Gallus lays upon the empty beach of Mount Aris.
But it quickly becomes less empty.
Written for both the Thousand Words Contest II for Slice of Life.
As well as a last-minute entry for the May Pairings 2023 Contest.
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I write about horses and other creatures kissing. The gayest of kissing
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Just two guys chilling on a beach, 6 feet apart because they're not gay. Oh, wait. Maybe they are. Who can say, really?
Cute little story, nice work :)
It is the language he's most fluent in.
Nice little story. I like how you leave a fair bit of it open to interpretation.
Awww that's a pretty cute story and it's always nice to see Silver Streams little brother Terramar not a lot of stories about him that much since his first appearances back in season 8 but it was a nice conversation between these two and I like it keep up the good work
A short and sweet little story. Feels like there could be more, a story within a story about why Gallus is on Mount Aris to begin with.
Whoa!
I like seeing Gallus and Terramar interact.
Interesting coalescence of his half-cattiness and established claustrophobia. Makes a lot of sense for him, and you executed it really well.
Nice little interaction between these two. Kudos!
Little sweet story like a bon bon before bed. Thanks for sharing.
aww, he is not a hippogriff! no reason to find the water anything other than cold and not for birds
that does explain why Twilight and friends did not immediately die of hypothermia in the icy sunless depths
aww, poor lovable cringe griffon
make sense! what is the ocean if not a giant bathtub
yay, friendship! and definitely getting GallBar dynamic feels here, which makes sense since i could easily see Terramar as a Sandbar-type. their names even rhyme!
”How many fish are in there?”
“I couldn’t even guess. Millions?”
“And where does their crap go?”
“… So, want any company?”
Nice bit of expanding the “cat hates water” joke into full-on thalassophobia, but the story still feels kind of padded out... yet it still feels like it stops before the story's actual ending. You probably could’ve pared down the narration and description a bit to free up some word count. Still, thank you for an enjoyable beach tale. I especially appreciated the rare character interaction.