Silverstream loves her friends more than anything in the world. She wants for them to be happy all the time. But when she notices a lack of family getting in the way of Gallus's happiness, she makes it her mission to fix that. How will she fix it? Simple. Just let him share hers! All she has to do is convince her family that Gallus would make the perfect addition to it. Oh, and not tell them about her motives in the process, since it's going to be a surprise after all.
Of course, because she's being so secretive about it, the other parties involved can't help but misinterpret her intentions on trying to sell Gallus to her family....
Chapters (2)
Okay. That premise is adorable.
This fanfic is cute so far, and you’ve nailed Silverstream’s voice. This part is oddly-worded, though:
I would recommend removing “to realize”.
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the whole thing's adorable, you mean
This is going to be interesting.
'Headmare' is one word fyi
This is so cute! Like, seriously, this is the most wholesome thing I've ever read on this site! I wonder if things will go according to plan for Silverstream...probably not. But anyway, you've got my attention! Can't wait to see where you take this!
It’s as though someone distilled essence of Pinkie Pie and Cadence and then injected them into a sea bird. That’s basically Silverstream.
Silverstream I love you, but you can be a real airhead some times... Never change.
This was really nice, keep it up
Everything about this is so in-character for Silverstream. The narration, the dialect, the goal, the motivation, and even the airheaded lack of foresight. This is so cute and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Talk about coming on strong.
Oh boy, this is going to be great!
I feel really bad for Gallus though, that crushing self doubt is really not great.
I really hope this all turns out well.
Adorable!
I'm pretty sure Silverstream's parents have a long distance relationship instead of divorced. I'm mean Silverstream did say that some Hippogriffs preferred being underwater. Plus, Ocean Flow is Queen Novo's sister so while Novo is on land running things, Ocean Flow helps out in Seaquestria.
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I'm never gonna elaborate on whether or not Sky Beak and Ocean Flow are divorced or not. Let's face it, Surf and/or Turf felt like it was meant to be about a child dealing with divorced parents. But I'll never give a direct answer to that question here, leave it to the reader's interpretation.
Regardless, I did feel like it was natural for Gallus to assume that. He knows so little about families in the first place. He didn't even know what cousins were.
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Yeah, it's natural for Gallus to assume it
Oh I am loving all of this! XD
Oh, geez. I can already tell this is going to get awkward. I’m SO ready.
*Griffonstone
this is too adorable
we need more of this. now.
Loving the story. This most go on.
My guess for what is coming:
I can see her family hearing Silverstream asking their permission for Gallus to join the family, and thinking that she is asking for them to sign allowing her to marry young. I know States that allow people under 18 (some as young as 14.....0_0 with judge approval) to marry with parental/guardian approval.
Silverstream going on her honeymoon back to the school without understanding she is marred would be a funny sight.
Ocellus: *Looks at paper Sliverstream hands her.* "Silverstream ... This is not an adoption certificate."
Silverstream: "Yes it is. Gallus even called my parents mom and dad after signing, and my other bother Terramar said he is happy to have a big brother now. Plus, Starlight is moving us to the same room like brother and sister."
Ocellus: "...."
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Ok, that made me have a good chuckle, but not quite what I want to do. Next chapter we will see another dynamic of confusion go up
O my god i her so scary when I read this. Context: y read using google translator and when Gallus says “more insecure abut my high” it translate has “more insecure abut my drug addiction”. My face was like WTF
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Lol sorry my foreign friend. That has to be the funniest way to catch a spelling error tho
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Well is not technically a spelling error is more like a translation error. Funny detail I accidentally recharged this page and when I use the translator again it translate in the correct way
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No it was a spelling error, I fixed it
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Oh, well thanks for fixing it
When is the next update
This is TOTALLY something I could see Silver doing. And that’s why she’s best young 6.
Hey man how's everything?
When is the next update I am really anxious saw it
To get the same end goal of getting Gallus to be a part of your family (without the hurtles of being able to provide, or your parents ever meeting him), is marriage.
Also, if you're eloping to anywhere, then you can show back up to Seaquestria already married.
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I'm not sure if I should interpret that as funny or depressing.
Maybe chuckle as a single sad tear goes down my face?
The hippogriffs named their mountain after the Greek god of War?
The hippogriffs suddenly became really metal!
Hey, how is everything okay? I want more. At least, you have had summer online classes and now fall classes, if you're still going to school. Also, here's a Rainbow for you. 🌈
Cute profile pic and story! Please make more!