch.(mirror b is a character from the gamecube games, and a master of disco)
5950503 Uh…I think I'll stick with portable games, particularly ones I have played before in great detail. I've only played Pokèmon XD: Gale of Darkness for a short while, so I don't know the 'knitty-gritty' of the game itself.
A nice suggestion though…hmm…
Since the next chapter is focusing on Legendary Pokèmon, is their a particular one you want to see appear in that chapter? Sorry to say that Arceus, Groudon, Kyogre, Deoxys, and Rayquaza are to be used in chapters further ahead…
id say reshiram.
ive really wanted someone to write that. darn because i cant figure out how to do that on my own
could we at least get to see silver or his dad then?
id say reshiram.
ive really wanted someone to write that. darn because i cant figure out how to do that on my own
could we at least get to see silver or his dad then?
BLUE! this is gonna be great! Keep on writing! I LOVE THIS STORY!
Think you could use any of my OCs? Pokemon or MLP? Here's a list.
Twisted Spectra:
Species- Unicorn
Colors- orange with a Mohawk styled red, blue, and green mane/tail.
Cutie mark- A staff with a magical aura, showing his talent for mind control magic. (Perhaps he's the one behind the strange zourark?)
Ella
Species: Human
Gender: Girl
Looks: Tall for a 13 year old at around 5 foot 7 inches. She has long brown hair and light blue eyes. She always wears a light green shirt w/ a grey jacket and skinny jeans.
Characteristics- When she is helping friends, she is amazing with emotional support. She loves art and music, and aspires to be an artist while still staying as a trainer. She likes to look at the big picture of things and is very imaginative, but never likes to listen to others.
Team and moves:
Midnight- Umbreon. Moves: Moonlight, shadow ball, physic, take down, tackle
Freedom- Braviary. Moves: close combat, fly, Ariel ace, brave bird, roost
Velvet- Shiny Ninetails. Moves: Morning sun, flamethrower, will-o-wisp, inferno, overheat.
Psy- Alakazam. Moves: physic, Physhock, shadow ball, psycho cut, recover
Lassie- Lapras. Moves: Surf, Ice Beam, Hydro Pump, Water Pulse, Thunderbolt
Dash- Rapidash. Moves: Bounce, Fire Blast, Flare Blitz, Stomp, Flamethrower
Dang this was a long comment. Also, a name for Raritys Sableye. How about Topaz?
6011040 I PM'ed you about your OCs…
Best you read that for the subject of your characters…
Excusez-moi pendant que je vais me tuer.
6108399 Why do you want to kill yourself, necessarily?
Is it the length?
The plotline?
The action?
What is it?
6108933 Eh bien, à mon avis, un crossover devrait pas être fait de telle manière. HIE devrait pas être fait dans un crossover. Je crois que la fusion des deux univers (comme une place importante ou d'une région de la franchise désirée, ainsi qu'un (quelques-uns) caractère(s) ponified), serait plus approprié. Ceci est fanfiction, pas Mortal Kombat X DC Universe.
6108933 Aussi, ce qui avec le sexe et gore? Sauf si un entraîneur a décidé de violer Pinkie Pie ou vice versa, je ne vois aucune nécessité de telles étiquettes. Sans compter que Pokémon a pas de sang ou de l'enclave envalved, ni ne MLP: FIM. Je comprends que je semblent agir très offensive, mais ne comprends que je suis tout simplement essayer de vous aider à devenir un meilleur écrivain.
Deathwing. I see what you did there
6109501 Eh...I tried to be a little different from what most writers put in, if a human comes to Equestria, they usually stick with one, but if multiple people come to Equestria, they turn them into either humans or pokemon. I also wanted it to crisscross between Equestria and Earth multiple times, something I don't think is done before...
I simply wanted to stand out from some other authors who have done Pokémon crossovers, really be unique. Sorry if I am failing in that regard, plus, my explanation for why no human is turned into a Pokémon or a pony, it is because of that clash in the SpaceTime Rift that absolutely shattered the barriers that would have done that, world transfusion thing...
6109514 Oh, the Sex and Gore labels are there because there will be rather bloody violence and rather sexual jokes and moments further along in the story. So far, I see what you mean, but if you simply breezed through this story, you might have missed a few parts that definitely merit the Gore label, and a few that would suggest the Sex label, but I understand and will do better. But, Kellyn is suppose to really kick in that Sex label, because he is a pervert, and he will definitely do perverted things in the future...
I don't find you offensive, I find your criticism very helpful, I would definitely need that for another story of mine, and I would like to know if you want chapters that are around +10,000 words in one go, or if you would like them to be split into sections. That is what I really need to know now...
6110389 Glad you liked Deathwing, but, what did I exactly do to merit a 'I see what you did there', please tell me, and also tell me if you want long chapters, or segmented chapters...Please...
6111070 I'm just going to use English to make it easier on everyone.
1. The Sex label is for if there actually is any written-out sexual intercourse between the characters. So unless there's some sweet milky-milky in there somewhere, I'd say that the Sex label on here is inappropriate. You may put the Mature label, but even that may be an overstatement for this.
2. I'd say an appropriate length for a chapter would be 1,000 - 10,000, but 1,000 is only if you feel confident you will succeed.
I'd say a good chapter is around 5,000-10,000 words long.
Grrr... That's a smack in the face right there. I saw that Rarity named the Sableye "Topaz" and I was so happy. I was all like "Omg that's what I said to name him!" And then your like "nah bruh that's a GIRLS name!"
