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Meteor_Mirage


I write about horses and other creatures kissing. The gayest of kissing

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Due to events entirely out of his control, Spike finds himself grounded in the middle of a move. Now with most of his distractions in the newly grown Golden Oaks Library II, he realizes just how scarce his options truly are.

Well, at least he finds company to keep himself from getting too lonely.

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Well this was a fun read, with this unusual ship, keep up the good work

Very cute. I used to love me some RumbleSpike back in the day. Hell, there aren't enough Spike/Similarly aged ponies in general.

Although, a few things were unclear. For starters, you may want to establish how a new tree library was built, rather than just saying it is. Also:

leaving the warm, wooden walls of his bedroom for the cold, crystalline labyrinth of the castle.

This makes it sound like he's in the tree library already. If he's still in the crystal castle, how are the walls wooden?

Either way, very adorable. The world needs more Ghey!Spike.

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Ah, that's one thing I need to work on. Establishing things.

In my head I figured that the castle provided Spike a room he was comfortable with, hence being similar to the tree library, but I guess I couldn't find a comfortable place to put that information in there.

As for the new treebrary, I just wanted to move past it because I couldn't figure out how to explain it. I just really miss it. :raritydespair:

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As for the new treebrary, I just wanted to move past it because I couldn't figure out how to explain it. I just really miss it. :raritydespair:

Potential material for a prequel, methinks?
;)

Fun story, by the way!

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Eh, we'll see. Only if it means writing more Spike/Rumble.

ooooh. interesting

adorable !!

Aldon #8 · Feb 14th, 2021 · · 1 ·

Awwwww this was extremely cute...hope to see more of these two hehehe

To the author - i saw this in 'new stories' section & had to read it.
there's only one chapter!?! i want more:flutterrage:
love the inclusion with flash sentry having interest in stallions or is just bi curious

so this fic is set around S9 because spike talks with rumble about the school of friendship?

note: message was written several hours ago on 2/12/21

Faaantastic

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