6112701 I actually thought Topaz was a very clever name, but the characters wouldn't think so, Rarity's Sableye being a male in all. I really couldn't see a male given a female name, but, I'll name another's Sableye Topaz if you want…
Sorry about that…
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Ya see Deathwing is the name of a villain in my favorite video game World of Warcraft, hes the final boss of the cataclysm expansion (Just Google his name). as to answer your second question i do prefer the long chapters but i dont mind short ones. P.S always looking forward to an update.
6113953 Oh yeah! That guy...
Never played W.o.W., and I never want to, but, I have read about Deathwing before...
But, when creating Deathwing the Charizard, I was looking at a spin-off game where I nicknamed a Charizard Deathwing, but couldn't really remember why...
Thanks for your opinion on the chapter's length, and I don't usually post 'update chapters', once in a while maybe...
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Nah, I was just making a joke about that. It's your story, I was just pulling your leg a little.
This is why I favorited this story. Haven't read it in a while. It is still as good as I remember!
I don't know why but I want Hanty and that Sableye to go maga or at least the pons to find maga stones
I know the sableye is male but what about Quartz
that battle was close.
Also holy
6902673 No worries about that...The Mane Six will have at least one Pokémon that can Mega Evolve, since I am going to give each of them an entire team. Twilight is so far, the only one yet to obtain a Partner Pokémon, and I want it to be a species that would be unexpected. The ponies will Mega Evolve their Pokémon, just haven't decided when...
6903685 I like it...Quartz...that might be Rarity's Sableye's official name...
I suppose it was a close battle...but Sean and Rosa did have it planned out ahead, even without the happy surprises for their side...
6919293 I was talking about the cmc gym battle but ok
6919529 Boy do I feel stupid now...
6920905 that was my fault, I didn't clarify what battle
So will Keldeo and the Swords of Justice ever make an appearance? Just wondering.
Update! So cool! Can't wait for more, man!
Why did you make the eleventh chapter so long?
7467482 Would come a lot sooner if I had help writing the chapters...But, am pleased you liked it and are eager for more...
7467489 If I'm perfectly honest, when I first began writing, it became obvious that it would take more than one chapter to write it out. I wound up writing more than I intended, mostly because of the battles and describing certain events that have transpired...
I'm sorry if they're so long...
Womanizer Kyurem is best Kyurem.
Do you plan to continue this story I saw it was on Hiatus and I'm just wondering
Senpai mostly refers to a fellow student that is seen as a surperior due to being advanced in what you and who you refer to as Senpai learn, I think?
What was said in Japanese I couldn't read it
Silvally?
A few typos I noticed:
Your
you're
*calculates*
*sigh*
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Thank's for catching those...I'll correct them now...
You definitely did them justice.
I can't believe you actually used my sugested name for Rarity's sableye
Hmmm interesting, I like it so far and keep in mind these are just my personal opinions but I think if you're going to have music in the story you should try using links so it doesn't brake you out of the story, also fluttershy should be able to understand all animals so poke-speak should be no different but again these are just my personal opinions
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Helpful tips...
A lot of the music titles don't have links to specify that I'm referring to the original compositions and where one can find them. Like for instance, if I put down (-[Final Battle! (Rival) - Pokémon Red and Blue]-), I'm referring to the original theme from the games and not a remix that's EVERYWHERE on the Internet. I'd provide a link to a specific remix if need be (provided it isn't taken down or terminated), otherwise you'll be looking for the original, non-remixed version of the song.
As for Fluttershy understanding Pokespeech, I have three words to counter your argument...
"Vampire...Fruit...Bats..."
She explained that it would take a while to learn their language so she could speak to them since the episode they were introduced in was her canonical first encounter with the Vampire Fruit Bats. I can guarantee that later on, she would learn how to understand the language of not only Pokémon, but other creatures as well...
If you have any more opinions or ideas (that won't interfere with the story or cause anti-shipping resentment) I'd like to hear them, especially since I'm struggling a bit on writing out the story at the moment...
I'm eagerly awaiting your reply...
I hope to see the next Chapter soon. cuss I love this story so far. keep it up.
it is awesome some of my favorite pokemon protagonist are here. like Gold-Sean Red Ash Twilight Pinkie RD Silver Cynthia Steven. then bad guys turn good. N Giovonni. now bad bad guys Cyriss Tirek and i hope for Lysander or Guzma to appear, will the sun and moon Protagonist show up. cuss they can be used as a source of getting home. with Solgolao or Lunala. it wood awesome.
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I am glad you approved of the characters included. There will be more coming soon, including some "original" (Not in the way you're thinking of original) characters to be added later, some of whom would be introduced in a side-story compilation I'm currently making...
It's kind of glossed over even during Sean's backstory that covers Soul Silver, Platinum, White, White 2, X & Y, but Lysandre is implied that he died trying to kill the trainers with the ultimate weapon. Spoilers, Lysandre did die in his attempt to kill Sean, and is likely never going to return...
Guzma, and the protagonist, correction, PROTAGONISTS, of Sun, Moon, Ultra Sun, Ultra Moon won't really make an appearance in this story. They would make an appearance in a special side story that does take place in Alola (Hawaii in the story's universe) that I'm trying to write.
There is a way that the characters are going home, but it's not with Solgaleo & Lunala, the next part of Chapter 14 will show you how...
hey good guess right.
I like this swell. I agree with the other person about flutters and being able to understand them. Also, will either lucario learn telepathy? Don't answer that question. Just asking